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CarsonJetX2 vs VA
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no:crew |
checked in
also: no feeding. no biting. no hate. no dick riding. |
status check.....
....VA...ur a wanna-vet-An ya tryna front wit Jet?.... lol.....ok....... --------------- checked lines... VA's ryhme's got more circulation than U.S dimes.... arrest u an ur PC at the same time...... on accusation's...typing....ur "destined 2 ryhme?"1 I'll pump 5 bar's strait to your chest...erase ya flesh thinkin u the best..VA..your waste of an IP address....2 This aint a test....You came in "thread"-n-left "undressed" Like u forget, now 1 win less........................... ...............You actually tried to mess wit Carsonjet3 Noticed ya rules-only one-no crew-so u could go-an-bite a few DR one or two,and go on a recycle a bar as If i haven't view'd Bitch you have no clue....... It's simple arithmatic, a win fer me...an "L" for you. Tomorrow afternoon....PM me...an tell me how it feels at 6-an-2 |
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carsonJET aka adict, this marque was a glitch from tha start... ...Failure to quit, so consider these text as sendin this bitch on depart. (jet/plane) Heres yor ticket, I already put yor baggage through... ...theres 1 carson, 2 JETS, 3. Typos and 4 attitudes. (Added 2/carsonjetX2+2) iLL sit you on a flight filled with iraqis, so yor for sure crashin to death... ....“hi sir im a doctor, its good that yor hearts pumpin, but yor lackin yor breath. im changin carson of flight, to carson of tha operation table... ...they won when they fought to keep you stable, at this price you bought tha rate:"disabled". Quote:
...this guy can predict tha future, cuz thats my result once yor put to rest in 2 lines. (1st bar) erm bye personals:va.... cuz (carson JET) and tha whole airplane theme structure:va.... had a storyline to it punches:va.....they hit, and unlike carson’s, you cud read them w/o stumbeling vocab:carson...(sike)....cuz he misspelled his own name Quote:
vote: VA , points to tha fam real votes?? |
you voted on yourself.......
oh my....this is my first up. -1 |
iLL take it out to make you feel better, votes em bye.
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up 2.
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Close bAttle....Very close
VA-Nice spit..that ish was tight... you had vocabulary with the similies and metaphores.. Only a few bugs but you had some creativity which gave you this The structure was basic and decent... 8/10 Carson-Nice drop too...Very close battle for both you had some good stuff like multies..Lack in creativity..Structure wasnt that aight..But ya similies murked it..Good job.... 7.9/10 Overall-CLose battle...Very close but carson jet might win the battle isnt over yet...Nice SPit from both v/VA Becuz I think hes Creativity Murked it.. Return the favor please http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=129056 kind of murked him with the personals but Didnt try hard Return the favor Please |
are u fuckin seriouse? omfg...uppin...3
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Aiyo Check It..
CarsonJet2X: 7/10 Your Punches Weren't Hitting Real Hard...But I Liked The Creativitiy and Your Ryhme Scheme Was Definitly Hot. Your Metaphors and Mulits Were Decent. Nice Drop Man. VA: 5/10 Your Punches Coulda Been Hotter With More Wordplay...Your Punches Kinda Lacked Sense...Use More Vocab and Word Usuage...But Nice Drop To You Too. Vote- Carson For Better Punches and Wordplay ~R~ |
Uppin 2
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Uppin 3
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This was a close & one of the best I've seen on RB so far.
FLOW/STRUCTURE=Carson PERSONLS=VA MULTIES=Carson had like one,but VA had none so he gets this WORDPLAY=VA CREATIVITY=BOTH PUNCHES=VA,by a couple of hairs Very close battle.Both some creative stuff in there.VA punches were a tad bit better,so he gets this vote from for that and his creativity. Holla back at least one of my battles |
thanx, uppin more and more
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RETURN THA FAVOR.
Me vs. SevenThird CarsonJet2x - Straight verse. Didn't see many punches but ya did have some that his. Structure was good. Last line could of been better. But overall iight........7/10 VA - You had better personals but i didn't like ya structure. This was a hard battle to vote on. It was close. But i give it to ya for better lyrics. 7.5/10 Vote: VA |
OMG...Carson had this...you people must not understand his shit fully. Carson came harder...Va...not a bad verse...but you weren't on Carson's level...flow was okay...punches were sorta hittin...overall, elevate...Carson, not your best shit, but you had this shit wit better punches and a creative rhyme scheme. No hate.
Vote- Carson Jet |
hmm..
CARSON: VA's ryhme's got more circulation than U.S dimes.... arrest u an ur PC at the same time...... on accusation's...typing....ur "destined 2 ryhme?"1 ^first line was good meta..2nd and 3rd lines needed better wording.. i didnt like them to much I'll pump 5 bar's strait to your chest...erase ya flesh thinkin u the best..VA..your waste of an IP address....2 ^first line and a half were bad in my opinion.. IP address was what saved it..iight punch This aint a test....You came in "thread"-n-left "undressed" Like u forget, now 1 win less........................... ...............You actually tried to mess wit Carsonjet3 ^good bar until you ended it with Carsonjet.. was filler at the end.. messed the bar up.. Noticed ya rules-only one-no crew-so u could go-an-bite a few DR one or two,and go on a recycle a bar as If i haven't view'd ^was good thoughts.. wording againw asnt good, which takes away from it.. Bitch you have no clue....... It's simple arithmatic, a win fer me...an "L" for you. Tomorrow afternoon....PM me...an tell me how it feels at 6-an-2 ^first line ok.. was a setup.. but the punch let it down.. record punches are kinda played.. over all id give it a 6.5/10 VA: Quote:
overall this was a 5.5.. im sure this is some of the loww level work of these to guys.. i was feeling carson a lil more.. he had clearer punches. VA you had potential to win, but your punches just needed to be either re-worded, or maybe made a lil clearer.. not meaning put an explaination behind the verse either.. just work on tryna make the shit more understandable at a first glance.. v/Carson jet.. http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=134904 ^return a an Honest Vote here please.. |
since when did this start gettin votes....lmao uppin I guess.
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I think this was pretty close- you both brought somethin different to this---
the U.S Dimes line and the IP address shit was pretty good from Carson- it didn't have me rollin but it was decent.... you had a couple similies, dissed on his crew- 7.10 carsonJET aka adict, this marque was a glitch from tha start... ...Failure to quit, so consider these text as sendin this bitch on depart. (jet/plane) Heres yor ticket, I already put yor baggage through... ...theres 1 carson, 2 JETS, 3. Typos and 4 attitudes. - This and Va's closer were pretty dope, you followed a little story line and included a pretty nice amount of personals- the complexity was there, and I was feelin this verse.... 8.10 Votin' VA-- no hate to anyone i just think his verse was stronger with more quotable lines... http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=133452 |
^^^ya'll dont get it.....HE FED OFF MY VERSE....dunno why I care....
...theres 1 carson, 2 JETS, 3. Typos and 4 attitudes. - but yeh....HE FED OFF MY VERSE....close this shit.... |
didnt feed ne thing, stop swaying votes, were both elevated since that battle, ill battle you again, in this present day. wut you say? uppin
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I gotta think..carson won this battle theres no hate on this battle...va put his shit down but i think...carson punches hit more harder.....his ...vocab and wordplay was better...struc was ok....va.ur punches were ok..wordplay was good....not as much as vocab...ya sturc was off a lil....but overall..i think..carson won this battle..NO...beef on this battle or vote..iight
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elevated since that battle...lmao this was my first battle back from a 6 month layoff of pointless text. YOU didnt FEED?....then how does that line pertaining to my incorrect spelling in my drop exist? If you didn't feed. You wouldn't be able to talk about it. YOU FED. anyways-you wanna re-match? That's fine. find me in Audio BitchSlapped- -close this embarrassment- UPPIN |
Tought battle as I'm sure the votes will indicate.
Opener- Jet cause that dime line is tought to top. Closer- This was to close to call. Tie, you both owned this area. Multi's/Mettas- Jet Flow- Jet take this one his lines weren't as choppy so it flowed a bit more Personals- Another tough call, I'ma say V.A cause his hit harder Punches- You both hit hard but Jet had like one more hit harder Wordplay- Both sik, Creativity- V.A, your style was pretty creative, your personals helped this out, with the whole airplane theme. Originaliy- tie. DEDUCTIONS Bite'n- none Feed'n- none Overtime- none Over bar limit- none Other- none Overall- This is a tough battle, very close, you two should battle again cause this one will come close to the wire. Because Jet had harder hitting personals I think he deserves the win on this one. V.A your shit was tight but I thin he had like one or two punches on ya. Return the favour both of ya!!! Link Below! |
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