Wild Fire VS. outsider
 

aight 10-40 lines
no dick ridin
no hate votes

you drop first

good luck homie

aight....i thought he was gon post first...thats what he was supposed to do...but fuck it



this battles In my favor, I own the element of suprise//
i bet you had no idea this outsider digged guys// :hump:
if Your lyrics took extenze, they still couldn't enhance//
you couldn't be packin if you had glocks and socks down ya pants//
Let me give you some advice, don't ever play with fire//
Melt you in a copper pot than spit my shit "through the wire"//
Now class is in session//I'll give you a lesson//
on how multies can be used as a very dangerous weapon//
I'll rip you to pieces// as my blood lust increases//
fold each of your cells in half than rip em at the creases//
drown you in 10 different greases//not all of the police's//
could stop my flow to keep this faggot from ceasin//
now he's not believen//in the religion that gave his soul freedom//
because he prayed to his God but nobody stopped his bleedin//
out of pitty// i picked him up and dragged him through the city//
dropped him off on his porch lookin far from pretty//
knocked on his door than ran so his parents wouldn't spot me//
But I guess he wasn't dead because he told his folks "WILDFIRE DONE GOT ME"//

ah shit..thje 10 different greases was supposed to be boilin greases..oh well..lol...

i like dat shyt good spit dogg keep writin

Outsider = Duck??? Yep...

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nice shit wild fire
knocked on his door than ran so his parents wouldn't spot me//
But I guess he wasn't dead because he told his folks "WILDFIRE DONE GOT ME"//
dat cud kill n e one off keep it comin'

you guys every one /\stop freeposting/\ you makeing this shit to fucking hard to read word you got to wait entil after they battle and if you do it agian you'll be baned

yo wild fire, you couldn't blaze if fire caught alight to ya wire/
thinking your kayne west, masturbating undresst burnin ur tyer/
this guys a pedo on the internet, gambleing tryin to save his debt/
your like a desease u can't disinfect , you attract like a fuckin magnet/
take ur shit n disconect, im like a bone cruncher wid no disresprect/
chopping-up-ur-flow like a suicideing corrup ya slow, killin u hoe/
this bitch is nothing, he' an't listning so im waking you up mofo/
get ur ass outta bed, watch da trench form under your feet/
when walking outside, droping down on ur fat head 10 feet/
when reading, it slightly got boring, when a guy needs castrated/
face it your outdated, not even over rated, just hated, uncreated/
fuck shots, i'll snap your skinny neck in headlocks, bury u in the docs/
not even pop can save you, i drowned him first in ur lou ln broke ur locs/
this bitch wrote 20 lines, which all shoulda been crossed and underlined/
give up, and grow up, grow a penis cuz i bet ya got da tenious like a line/
the size of 3 centemetres, even centerpedes are bigger den your kind/
your punches were weak and i an't human so i deflect fuckin mankind/
maby a mind is wat you'll find, if it mean for your sorry as to go blind/
i like to test mcs like you to seize, like a curse dats ready to hipnotise/
your words are glued to paper, wid a stapler, that needs to be used wise/

uppin for votes...................................

ok out sider like i said before you got to ryhme it isnt hot if you dont ryhme word you feel me ok

v/ wildfire he didnt even ryhme in half his shit

uppin for votes people...come one this needs votes.

yes i did you fucking lier, most of it accept for 1 or 2 plus i had more lines out there and my punches hit way harder. Stop beefing with me other big your gonna get reported.

/\ outsider either you hired a ghost writer or you majorly improved your rhyming technique i liked ur use of rhyming even though bits were a bit tacky nice use of wordplay and multies i think you got this dawg nice elevation FINALLY!

v/Outsider

P.S Its an honest vote NOT a peace offering things still aint changed

ok im gonna go with wildfire on this one due to the fact that outsider harley rhymed and when he did rhyme he rhymed the same words like this:
get ur ass outta bed, watch da trench form under your feet/
when walking outside, droping down on ur fat head 10 feet/

over all it was a good battle but pretty one sided with wildfire getting my vote, outsider you have great potential but you need to elevate all around with your punches,matas,personals,structure and rhyme scheme. good battle tho, and no hate to outsider.

VOTE= WILDFIRE

HAHAHA your so funny. I murked dis fool easy, and just because of 2 lines dat rhymed, so did he wid his last words ME.

upping for votes!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

fool shut up most your lines didn't even make sense stop tryin to sway people...i had respect for you...but after you dropped that verse you actually have the nerve to call me a fool? hahaha

wildfire this battle up and murked this kid with much better punches.. and flow which win's a battle..outsider go get some elevation seriously you need it man your poor..
\/0te Wildfire..

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=129079
vote please..

Look the way i see this battle...is both of you had good punches...but..
outsider you l;ost me here''''it just didn't uderstand it.....but your best punch was
like to test mcs like you to seize, like a curse dats ready to hipnotise/
your words are glued to paper, wid a stapler, that needs to be used wise/

and wild fire flow was not to cmplexed...but not to simple which is why i feel like he didnt try to over do it with the punches...but he kept them just where they needed to go...i really didnt see any lines of his i didn't like...but i saw one i like out of them all
here it is:
I'll rip you to pieces// as my blood lust increases//
fold each of your cells in half than rip em at the creases//
which is why he got my vote...no hating...good battle to you both

my punches hit more and i had more multies and internal then the other guy you must admit and even mad dog who's a top player agreed with me that I won this and I personally think i got it cause I had more creativity more punches more lines and just got murked quite easerly because his punches didn't hit me hard enough. Anyway it's your vote.

yo check this out

fire- man you put some hard shit ut there. a little bit of some multies and i liek the spit a lot man.

outsider- youve definetly improved. a couple lines need worked on but hott for a newb.

close but im goin with outsider on this

both had good spit

outsider u elevated alot dawg..nice punches and flow..fire ur shyt was iight nice punches but i gotta go wit outsider wit harder punches

don't be suprised if those votes get cancelled...this is an absolute joke

this battle looks legit...i gotta read both verses again

this battles In my favor, I own the element of suprise//
i bet you had no idea this outsider digged guys//

good opener..funny line, well set up

if Your lyrics took extenze, they still couldn't enhance//
you couldn't be packin if you had glocks and socks down ya pants

pretty clever and funny line, bottom bar was a tad stretched i felt.


Let me give you some advice, don't ever play with fire//
Melt you in a copper pot than spit my shit "through the wire

not bad, but it seemed like a filler to me


Now class is in session//I'll give you a lesson//
on how multies can be used as a very dangerous weapon//

good introduction because you did actually use multis, and you used them well

I'll rip you to pieces// as my blood lust increases//
fold each of your cells in half than rip em at the creases//
drown you in 10 different greases//not all of the police's//
could stop my flow to keep this faggot from ceasin//

I liked the rip you to pieces and rip the cells at the creases part a lot...i like how it tied in to tearin him up...good good use of multis


now he's not believen//in the religion that gave his soul freedom//
because he prayed to his God but nobody stopped his bleedin//

okay multi, seemed like another filler

out of pitty// i picked him up and dragged him through the city//
dropped him off on his porch lookin far from pretty//

good multis especially since it's a story

knocked on his door than ran so his parents wouldn't spot me//
But I guess he wasn't dead because he told his folks "WILDFIRE DONE GOT ME"//


very good end to the story, and the battle as a whole, you duidn't have too many punches, you didn't have too many personals, but the one or two you did have were good. and your verse was very creative, your style is strange, but whatever works for you


Now onto you outsider, you kept coming with the punches, but most were fairly weak



your like a desease u can't disinfect , you attract like a fuckin magnet/
take ur shit n disconect, im like a bone cruncher wid no disresprect/

he attracts like a magnet? what does thta have to be with bein a disease? or anything else?

and your like a bone cuncher with no disresect, why no disrespect? that weakend your punch a lot



okay, as much as i want to analyze every line, i can't because there not good, thats all i can say about all of them, none of your lines struck me at all as being even close to decent


vote: wildfire

I've read some of outsiders other ish and I agree about the elevation. He had some punches that were tight and a lot of multies, but I thought Wild used his multies better...just having them isn't enough.

Outsider did a lot of feeding which weakened the verse.

v/Wild