PhAnToM01 v.s. Young Smirf
 

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No hate votes
no crew votes
no d/r votes
explain all votes


u spit first 10-20 lines....due 2night iight ~1~ son

Ay yo u gotta check in before u spit...dat means jus say u checked in..

1st Turn
 

Young Smirf i got flow like water from a faucet/you talkin' shit phantom better shut up for you get shot kid/ and i ain't that nigga from the chi thats chi/ i'm that nigga that speaks up and swells your eye/cuz phantom ain't on my level who named you a fag/ i got something to tell nigga... I'm your dad/ you see i fucked your mom then dipped out/ made your momma leave she limp out/ cuz i fucked her then the rubber burst so you was just a mistake pal/and fuck you faggot cuz you know that you be hatin'/while you waitin' for your turn to flow you probably masturbatin'/ since you a phantom i can't say anything about your looks/ but something stinks... the phantom forgot to use his douche/ yep! the boys terrible at keepin' up wit his hygene/ america we made a deal after i defeat Phantom then he's gonna be on my team/ and i know that i act cocky and strong/ but hey, wouldn't you act cocky if your dick was long/ but you probably would know just stick to using tweezers/ Yo momma thought that i had packed the heater/ i told her that i gotta leave cuz she's just another trick/ i said no silly hoe tricks are for kids.

i'm checkin' in but that also counts as my first turn so now it's your turn

u shudnt of accepted a challenge from da best but u still did....
hey smirf...quit rappin and go to ya village....
nigga im like pants wit hands i clap all legs....
U aint winin..im unbeatable like Raw eggs.....
Young u cant beat me even if it was luck bitch...
pretend u your mom..and da win is a random man...'Fuck it'.....
u gettin a lose even if it wasnt on ya wish list....
da only thing u got hot..is da cole u gettin fo christmis....
call me flamin fist cause i always got hot punches....
u pack weak..i eat ur punch lines fo lunches....
give u sick punchlines and ask you how u been....
u can have Dick ride n crew votes..and u still wudnt win...


FiiNiiSHiin {|_|] 0 FF

We Hate All dese Crazy Klinics dat think u nice....((caps spell wack...))
but when ma punch lines hit u'll be hopin u got some teeth, like obie trice.....


no need fo even a decent line....i jus spit shit afta i read his... lolz iight vote niggaz 1

u only get 1 turn....lolz we aint battlin on intant messeges n junk so iight ~1~ da battles ova peeps gotta vote

a yo ima hav to giv dat to smurf, b/c he had betta punches n betta flow etc.he had some good lines n came out wit a positive attitude...phantom u started off good n started fallin off if u rapped how u started u prolly woodv'e took dis but keep writin u'll elevate good battle fellaz ~!1!~

vote=Young Smirf

LMAO ....C....H...R...I.....Yo how u gon say he won dat look at his structure and his punches...day was weak y u think i spit dat weak ass shit? lmao

I beleave that Phatom won this battle. I was as out raged as I guess he was on his last post when Black Haze voted for Smirf.
Smirfs start was weak, it made me not want to read the rest of the rap. I felt my Iq drop from reading his little Chi thing that he had going on. Although Phantoms verse was nothing special and a lot weaker than wat I've seen him do, it still was enough to turn Smirfs face yellow.

Smirf.
Structure. None/0 out of like. a 1000 son.
Punches. I dont know wetha he trying to hit himself becouse I aint see any/ 0 out of 10
"cuz phantom ain't on my level who named you a fag/ i got something to tell nigga... I'm your dad/"
......No you did'nt Smirf. No the fuck you did'nt. that was a bad line gone worse.
Flow. Did'nt exactly see any.
Mataphores. none that were worth mentioning.
Total score.... niggative -5 out 40
You owe me the 10 seconds I stayed awake to read your shit.

PhAnToM01
Structure. not enough glue to hold together I guess.LoL 2 out 10
Punches.
"nigga im like pants wit hands i clap all legs....
U aint winin..im unbeatable like Raw eggs....."
This line could have been written a loooooooot better. but I knew where he was goin wit it. I guess. 4 out 10
Flow. not good, but better than smirfs. 2 out of 10
Metaphores. again not good, but better than smirfs. 1 out of 10.
Total Score.
09 out of 40.

V/ goes to PhAnToM01

were are all the votes somebody vote and break this tie that we got going on

Yo smirf, U diss me befo son, accept my battle in bitch slaped. I'll blow Ur wig back, nothing against Phantom but I dont give a fuck about this battle. wat U gonna do Smirf? Im lookin for an eazy victory so I came to U

young Smirf gets my vote he had hard punches but a smooth flow

yo dis PhAnToM how da hell u gon vote fo him man lmao mabby its kuz u aint got a flow ya self....neway i spit dat shit when i was fuckin watchin T.V. he aint got a flow or punches...trust me ive seen bettah punch lines in hawian punch straws...iight ~1~ i think I murked him wit a wack verse iight~1~

Young Smirf says
and i ain't that nigga from the chi thats chi/

nigga from the chi that chi huh, wooooooooow, U guz voted for that huh. ha ha

i'm that nigga that speaks up and swells your eye/

what does : speaking up, not being Chi in da Chi, and swelling an eye have in common? how is this: a punch line, Metaphore or even an actuall ryme huh? lets contineu.

cuz phantom ain't on my level who named you a fag/

o.k. he's not on ur level, so why did U say, who named U fag? These rymes made no since to me, by this time I was bored and loosin interest in his verse.

i got something to tell nigga... I'm your dad/

He Used the word fag, just to be able to ryme the word...Dad, and if I was to tell some one I was there old man, it would be in methaphore or punchline format, nothing less. This line was stupid as fuck.

you see i fucked your mom then dipped out/ made your momma leave she limp out/

I think I understand wat he's tryin to say but, it would'nt ryme if he used correct grammer and shit so he made his own way around it, creative lil nigga huh.

cuz i fucked her then the rubber burst so you was just a mistake pal/

In this line he tryied to make a punchline, while Rymin wit the word pal just becouse he thought it sounded good, wow, wat a lyricist.

and fuck you faggot cuz you know that you be hatin'/

I've got nothing to say about this one, Besides that that line when out of style since befor Big Daddy Kane started rappin.

while you waitin' for your turn to flow you probably masturbatin'/

This line here was ok right.

since you a phantom i can't say anything about your looks/

Nah, I was wrong.

but something stinks... the phantom forgot to use his douche/

again, All who would Use the word douche in an actuall battle and expect to win rais Ur lyin ass hands.

yep! the boys terrible at keepin' up wit his hygene/ america we made a deal after i defeat Phantom then he's gonna be on my team/

If Ur dissin him and callin him stank and shit, why the fuck would U want him on Ur team? this just made me mad and was the point in which I could'nt take it no more so I stoped right there.

Magician, I dont doubt U beat Phantom like that, U alright I guess, but still, look at how fucked up smirfs lines are. my eyes hurt from tryin to find the few words that actualy ryme in this fucked up ass verse, yo.
I voted then Smirf added a hate vote on me V.S. WillNova cuz he got mad or sum shit wit out explainin his vote. Bottom line is, I stand by my Dicision and Id do it again if they'd let me. so fuck that shit.

eyedentity your signature says it all :Thugs love us, Gangsters Approved

thugs love fuckin ya in tha ass and gangstas aprove hittin yo loose asshole

ride or die bitch dont fuck wit us

ya Damn Right sonnie, bus yo head to the fuccen white meat.



ROD Lyrical Artillery

Yeah that's right u pussy ass nigga you need to watch your fuckin' mouf you fuckin' bitch ass nigga you think u talkin' shit will make me mad well fuck you cuz you ain't even none of my fuckin' time until you show me that you is then you need to shut the fuck up cuz everything that you write is wack you fuckin' bitch ass nigga.

R.O.D.4lyf you faggot.

Oh Mah Bad Young My Lil Bro Has Been On The Computer And He Said He Was Readin Stuff . For Real Eye. Yo Punk Ass Goin Get Crushed If Ya Fuck With Us Cause Bitch Dont Fuck Around Cause We'll Dominate U Motha Fucka

Yo young smurf yo shit was horrible. Phantom urs was iight tho. U had some good punch lines and yo shit actually rhymed. Most of Young Smurf's verses didn't rhyme at all. I can't vot cuz i don't have enough post but if i could it would definately go to Phantom.

Man Foo Youngs Shit Did Ryhme I Think Thats Why Is Is Winnin The Poll So .. Learn Some Shit Aight

Peace Out Everybody In Rod Goin To Bed
Peace

ya'll be some hatin ass niggaz. U know U dick ridin when U attackin someone whose right, I explained my shit, plus I was'nt alone. Its nice that Ur winnin and all, but hay, I stated my shit...No need to get Ur flunkies on my dick now. calm down. and am I suppost to be scare of THIS nigga, Aundo09? I read some of Ur shit nigga, U aint barely been rappin for even a portion of the time that Iv been splittin heads. In the streets, Id woop U and Ur best friend Mr. Nickel in a battle.

come on Politics, U was on bET right, wat happend? diddy droped Ur no good ass?

HA HA HA, i Laugh in the face of IGNORANCE
If u want to battle me, u can get Slaughtered like the rest on Rotten.com

Nah Bitch i'm in Studio NOW as we speak.

young smirf won this shit. fuck u eyedenty, werd

R.O.D. BEEYOTCH!!!!

Y'all bitch ass R.O.D Faggots Stop FreePosting [(Real+Politik)] Wtf Are u doing wit dem and ur Not da Leader Ur Basicly Better than all of them nigga what is wronge well yall niggaz need to StOp FrEePoSting
You kno im gonna battle all of yall see what ma Record Turnz out ta BE iight prolly 15-4
so lets get it STartin wit who eva form ya Crew Comez On First

yo deadly, calm down dawg. I'll take half and U take half man. we all need to add wins to our records. Iv been gettin warned by niggaz who role in groups of 10. U some oversocial ass bitches. I challange like 3 of ya'll and all U do is send threts by like U gonna send a fuckin virus at me or some shit. If U dont wanna battle nobody, get the fuck out the site. If so, The slaghter house is open from 9 am to 8 am ever day for the rest of Ur life. Holla at me. Im done freeposting, this my last one.

Can I use the same explanation? ^^^^

Basically Smirf, You structure was painful to read (not the basis of my vote because if i were to take the time to copy, paste, and hit return, it would probably be a lot easier, but I'm not going to do that now am I? So very bad structure)
Flow was choppy more than it should have been and there weren't any extremely special plays or punches to save it. You tried a few multi's in there, but they could use some cleaning up.

Phantom: Nothing special from you, but every line had either a punch/play, meta/sim, or was setting up for something in the next line. Flowed allright, a little chop, but not as bad as Smirf's. Short lined structure kept it fresh for reading and helped your flow from getting too off. Good rhymes and I liked the punches..

Vote = Phantom

My bad...the reference was to Eyedentdy's really long explanation on page 1. it summed it all up really well. Not hatin on ya Smirf, ya doin ya own thing...just liked phantom's verse better is all.

that's aight i feel what you sayin' it's your opinion.