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Lethal Kahn 06-08-04 03:15 AM

Lethal Kahn vs. Black Haze
 
10-16 lines max.
No hate, crew, d/r votes
No biting
No recycling
Blind Spit

Deadline: Thursday 2 am - Eastern Time

Spit bitch!

Black Haze DQ'ed for biting

I'll smack you wit a backhand
That crack your back like chiropractors after lookin at your catscan
In between albums, I've become a masked man like Batman


from Cannibus: http://display.lyrics.astraweb.com:...0_bc%2E%2Echaos


Black Haze 06-08-04 11:59 AM

u spit first faggot u set it up n made da rules

Black Haze 06-08-04 12:13 PM

matta fact i'll spit first this is ma check in

Black Haze 06-08-04 01:27 PM

I'll smack you wit a backhand...
That crack your back like chiropractors after lookin at your catscan...
In between freestyles I've become a masked man like Batman...

God forbid, i cut dis dude up like fried squid...
Misguided, n unproviided call me da ko kid...
Nigga i aint gonn lose 5-0 like sinista did...

Dis prick sux dickz on chix fo porno flix...
im bout to b banned from RB fo bein too sick...
im chop u up to pieces n pick ya up wit chopsticks...
if u came out a doggs ass u still woodn't b shit...

metafours is metafives, dey on anotha level...
im big stonez n boulders dis dude is fruity pebblez...

im from da east but i drop dimes in da south...
im prime in da house,im bigtime n u small like a mouse...
n u cood ask lethal its hard to talk wit a nine in yo mouth...
if derre was a ref fo dis battle he'd b like time the fuk out..

a yo dis kids too sick his shit slick like mayo..
haze is harrassin lethal he shood b in jail like wit yayo...
dis dude is wack as hell dis will b a ez KO...

im sick on keyboard man i hack nerdz...
fo me itz ok n but fo u its ok backwardz...

letz goooooooooooooooooo

Black Haze 06-08-04 01:34 PM

im sick on keyboard man i hack nerdz...
fo me itz ok n but fo u its ok backwardz...(im gonna KO him)

Black Haze 06-08-04 01:35 PM

o yea 25 mo minz till ya deadline

DeaDly RhymeZ 01 06-08-04 02:06 PM

He Said AM ya Dumb Dick












lol nice spit

funny aas hell but yet did i getthe part about the Sinista

he lost to Lethal Kahn or Soomee 1 else

Black Haze 06-08-04 10:04 PM

ooooooooooooooo

Lethal Kahn 06-09-04 02:45 AM

I have 'till the deadline...

..I'llspit sometime soon. Be on the lookout, bitch.

Black Haze 06-09-04 08:54 AM

a yo u still havent spit wutz good u chokin or sumtin??? its way past two A.M is dis a KO lolz J/P but god damn cood u take ne longer

Lethal Kahn 06-09-04 02:23 PM

I got a fuckin' L.L.L. Jr. tourney on the other RB. So chill...

...Ima key my verse right NOW!

Lethal Kahn 06-09-04 06:43 PM

Yo I'm really sorry dawg...

...I had to go somewhere.

I didn't even write my verse for this battle, fuck it, I'll do it now while typing. I'll post really soon, 30 min. max, anyway the deadline's tomorrow...

...but I'll do it now.

Lethal Kahn 06-09-04 07:00 PM

Any last words, bitch?

I know ur tremblin from fear, wonderin what I can do
please, for God's sake!...
...a fuckin cow has a higher IQ than U!
Leave u bruised, stop ur blood flowin through ur veins
Battlin u on a message board?...
...didn't know I was playin board games!*
Damn bitch, you don't lack wackness at all!
actin' like a man but...
...umm do u even have a pair of balls?!
Sorry ass batman, shit I'm a whole fuckin army
u get clowned so much...
...people mistake u for a birthday party!**
Warmin up, im fuckin ready to "hoe him"
ur the reason why...
...we're gona open the "Elevation" forum!
Before I'm done, I'll give u some advice friend
dont get confused...
...and take this as a beginning, to your end!

* - He's like a game to me, so I'm just playin' him lol.

** - He gets "clowned" like a birthday party, since people treat him like shit.

My job's done...

...let's get some votes.

Lethal Kahn 06-10-04 03:05 AM

Uppin'

Black Haze 06-10-04 10:25 AM

even tho u took 2 dayz good shyt ( i coodve wrote betta in two days)

uppppppppppppppppppin 4 votes

Lethal Kahn 06-10-04 05:10 PM

^^I told you I wrote it in half an hour. We'll battle some other time, only 20 min. to spit. Aight? But later...

Uppin'

DeaDly RhymeZ 01 06-10-04 05:19 PM

Lethal Kahn Fuckin Whack ass Played Rhymez dumby

.::N-Sight::. 06-11-04 10:14 AM

I'll smack you wit a backhand...
That crack your back like chiropractors after lookin at your catscan...
In between freestyles I've become a masked man like Batman...

^^ One problem, CATSCANS are for the BRAIN...

a yo dis kids too sick his shit slick like mayo..
haze is harrassin lethal he shood b in jail like wit yayo...
dis dude is wack as hell dis will b a ez KO...

im sick on keyboard man i hack nerdz...
fo me itz ok n but fo u its ok backwardz...

^^^ The structure looks strange, but it flows well enough...up complexity in metas/wordplay and punches

I know ur tremblin from fear, wonderin what I can do
please, for God's sake!...
...a fuckin cow has a higher IQ than U!
Leave u bruised, stop ur blood flowin through ur veins
Battlin u on a message board?...
...didn't know I was playin board games!*
Damn bitch, you don't lack wackness at all!
actin' like a man but...
...umm do u even have a pair of balls?!


^^ More weird structure...flow is de decent...some funny lines...but they lack complexity...up wordplay



Vote: Black for being slightly more complex and having slightly harder hitting punches


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DeLeon 06-11-04 10:14 AM

I'll smack you wit a backhand...
That crack your back like chiropractors after lookin at your catscan...
In between freestyles I've become a masked man like Batman...

God forbid, i cut dis dude up like fried squid...
Misguided, n unproviided call me da ko kid...
Nigga i aint gonn lose 5-0 like sinista did...

Dis prick sux dickz on chix fo porno flix...
im bout to b banned from RB fo bein too sick...
im chop u up to pieces n pick ya up wit chopsticks...
if u came out a doggs ass u still woodn't b shit...

metafours is metafives, dey on anotha level...
im big stonez n boulders dis dude is fruity pebblez...

im from da east but i drop dimes in da south...
im prime in da house,im bigtime n u small like a mouse...
n u cood ask lethal its hard to talk wit a nine in yo mouth...
if derre was a ref fo dis battle he'd b like time the fuk out..

a yo dis kids too sick his shit slick like mayo..
haze is harrassin lethal he shood b in jail like wit yayo...
dis dude is wack as hell dis will b a ez KO...

im sick on keyboard man i hack nerdz...
fo me itz ok n but fo u its ok backwardz...

some nice shit.....i dont even think i need to post the other verse
this was a merk.... i give this shit a 7.5/10
your punches hit harder....had some personals metas were aight
overall flow was better..


I know ur tremblin from fear, wonderin what I can do
please, for God's sake!...
...a fuckin cow has a higher IQ than U!
Leave u bruised, stop ur blood flowin through ur veins
Battlin u on a message board?...
...didn't know I was playin board games!*
Damn bitch, you don't lack wackness at all!
actin' like a man but...
...umm do u even have a pair of balls?!
Sorry ass batman, shit I'm a whole fuckin army
u get clowned so much...
...people mistake u for a birthday party!**
Warmin up, im fuckin ready to "hoe him"
ur the reason why...
...we're gona open the "Elevation" forum!
Before I'm done, I'll give u some advice friend
dont get confused...
...and take this as a beginning, to your end!
6/10 you had some nice punches but black hit harder
vote-black haze

DeLeon 06-11-04 10:17 AM

oh yeah and drop an honest one on this......


http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=128588

Lethal Kahn 06-13-04 08:35 AM

Quote:
Originally Posted by DeaDly RhymeZ 01
Lethal Kahn Fuckin Whack ass Played Rhymez dumby

No wonder you quit from the Original RB, coz you keep losing.

Check your sig if you don't know what I mean, dumbass.

Lethal Kahn 06-14-04 12:13 PM

Uppin'...

...let's get some votes.

Lethal Kahn 06-14-04 04:09 PM

Uppin'...

...c'mon, I ripped him...

Lethal Kahn 06-15-04 04:12 AM

Uppin'...

...drop a link and I'll return the vote.

Lethal Kahn 06-15-04 10:04 AM

Get up

Lethal Kahn 06-17-04 02:15 PM

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Lethal Kahn 06-18-04 08:59 PM

Uppin' like no other..............................

Tempa 06-18-04 09:20 PM

Yo that wasn't a bad battle. But cha boi black haze took tha cake. He had better structure and vocab. And on top of all of that his flowz was ill.

Vote - Black Haze

Wordz AhGod 06-19-04 02:29 AM

Black Haze Bit His first few lines, so thats automatic points off. the rest was ok, dont know were it was written or not but It good enough to beat his apponent. It also helped alot that he explained his last punch. though I belive he could've done a lot better becouse I've seen his shit befor.

Lethal Kahn was ok but he was stumblin over his words. His verse was too hard to read and I took about 2 min just to try to figuer out why he Bolds his words when they dont ryme wit each other or anything like that. His Birthday party line was weak and needed improvement.

V/ Black Haze
P.S. Quit biting shit, one day it'll end up doing the same back. U good enough to beat some one wit Ur original rymes, Just try harder son.

Wordz AhGod 06-19-04 02:32 AM

Cannibus wrote the first part of black haze's verse, look it for Ur selves.

Lethal Kahn 06-20-04 05:40 PM

Wack ass voters...

Lethal Kahn 06-20-04 08:55 PM

Uppin'

KillaCamFlow 06-20-04 10:09 PM

Urmm im gonna have ot give this battle to black haze.....he worte it fast but..i think he won this battle...His rhymes were not the ebst but they were more complex and i think he hit wit a few personals ..and i think they hit you ok...i guess......now for letha;....it took u 2 dayz to write u rhyme???come on u can do better then that i hope.....But ya black won wit his struc flow and complex......alirhgt battle

Wordz AhGod 06-21-04 12:26 AM

Black Haze Bit off of Cannibus and dats why his first Bars sound like that. He did'nt think befor he wrote that shit. IF U know about Cannibus(N Site wit the Cannibus avature) Ud know that Im right

FlowIntelligent. 06-21-04 12:42 AM

blak: with all the freeposting you do i thought you would be weak....but your verse was good...only thing really wrong with it was your structure...wasnt feelin that but you had some funny lines in there good meta's and good wordplay...

fave line :
metafours is metafives, dey on anotha level...
im big stonez n boulders dis dude is fruity pebblez

^^lmfao

overall : 8/10

lethal...you came pretty weak you didnt have too many hard punches some were just dumb and some were played...your structure was better than blaq's...but amazingly his verse was more complex...which is a dissapointment cuz your verse looked like it was gonna be hott until i read it....

fave line:
Sorry ass batman, shit I'm a whole fuckin army
u get clowned so much...
...people mistake u for a birthday party!**

^^good shyt and funny

overall : 6.5/10

vote: black

~!1!~

FlowIntelligent. 06-21-04 12:44 AM

eyedenty show proof that black bit and show strobe it will be one less freeposter on this board...u gotta find a link to the webpage where the lyrics are tho if u cant find it jus give me some info and ill find it


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