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EyeDentdy V.S. WillNova
no limit to your verses/ no crew votes/ 2 verses each/ do wat you got to do to stay up and keep it hip hop/
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Its time 2 shatter another MCs dreams intime for him to realize he aint shit and make him go become a loyer or someshit. Get an edjucation shorty, this life aint for U.
I crush dreams, and leave ecchos of nightmares to your grave/ chillwillies gonna need sleepin pills while hes sleepin to keep my bad dreams away/ I'll rip your spirit out your lungz, while I making you lactate/ these kats don't hate your stamina, they hate the way you act fake/ I'll bomb this little Nova out the earths atmosphere/ while leavin a green house affect in his bitches underweir/ I do drivebys to your block even in your nightmare/ while you still saving up for bullets to retaliate and cabfair/ battlin me'll make you famouse, like Clint Eastwood/ Like your moms milk man, Im allways up to no good/ my eyedentdy is simply brutal like a caveman/ I'll break your spirit like your wrist when I snatch the mic out your stank hand/ this kid dont got a rep, he to buissy being a handyman/ them blowjobs cost too much so he'll beat you for half a pringos can/ and he still tryin t0 climb the mountains, and work the streets/ Im already on top of the buildings, waiving while pissin off the peeks/ WillNova sound like the type of nigga who still piss his sheets/ and I'll staight out just ripp you nicely, and leave you gashin out the right knee/ this kid wants to be Eyedentdy so much he sucked my managers dick just to get my I.D./ Im a Grizzly nigga, who just dont fight fare even if I could/ I'll beat you wit my bear hands like an animal straight out woods/ I'll leave drown whith your head in the urinal/ U should of learn to stay away from house partys like Nocturnal/ You'll take 5 like Pac, then 9 like 50 till you gone/ by the end of the day, you'll have more hoes than Don wan the Majik wand/ |
I also wanted to add my finisher....
My bullets'll shower U/ fuck it, all I wanna know is where to send the funeral flowers to. Your turn dawg, good luck. spit like you mean it |
this scenes an obscenity, head explode like kennedy//
dangerous tendousy, I'll have you change ya Identity// try and get rid of me, you'll do the complete opposite// slain from all the shots u licked, reigned wit all the props I get// I only play wit kids like catholics, leave their a$$ wide open// birds commence to chockin, gun bustin hard ya vocals broken// ya soul seen floatin, now live in the spirit realm// ya fam singing gospel hymns, closed casket, tearin limbs// six feet under hearin them pray for u in the after life// they took it rather light, u died in vain tryna master mics// they thought u last the night, I knocked u out, u didn't make it// Right before the paramedics came, ur life faded on the pavement// |
That was hot yo. keep it comin, heres my second verse
This kids got dark rymes, he need to lighten up/ he tryin so hard, his masterbation hands about to tighten up/ so quit trying, commit yourself to an asylum/ give your dad his rap book back, now quit trying to ryme 'son'/ He gave me ammo, let me know who I was facing/ Now Im chasin this fake Jason like a raging kai-jun/ ur mom bailed me out, told me you was talking back/ she said you saw a whiteguy on B.E.T., now you think 'U' can Rap/ now thats a joke, like you having a highschool diploma/ I beat kids like U all night at work just to reach my Quota/ and that Identdy Jokes been used befor, like your girls tampon/ You aint battlin, you trying to make love songs like Cam'ron/ You wanna tell storys that aint happend, thats fine/ Next time gets some help, and try to make shit actually ryme/ I'll get your face stoned, like an Afgani smokin pot rocks/ Willy wrode his bike to my hood and caught writers-block/ and fuck that, atleast I got a casket, you know how much that shits worth?/ Thats your moms pay for 3 days around my turf/ and nobody in my family sings, U stupid bitch/ we'll cut your arm off just for that watch that hangs off your wrist/ I'll take 'Ur' life, like missdelivered mail/ than sent you back to the post office in a box with no nails/ and befor I go, and get u off my penus/ stop being so angry and do like Mel Gibson and find Jesus/ and sorry, couse after this battle, U wont be able to rap/ I was gonna tell Wyclef you got his rapbook, and he'll probably want it back/ I gave it a good shot. I leave it to you dawg. Do your thing kid. |
I feel that, good shit.....
he tryna cum harder than stiff cocks, cause he sucks// give it up, u spit more garbage than sanitation trucks// lift you up, took ya stuff and stole ya Identity// big penalty, rapbattles banned me from the vicinity// full of energy, ur strenght increase from just mentionin me// run over ya yard wit three feet, and fill meters continousy// lookin for a challenge, u gave me reccess like subsitute teachers// I get kicks out of kids, like I ran u for ur sneakers// prophet and preacher, recite scriptures the world can feel// spit heat at cook-outs, like there was hot coals all in my grill// got beef for ya meal, so backin off would be a safe bet// cause I stay using magnums whether its the chrome or latex// u b!tch and make threats, but get walked on like curbs// homo like same sex, action speaks louder than words// |
Verse 1:
Flow:Eye Structure:nova Punches:eye rhymes: eye Personals: nova _____________ Verse 2: Flow: nova structure: nova Punches: eye Personals: eye Rhymes: eye Vote goes 2 eye nova...ur good n all but u need 2 elevate on da rhymes and punches...ya flow is pretty good but ma vote goes 2 eye ______________________________________ |
This a good battle ya'll. get these votes in and shit.
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2 verses so im gonna go 1 at a time
Eye: 1) Not bad the disses were there and had sum good personals kept it real hard the structure was off in places and was stretched and also the wordplay was kinda basic. Also bad thang u kept doin self glory lines BAD NO NO. Nova: 1) Kept it basic wit a good structure not as hard hittin as Eye's but didnt have many punches a lil self gloryfied but had nice rhymes all i gotta say is try and bring more wordplay into this Round 1 v/Eye more hard hittin Eye: 2) Much better this time maintained the level of dissing and managed to bring down the level of self glory managed to throw sum wordplay into the equation too this verse was better than the last 1 however the verse was still a lil stretched but better performance. Nova: 2) No no wasnt feelin it completly different from the 1st verse no punches more self glory personals werent there i was actually dissapointed. Kept a nice structure again though but i thought u could've at least feeded a lil bit as u didnt seem to punch at all i think you fell off on this 1. Round 2 v/Eye didnt need to improve as Nova fell of on his 2nd verse but both need elevation. Overall 1:Eyedentdy 2:Eyedentdy v/Eyedentdy |
Return the favour wit an honest vote on my sig (Killah Bwoy)
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i aint gonnna put a long vote on here but both were good im feelin both but im going to give this to willnova
vote-willnova |
I know its a lot to read but jus get thru it and post a vote.... uppin fo votes
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That was hot what willnova did i was feelin' his shit more than Eyedenty
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ha ha ha, Smirf's just upset becouse I called him a homosexual and all, plus he cant rap so he wishes he was Nova. Its ok, cuz I set a challange to this nigga and it was about 3 to 4 days ago and I sent some harrasin ass E mails and he still wont send a word back. Aint even had enough ballz or vocabulary words to explain his votes. Its ok, I aint worried bout some one who'd call them self "Young Smirf".ha ha ha ha
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hahahaha, Eyedentdy u a crazy ass nigga.... lets get sum votes in.... If this take any longer you can have the battle Eye.... uppin
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nah, yo fuck that. we need some fair votes in this bitch. I dont wanna be given shit, Its just way shit should be so get them vote started yo.
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still and always will be uppin, c'mon people lets get them votes in
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ima have to go wit eye damn u just came a lil harder and nova u was just a hair short man good battle though now return tha favor
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=130431 |
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Thanx kid, keep it comin. That was always one of my favorite picture of Pac. Vote You'll.
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yo sorry for free postin but u gonna go vote i'd like to get them closed
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ya need to start going crazy and jus postin madd votes up here so we can end this... thanx for the vote thas already up... uppin, still uppin
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ok how do i say this without jumpin on the banwagon...
will i like your verses better because they more attributes to what you need in order for it to sound good on audio and shit.. cyphers ect.. but for a battle id have to say, eyedentity kind of came a lil harder punch wise.. but thats what it always is na mean?... is shouldnt be based on only punches, but thats the way the world is lol.. aight im done preachin, but if only you had more punches in ur verses, cause that shit is mad hot brah.. mad props to you will... eydentity yor verse was hot, but you need to work on flow a lil bit, and wordplay, cause with out those in my opinion you wont get to far.. good battle.. return the favor? http://community.rapbattles.com/sho...743#post1357743 drop a honest one... much appreciated |
yo get them votes in, vote for who ever the fuck u want. just vote yo
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Im already on top of the buildings, waiving while pissin off the peeks/
WillNova sound like the type of nigga who still piss his sheets/ ^^that's funny shit man and I'll staight out just ripp you nicely, and leave you gashin out the right knee/ this kid wants to be Eyedentdy so much he sucked my managers dick just to get my I.D./ ^^that's good shit too Need to work on the flow in ur first verse, ups & downs everywhere, otherwise your shit was hot, loved your punches, lots of wit and that Identdy Jokes been used befor, like your girls tampon/ You aint battlin, you trying to make love songs like Cam'ron/ ^^your punches hit hard too in ur 2nd verse, flow was much better, good job Willnova: this scenes an obscenity, head explode like kennedy// dangerous tendousy, I'll have you change ya Identity// try and get rid of me, you'll do the complete opposite// slain from all the shots u licked, reigned wit all the props I get// ^^i could really feel your starter, you had better flow and multies in the 1st verse than Eyedentdy . lookin for a challenge, u gave me reccess like subsitute teachers// I get kicks out of kids, like I ran u for ur sneakers// prophet and preacher, recite scriptures the world can feel// spit heat at cook-outs, like there was hot coals all in my grill// got beef for ya meal, so backin off would be a safe bet// cause I stay using magnums whether its the chrome or latex// ^^you really fired up here will, nice verse, you look like you put eyedentdy in his place with these few lines good job both of you, although Eyedentdy has the advantage because he has such long verses and Will's was short, i'ma vote for eye because his punchs just sent will flying. vote/ Eyedentdy |
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