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big kountry v. Lil trip
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homie..
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20-30 Minutes to Spit After Check in 10 Lines (5 Bars) Minimum 20 Lines (10 Bars) Maximum Spit starts when both checked in... Those where rules posted, Spittin starts when both checked in.. "Checked in..', start spittin after you checked in bro.. |
check in man lets spit........................................
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U "Overseas" bitch like yo Budgeted team trip don' lose to no Memphis Grizzlie
pussy "Big Kountry.' attemptin to take the Image of the NBA's Bryant Reeves? Join the WNBA cus yo the past im the future n im reppin more June your May Lines equal wins n yours continue to fade how U reach 04' n havnt been laid? Im the "Dealer" of this game n i gotta battle a No name n not even get paid? "Jokers" don deserve to be saved enjoy sleepin "Suits" Thanks to my "Spade" Pumpin you wit lead before i Break yo knees for dinner as Trips breaks bread Freestyle 101 the Bachelors "Med" lyrics bringin Encisions n Pinks all you shed yo a wannabe a joke you want this niggas "Brown..' Blunt to smoke Take the mic like yo moms sniffs Trips "Coke" n learn to gag huff n "choke" Homies pop this nigga cause his demise or at least shut his lips to cover lies thinks he deserves a prize cus he out "Spat" his mom n won a Kinder-Surprise Aint in lyrical heaven cus its yo first spit wit someone past the post count of 7 Fistin yo boi devon or continue learnin to bang yo idols off "finger-11" Call me trips kelly ima carry venom put you in yo place n pea in yo face Trips got you on chase be like yo Dads "Siemen" ima leave without a trace.. holla back |
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Too lines are interchanged, the first line should be where the second line is don kno why it came out that way, whatever..: pussy "Big Kountry.' attemptin to take the Image of the NBA's Bryant Reeves? U "Overseas" bitch like yo Budgeted team trip don' lose to no Memphis Grizzlie Should be like that, holla back wit some love peace.. |
dam once agian i was handed an easy win...
this is not a track for these cats to bump... i want them to skip, cuz hes a gay on cruse of a cock.... taking a 'lil trip', Claiming your a vet, thats a statment to dismiss "not long ago"..YOU WERE ..."Typing"!~Like this/// Plus he can't take pressure, so i had to gave him some time... To amaze us...by stretching ten to twenty...into 27 lines!, wow this kid wanted said 20 lines dam that is crazy, but i dont feel like typing, merked you in 12, now thats lazy, Man your shits out of style, Your game's old..no doubt, Only time people thought of you being hip, Is when i popped it out, I am doing this for HYPNOTIC, so watch the truth unfold everyone knows you are the wackest in your crew............................... no reason to outline it in bold... It's just a freaken battle homeless kid, that's enough weeping, ..You see I owned this kid before...he just wasn't worth keeping! merked bitch :nono: |
aight...
uppin fo votes, give some honest love n feedback n vote peace...
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yo leave links favor will be returned come on drop some votes
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alright...the first verse..was awful.....I couldn't stand reading that...i quit 3 times through..but than decided I would be being unfair to big kountry....I have nothing to say about that verse what so ever...I'm not tryin to be rude...you have potential..but that just wasn't good..sorry homie
Big kountry...i wasnt too fond of your verse either...i realize you probably felt that you didn't need to bring it...so thats cool...but don't sleep on cats THAT much...some people don't know how to vote...and if there isn't that much of a distinct difference between the verses..they tend to guess vote..or go with the others have been voting for..anyways..no hate...keep bangin vote:big kountry |
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ayo you from the south lil trip if not stop posing as lil flip that just gay.
but anyway the battle was onesiided i think big kountry went easy on you that y you won. but you had mad punche which was cxool and mad personnal(and all hit) and the flow was nice big you came out swing but hit nothing. and the flow was weak keep working |
uppin for some honest votes word
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aight..
uppin fo some honest love wit some honest votes, keep it real peace...
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uppin for some honest votes wordv
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uppin for some honest votes
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uppin 4 some votes word come on poeple
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lil trip your verse wasnt too hott u had decent punches but thats it none of your punches were hott and you had no personals...the best thing in your verse was the multies and they lacked creativity also...your structure was decent even tho your lines were badly stretched...decent verse from you
overall : 5/10 big kountry your verse wasnt sik but it was good...u had a couple decen personals and some hott punches especially the line about stretchin 10 to 20 lines in 27 << lmfao that was hott...you had some good wordplay...not many multies...structure was OK.. flow was consistent overall : 7.5/10 vote : big kountry he had the hotter verse...better personals and punches and flow ~!1!~ |
uppin 4 some votes
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uppin 4 some honest votes word
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aight..
uppin for some honest votes along with some honest love, holla back
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Urm...this was a very diff vote because both of ya dropped something weak..lil trip just thought he won this...and big thouyght he did not need to dropo much ...urmm im gonna have to say...big won this...his punches atleast touched lil trip ya need to elevate iight.....
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The first verse was overly complex; seemed as if you were combining two or more lines without comas or any sort of punctuation. I'm sure if I could have understood it, you would have been given a better vote. But as circumstances are, my vote goes to Big Kountry. That was some nice shit, though I'm sure you could do better.
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it was an ok battle but i have to give it my man kountry, too bad i don't have enough posts to vote for you though
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oops, i meant that i have to give it TO my man kountry.
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It depends on whatc secton your in Horus. (Horus.. lol)
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big kountry on da wall of shame
so did thread don't matter get yur win lil trip krusty |
yoooo, let me get at lil shit. I need some easy winss to damn it. U got merked by the worst of em kid. go to school become a singer cuz U aint cut out for rap son. Big Ripp U like if it was the sanitary shit to do. U had no Personal, punches were week, fuck they were years. they suck damn it thats it. Big did'nt even try and u still lost. work on everything Uv ever none, then throw it in the trash can and try it again.
V/ Big Kountry P.S. they were both weak. Id mop the floor wit Trip |
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I have to go with Big country on this one his flow and strucutre was better he had better wordplay also and I felt his lyrics more on this one. His rhyming was better no hate iight and here is how I graded it right here.
kountry this is not a track for these cats to bump... i want them to skip, cuz hes a gay on cruse of a cock.... taking a 'lil trip', Claiming your a vet, thats a statment to dismiss "not long ago"..YOU WERE ..."Typing"!~Like this/// Plus he can't take pressure, so i had to gave him some time... To amaze us...by stretching ten to twenty...into 27 lines!, wow this kid wanted said 20 lines dam that is crazy, but i dont feel like typing, merked you in 12, now thats lazy, 20/20 LIL U "Overseas" bitch like yo Budgeted team trip don' lose to no Memphis Grizzlie pussy "Big Kountry.' attemptin to take the Image of the NBA's Bryant Reeves? Join the WNBA cus yo the past im the future n im reppin more June your May Lines equal wins n yours continue to fade how U reach 04' n havnt been laid? Im the "Dealer" of this game n i gotta battle a No name n not even get paid? "Jokers" don deserve to be saved enjoy sleepin "Suits" Thanks to my "Spade" Pumpin you wit lead before i Break yo knees for dinner as Trips breaks bread Freestyle 101 the Bachelors "Med" lyrics bringin Encisions n Pinks all you shed 16.3/20 over all KOUNTRY. Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
yo big came thourgh stronger on this one he get the win
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lil trip your verse wasnt too hott u had decent punches but thats it none of your punches were hott and you had no personals...the best thing in your verse was the multies and they lacked creativity also...your structure was decent even tho your lines were badly stretched...decent verse from you
overall : 5/10 big kountry your verse wasnt sik but it was good...u had a couple decen personals and some hott punches especially the line about stretchin 10 to 20 lines in 27 << lmfao that was hott...you had some good wordplay...not many multies...structure was OK.. flow was consistent overall : 7.5/10 big came way harder |
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