BIGPAPPA76 VS. etcetera
 

aight playa its battle time

10-20 lines max. no crew or dick ride votes... you spit first.

good luck hommie

BIGPAPPA76

yo this was your call out son... spit it already fool

aight im kinda getting pissed here... fuckin drop already man... shit. imma have u DQd if this shit keeps up man... DROP YOUR SHIT

ayo this kid is from maine im sure you roll through gorham
why you scared to spit first and get embarrassed on this forum

2pac is wack and stop acting like a thug
big pappa could get drowned in a milk jug

2pac is west and you sittin on the east coast
i get mad props and i dont need to brag and boast

even though i spit first and you gonna bite my steez
after this battle i got your chick on her knees

had to do this quick i gotta get it finished
i cant tell you lost just from your grimace

ayo i didnt know how to work this thing i didnt even know the battle was set up.

aight yo was gettin on me about spittin whats taking you so long?

ok i know youre online and you still havent spit. what are you doing writing a song?

bout time... check dis shit.

etcetera bringin it newbie to the text/
this motha fucka just shit on him self and made a smelly mess/
fuck you bitch, you aint got shit on DA PAPPA/
i sling blades at you like a whirlin hellacopta/
motha fucker from west haven/
you just steped into a horor flick scaryer than those of wes craven/

lil bitch gettin played in his first eva rap battle/
you just fell off yo horse son, time to dust off and hop back on da saddle/
step the fuck back fo i break yo neck with a wiplash/
you gonna wish you neva decided to fuck with me and start this clash/
i just ripped yo punk ass rhymes by 1 million times illa/
FUCK YOU BITCH IM THE REAL LYRICAL RHYME KILLA!/

its time to finish this little boy off and make him go to bed/
you came at me hard but ended up in da gutter face down and dead/
this shits ova now so sit back and pout/
always rememba dat BIGPAPPA KNOCKED YOU DA FUCK OUT!!!!

BIGPAPPA76

uppin dis shit. dont sleep on this one people.....

between both verses...this is the only couplet that stood out

i just ripped yo punk ass rhymes by 1 million times illa/
FUCK YOU BITCH IM THE REAL LYRICAL RHYME KILLA!/

that won the battle right there

neither of you had very hard punches
neither of you had very good metas
neither of you had good multis if any....

both of you have got lots of potential
both of yall need to elevate...look around see what people are feelin
and both of yall need to develop some kind of rhyme scheme..anyways....ok battle I guess because it was evenly matched...my vote goes to...

BIGPAPPA

still uppin for votes... dont sleep on dis shit....

yo where da voters at, people view this shit and dont vote.. UPPIN!

damn, just what i need another sleeper... fuck uppin dis shit! if u look at it take the time to drop a vote please.

omg....wack
none of you had punches that hit hard...but big pappas had better punches...

structure from both of you were wack
big pappa had only one true personal the other guy had none

both of your guys flow sucked...

so i guess with one personals and a few better punches bigpappa wins
v/bigpapa

both of u suck and must elevate

no hate

big pappa won dis shit in every category, he had good rhymes and i liked his flow you guyz need to realize its text, and the flow is different. ect ur shit was wack i didnt like it, too basic, but ur new just elevate better. dis battle goes to pappa.
v=BigPappa

yo uppin dis shit. UPPIN..........................

ayo stop sleepin on dis shit people... still uppin for votes!!

Etc. your rhyme reeks of NewBism. I'm not hatin though cuz that is what my first rhyme was like...I got KO'd. You will probably elevate pretty quickly thoug cuz I can tell you have potential. The verse, though, was weak in that the punches weren't strong, the rhymes werent creative, and the rhyme structure was basic. That's what you are going to be judged on ya feel, so keep up.

Big P...I say pick on someone your own size, but this is all you. Return the favor!!!

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=129235

still uppin dis shit.... dont sleep now people, thanks to those who voted

still uppin dis shit, 1 more vote is needed so keep em commin

dam you both suck ass word

ok this was wwack and the only attempt at a fuckin real punch came form big thats it and there was only one in this whole fucking battle and if its a battle you gotta throw punches if you dont you suck period.

v/ big only real punch