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plustwo vs. c.g.
aight the rules are:
10 lines max no feeding no biting no d/r votes no h8 votes no crew votes ill spit first u right after me good luck :thumbup: |
sorry dawg can u spit first i g2g n have ma tea ill be back in bout 20 mins... peace.
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aight imma post now sorry bout the w8 i had to have ma tea....
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ok....
ayo what were you thinkin with the name c g// you aint nothin, you aint even a proper mc// when you read these rhymes you see im alot better// don't forget to ask your mum if she got her love letter// yo y u bein like this you shouldn't be confused// ive read a couple of your lines they are so overused// ill take out my 9 n empty a clip in your heart// you can let go of that thing now, your imagenary part// id stop sleeping around someone will get infected// DAMN u ugly im suprised i aint bin rejected// i dont' even have to give my best cos u might choke// you are forgettin your only a practical joke// sorry bout the w8 i couldn't think of n e thin 2 say really lol... |
oooooooooooooooo he said where u at C.G. lolz ya need to hurry up n battle
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Yo dis nigga must think he toonice but i'm da grim reaper comin 2 snatch up ya life//
Funny guy thinkin he can get it wit me put 2 from da chrome 2 ya dome and merk out ya wife// Dumb bitch u neva ready my lines cuz i haven't dropped yet but da flames i spit at u leave ya heart in cardiac arrest// No need for me 2 wear da bulletproof vest cuz i got 12 slugs comin right 4 ya chest// Beat ya fuckin face until u black and blue have u lookin like Michael Jackson after da 1st nose job, a bloody mess dude// why u even come in dis battle cuz me plustwo guns = trouble 4 u// Yea i know when u die to kiss ya moms on her head put my nine b/w her legs and shoot str8 thru her head// |
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plustwo
ayo what were you thinkin with the name c g// you aint nothin, you aint even a proper mc// 7 o(ok opner) when you read these rhymes you see im alot better// don't forget to ask your mum if she got her love letter// 8 yo y u bein like this you shouldn't be confused// ive read a couple of your lines they are so overused// 9 ill take out my 9 n empty a clip in your heart// you can let go of that thing now, your imagenary part// 8 id stop sleeping around someone will get infected// DAMN u ugly im suprised i aint bin rejected// 7 i dont' even have to give my best cos u might choke// you are forgettin your only a practical joke// 6 (ok closer) overall:45/60 C.G. Yo dis nigga must think he toonice but i'm da grim reaper comin 2 snatch up ya life// Funny guy thinkin he can get it wit me put 2 from da chrome 2 ya dome and merk out ya wife// 9.5 (good opner) Dumb bitch u neva ready my lines cuz i haven't dropped yet but da flames i spit at u leave ya heart in cardiac arrest// No need for me 2 wear da bulletproof vest cuz i got 12 slugs comin right 4 ya chest// 8 Beat ya fuckin face until u black and blue have u lookin like Michael Jackson after da 1st nose job, a bloody mess dude// why u even come in dis battle cuz me plustwo guns = trouble 4 u// 7 Yea i know when u die to kiss ya moms on her head put my nine b/w her legs and shoot str8 thru her head// 6 overall:30.5/40 vote:as it gos C.G. has it hope you return the favor link in siggy |
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plus-aight spit...Lil aight
need lots of work on readin catagories thing....Balance and structure was aight C.G-Pretty good..Work on alot of things though to improve..Metaphores was there but not the similies..Balance was stabled v/C.G. Return thre favor please in this http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=128356 |
ayo what were you thinkin with the name c g// you aint nothin, you aint even a proper mc// ok opener nothing special when you read these rhymes you see im alot better// don't forget to ask your mum if she got her love letter// aight.... yo y u bein like this you shouldn't be confused// ive read a couple of your lines they are so overused// ok..... ill take out my 9 n empty a clip in your heart// you can let go of that thing now, your imagenary part// alright punch..... id stop sleeping around someone will get infected// DAMN u ugly im suprised i aint bin rejected// WTF!!.......... i dont' even have to give my best cos u might choke// you are forgettin your only a practical joke// nice closer score:6.5/10 C.G. Yo dis nigga must think he toonice but i'm da grim reaper comin 2 snatch up ya life// Funny guy thinkin he can get it wit me put 2 from da chrome 2 ya dome and merk out ya wife// nice opener Dumb bitch u neva ready my lines cuz i haven't dropped yet but da flames i spit at u leave ya heart in cardiac arrest// No need for me 2 wear da bulletproof vest cuz i got 12 slugs comin right 4 ya chest// ha ha nice.... Beat ya fuckin face until u black and blue have u lookin like Michael Jackson after da 1st nose job, a bloody mess dude// why u even come in dis battle cuz me plustwo guns = trouble 4 u// nice personal..... Yea i know when u die to kiss ya moms on her head put my nine b/w her legs and shoot str8 thru her head// not feelin this onw.. score:7.5/10 vote=CG drop an honest one on this http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=128606[/ |
CG you didnt poll your vote and add more to your vote becuz its going to get DQed...Do what I did when I voted in here....State the names and tell what they didnt wrong...Not juss no one sentence....Like 3 lines on each perosn to talk about what they didnt or liked.....Now please do that
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=128356 |
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ummm..........aight Plustwo wasn't feeling your drop too much did
you even try?????? well anywayz c.g. I give this to you because I liked every single punch better than Plustwo's entire drop......... big up to c.g you get my vote as you can see |
Pl's line about the love letter was funny and well placed. Some of the other stuff wasn't tight to me simply because it wasn't true. Like, the fact that he had never actually read any of CG's stuff and stuff like that. By the way...never admit you didn't have anything to say aiight.
CG, you basically called Pl on all his mistakes, which is what battling is all about, so big ups. Fun battle to read. Good structure on both your parts. Keep it hot y'all. v/CG |
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