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This is the truth on insaine16
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Look this is the way insain16 and i got into it .... And now he want even post This is not the battle flow . This is what I wrote when I felt like telling the truth on a bitch ! I hope he post so I can drop my battle flow on his ass! Alone with a few others who were talking shit to me ! (Verse) Listen my little nicca this is a free style from me to you, Im predicting this battle gone be about lies instead of truth, Never mind about the war we was in, like string's im cutting you loose, Im sick of you saying im ducking your juice, When you want even post Where was your heart at, when you claimed, That you were better then most , pick up your veteran's coat stop fronting before i let go ! Telling every body i dissed you ! When you dissed me first ! Baby girl had some thing to say, but then you brought in your word's Remember that shit look it up bitch ! It's still on the boards ! Im 5micmedallion ! I dont have to lie about war's ! Im kind of sore, Like the scar's on my back ! Feeling the burn It's kind of like jesus each one of you taking you turn's To beat on the leader ! So why dont you rest and leave it alone, unless you ready to bring it to the thrown So we can just... get.. it... on ! Im out side of my home, While the moon is full, Looking into the star's, Trying to figure out Why you thinking you hard ! when the greatest rappers been put in the dirt God bless there soul's. Tupac Shakur and Biggie Small's and now yall want to go ! Be a leader ,,not a follower learn to stand on your own feet. You dont need a friend to dick ride. Just to increase your reach. Man i live on a beach. Where my foot print's remain behind me So there for, You can alway's find me. Like a watch given with perfect timing. The bell ring's to wake me My eye's still adjusting towards the sun rising. I know you think you hate me. But inside you really don't, baby girl...insaine16 Both of you wrong ! As for the rest of you mutha fucka's , who was bringing it on ! Check out the battle flow. because i put your wack name's in the song ! You acting like it's hard to read my shit ! But if you get pissed ! Then i know you understand what was wrote in all of my scrip's ! Fuck giving a brother a tip. Unless it's straight from your heart . Pardon me if i seem rude. but you cant spit with a star ! Trying to tell me how to write my bar's ! You need to work you a job for a summer before i Ben ladden your lamp , And kill you on your come up ! Smashing your face in And leaving you ducking in a hole just like Sadam from our nation When he was filled full of hatred ! Well you can erace it, and get your self set for the truth ! Change your careers and get your punk ass'es out of the booth ! Im changing your gear's with an explanation , The first shift started In open mic When two bitches told me to elevate a bit ! I posted back... and told them how i felt about it .. I was nice at first . Until the room got crowded and the hater's got worse ! It's like JZ The gift and the curse ! I got to find a church Before some body in this rap room gets hurt !! The second gear is hit... I gave my self props on my shit. It's a rap site... Im supose to have some fun. Get off of my dick ! I got the big head Just because i said.. Words to live by ! Well allow me to show you what i can do with my third eye Nicca I seen it ! Genie defeated you.. and left you leaning ! HeXen even told you 5-0 ! So you know its over ! All you said is what ever ! Looking for some feed back on both of your post up's Then wrote back, like you wanted to blow up ! Nicca dont even show up Your an embarrassment to hip hop american's Dont make me climb a tree and drop on you like parrot shit DeadlyVision even told you that Genie would murk you ! So just except that ! what goes around comes right back ! You done it to me, And they did it to you, But they didn't hate . It's a difference between real mc's and those who fake ! You better wake up ! Im hoter then fire on hell raiser ! My cube is turning. With combination's ready to burn him ! Im evil...! You dont want to see a bullet stuck in your sternum ! This is not a battle.. I wrote this for practice . So you can learn it ! The truth is my only concern man ! So i'll tell it how it is . The click you with... keeps a dick in there ass Like m-n-m's moist in there hands Im choking your plan's So fuck your blue print's (outro) Like i said this is not the battle flow.. but the truth is the truth.... So if you dont like what im saying... then stop me then... All i want you to do is post on me since you and your friends said they were better! I'll be here...soon as you drop im dropping,,,,1 copy righted through ASCAP.2004 |
work on ur structure and thatll help ur flow a lot keep droppin good ish
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thats just the way i write...if you can read it...
It will make since to you....God gave us all our own styles, And this one in mines...I use to write like this the way im typing write now. But i had to make a change....So I came from writting like this to writting like this It makes better since to me i guess but it just who i am as a person . different from you or any one els . But i thank you for your thought's, but im not changing my structure. This is what i have grown to be.. and i like it.. The flow you reading is some true shit on a bitch Because he's taking all weak to post on me... plus another weak added to that... So i wrote this hoping he will get mad and post I told the truth on his ass though... He did start the whole thing with me... So he can post on me to show me how to do it better Him and his squad said my flow's dont ryme...LMAO But thanks for your thoughts... im me some time..aight...or pm me to reach me..aight..1love |
hella long..but good
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thank you...some times hip hop concist of telling the truth
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Yes
YEs long but it was very very good. I agree sometimes Hip-Hop does consist of the truth. Very good amn keep it up!
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So insaine16 , what does the truth mean to you?
I guess not much,because you cant seem to write anything true, But i did spit the truth on your punk ass right here and other places as well! So dont make plans to be a hater all your life,Because God loves why cant you? Think about it home boy.....You cant look for Gods help if you dont help others.... ~The truth~ |
goos shit.just structure was kind of iffy
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it was good but was hella long! work on structure also!
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yo 5mic...wudup nucca? this shit was hot, but yea...try n spit so peeps can understand it a lil betta. nice though. pc
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it was ok but shorten sum of da lines & work on ur structure den u'll b able 2 elevate ur rhymes
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Structure changed
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How do yall like this change in my structure?
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its koo i can read it, man yo shit was tite son, i liked it, it was long as fuck but i read evry line, i like yo style, yo peep my collabos wit Raw Killa if u havent alredy, iite 1 love
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CAN any OF YOU check out THE new STRUCTURE please,,,
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shit long and also nice but need mo wordplay
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THANKs,,,but I was really explaining what me an him got into it about forreal,,
And the situation with his lost battles I spoke on was also true,,, You can look it up on the boards,,,I really wasn't trying to word play my self to death for his corny ass,,,,So I just told the truth about every thing,,,,, The truth was my only mission,,,I spit this at him before he an I BATTLED,, An yet our battle got closed,,,but he knows why,,because he was cheating,,and he knows it,,,,If a battle is closed he and I have to both agree to close it,,,but some how it got closed without me knowing it...and I was winning in votes,,,Till they removed a vote from me,,,because it wasnt explained enough,,,an yet he still would have lost because he has a vote that was the same way,,because the guy admited not reading my whole flow,,,So how can he vote if he didnt read it all...So one of his needed to be removed as well....making me still the leader in votes,,,but its closed now,,,,,but I guess it was in insane16 best intress knowing his wack ass was going to lose..... But thanks for the feed back...God bless all..1 |
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Never mind,,,Ill do it my self,,,I think it was tight dog,,,
and your flow was well put,,,I see what you were doing,,,plus the structure was tight after you redone it,,nice,,,keep em comming like that,,,, The truth was all I wanted to see,,nice ass drop son :thumbup: I guess it comes down to me replying to my self to get any replies,,,1 God blees all.. :evilgrin: |
u say hip hop speaks truth but still u talk shyt/
act like u kno me and u bitch about all the shyt i did/ or should i say what u claim/ insane the main...game....as ur verse screams....LAME!/ need i continue to explain???/ i swim up ya verse stream like freestyle salmon/ and i have u and ya crew starvin like a cornbread and chicken famine/ this kid still dont understand the basis/ he prolly gunna read my last line...and start to call me racist/ and how u gunna talk shyt when to u im completely faceless/ and ill give ya 5trys to rok the MIC while i snatch ya MEDALLION/ u shoulda went for the rideable kids not the full grown italian stalion/ :laugh2: kinda wack but wutev....... :thefinger suk my dick bitch........... |
uppin for some feed back in here................................
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nice
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Yea,,,bitch hip hop does concist of the truth,,
An this is one of them,,,You cant hold a mic to me dude!! I been spitting at you,,,It took you 3 months to produce? So fuck you an Omar Epps!!!,,,,Im the last with the juice!! I hope you didnt think that was hot,,,because im laughing at you!..LOL Im like the grass in your front yard,,,,,,I got shit with me too!! I spit shit funny,,,Like news papers comming on sundays!! You got a lot of nerve,,,, Like a coward is trying to confront me!!..LOL BITCH!!! ,,,,,I will rip you on your front porch for your money,, You had to send beezy to get me,,,,,Now look who's running She didnt get one fucking vote,,,Now whos the dummy!!! I dont got to spit hard to beat down on a youngan!! After Im done your moms gone be calling me honey!! Save your breath,,,cause you cant take a got daum thing from me!!!! So whats the point in trying me,,,,for the second time you'll lose? Im like a drunk in a bar,,,,,, Drinking all your flows like booze!! You couldnt teach me ,,,,If your first,an last name was school!! I will shit down your kneck,,,and make your fucking stomach a pool!!! An I want say suck my dick,,,,Cause you might want too,,!!! I heard you disowning girls,,,but running up in your crew!! You like to play with cereal,,,,, Digging in niggas fruit loops!!! So stay the fuck out my threads unless,,,you spitting the truth!!! |
The truth!!
~Enough said bitch!~
An oh yea,,,I told you I only spit the truth,, Now if you go back an read the the first flow i put on you,,,you will see I didnt lie about you getting your ass blowed out in a battle bitch!! Hell,,, I'll even help you with the link as well,,,, http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=128025 :laugh2: Now read the link,,,then go back an read my flow to see if im telling a lie muthafucka!!,,,,Attention to all members please read the restructured flow,,on down from the first one,,,scroll down and you will see it,, That way you can understand the flow alot better,,an see im not bull shitting. He really did get murked in a battle,,,an yet he claims he's better then me,,,,lol..LMAO..lol....Now thats a laugh!!! An he even said it his self,,,,Im nice by the way he accused me of prewritting By saying no one alive can spit this wise free styling....I think you should listen to your self home boy,,,You call me wack,,,but yet you give me compliments,,by insulting me with the truth,,,,on how nice I am,,,, So in way your saying im good at my shit,,,Im sure if any one reads this They will agree on what im saying about you ass hole!!! :laugh2: I got more from where that proof came from,,, So dont test me bitch!!!,,,,,,You know your a dick rider,, heres proof of that as well,,, http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=127639 :laugh2: Now when you read this thread you will see n-sight getting confused on what a battle verse is,,by pointing out what he thought was my battle flow,, When in fact it wasn't,,, An you will find insane16 side kick as usual young beezy all up in it, saying I want battle her,,,,well she lost to me,,,next,,,any way,,,,,Im just pointing out what you say I claimed,,,when in fact its all true bitch!!! So stop fronting,because your not fooling any one,,, An every one complained how long my verse was,,but if you read he said 10,000 lines it doesnt matter,,Because I told him from the start im dissing every one that was hating on me,,,,So I know this daum whole site new about me dropping unlimited bars,,,but they all complained in the end on how long it was,,,I feel if they admited not reading it all,,,then there vote shouldnt have counted Like i said i speak the truth,,,So fuck trying to get feed back in my threads bitch!,,,, :nono: |
Well I guess its back to the drawing board ass hole,,,
Because your so called battle flow wasn't good enough.LMAO But the proof i posted on your dumb ass will do almost as well as my responce,,, to your corny ass,,,,bitch! |
So I guess your trying to batte me huuh?,,,Why dont you post that so called diss to me in the battle zone,,,and i'll put my flow you see in there as well,,,
And then we'll see who's better bitch!!!,,,, Since you cant seem to write in a timely manner,,,,,,,lol,,,,, The shit you called your self trying to get at me about,,,been posted up for a long time,,,,An it took you all this time to get at me,,,,,Plus the shit I spit in the truth on your ass was no lie,,,,,,what now bitch!!!!! |
kid u tlk to much......everything gotta be a book wit u cant u eva jus chill and write a battle not a full blown song.......u should right a book.....about all ur struggles and hard times on internet hip hop sites......ur a bitch if ur so fukin good then get ur lazy broke ass of this site cuz im a smart as motha fuka and i aint tryin to start internet beef im tryin to get into the world and get paid...while u jus keep cryin while u tryin to get laid.....ool that last line rhymed....but it aint a battle....only 5 mic writes shyt that u have to guess if it is his wack as battles or jus his annoyin ass speakin.....
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tahst was good there was an improvement wiht ur structure when u changed it, it was tight keep it up peace 1luv
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I guess they say the truth hurts dont it home boy,,,,,?
I dont hear you calling me a lie now,,,OOOHHH....YOU want to battle huuh?... IS that what your saying?.....because shit talking will get your ass merked for the 3rd time by me,,,An the proof that my truth on your ass was no lie,,,is posted as well...So dont play dumb,,,bitch!!!.....Remember when I first joined this site,,,you an beezy were the first ones alone with a few others to start hating on me,,,,,, Thats why I cant stand your punk ass,,,An I will rip your ass every day till you admit your a dick rider and your not better then me when it comes to spitting,,,So dont front muthafucka,!!!!,,,,,Who the fuck gone believe your better then me!!!,,,,OHHHH,,,,My bad,,,,your dick riding crew will,,,, The truth will be the only thing remaining,,,, And your not it,,, And thanks Femcee4Lyf,,,,I believe if we had more rappers like you on this site,,,, We want have use for haters like insane16 any more,,,,Because finally some one else can tell the truth,,,instead of a lie,,If we can get insane16 to change his ways,,,, He might be aight,,,,,until then,,,,he's out of luck getting love on this site,,,because of his hating habits,,, God bless all..1 |
long as fuckin song i thought i was bad wit over writin..lol but good drop fuck da hataz peace
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I MEAN THAT SHIT!!,,,If you dont like what im saying,,,
you should be glad im asking that all my shit be removed,,,being that its sounds like some dirt you would do on your own without me knowing any way!!! That what those who are not lyrically incline do best!!! SO get my shit off of this corny asS section before I rip your dumb ass,,,,Oh wait,,,you cant rap,,,or spit,,,my bad,,,bitch!!!! |
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