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One-Man-Band vs Sorel
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house rules, except no line limit, just not too long or too short. Sorel, you spit first. |
Sorel in the building, here we Go
Accepting my challenge you must be dumb kid/
He's about to catch a tan the way that I sun kids/ I dont wanna kill him, cuz he might come back 2 haunt me/ but I gotta, cuz battling me, he's more foolish than the young ASHANTI/ Predict my skill level? No one man can/ just know Im good enough to break up this one man band/ Sorel's the boy with more bars than prison/ thats Y u beating me is impossible like a tom cruise mission/ I'm who u would love to be/ and my styles lesbian this dude cant fuck wit me/ I'm bout 2 murder this man... & his band/ put him under a white sheet like he part of the klu klux klan/ look, wipe the mic after I flow, u know that I spit sick/ you would think feces is on my shoe the way that I kick shit/ when u go 2 sleep tonight I'm the reason 4 nightmares/ put a tombstone at the computer desk cuz I'm a make sure ya career dies there/ so u can go ahead and admit it u love my wordplay/ I come on RB & rip rappers(wrappers) like it was my birthday Its been 1 Sorel 612 stand up PAPERBOYZ Scream @ me |
look at his icon it states jack buddy/
is he talking bout robbing people or the way that he jacks(masterbates) Buddy/ |
lol.. whats with the last bar?? can you tac shit on like that??
oh well fuck, you drop crap and expect to pack better hits-than-me/ but i suspect you bite your wraps like lebanese was your ethnicity/ stepped to me, but you say i challenged you, you must be outta ya head/ dont make an ounce of sense, cos the bitch called out in my thread/ You couldnt break me up, couldnt get dope if you was wasted, fuck/ "tasted" much of my rap, check his other posts, similaritys aint just luck/ I make and cut verses to perfection, dont accept anything less-than what was just mentioned/ I know you attempted, more bars than prison but its quality not quantity, you lack either blessing/ You saddle on cock, i battle and rock, usually KO vote count up to 5 or 6/ constantly fight off riding shits, votes for u are fair, cos no one will ride your dick/ too wack to provide some hits, or the slightest diss, couldnt feel it when you were layin ya verse/ aint come across a cat in my life that was worse, whole rhyme he was just playin with words/ I dart and crack, u right, your verse might-scare me, so much its hard to smack/ lucky theres no critics round, you only give me nightmares, shit, youd give em all heart attacks/ your so confident you can rip mcs, but who could you possibly be better then/ I drill bitches, this stuckup poser couldnt cure my illness if he had a PHD in medicine/ if u dont get the punches or wordplay in sorels or my verse dont vote.. i think they were pretty straightforward though peace bring the votes |
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come on.... fuck.................... VOTES^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
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this is the shit thing bout this site... no one votes...
bump?^^^^^^^ |
ahh fuck it.......... how are you supposed to have battles when a week later no one has voted,,........................................
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ill never get to elevated frontlines........................................ . *sigh*................................ im goin back to bboy.org
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umm aiight break down:
one-man-band: you took this one you had better vocab,structure,punches,meta's everything you out shined sorel in every categorie...your rhymes are stretched a bit though...oh wellzz good batttle sorel: urs was aiight..no punches or personals really made me go oooooo....yours was all basic...vote : one man band can u guyz rtf on this battle http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=129340 |
ight ima have to vote for Sorel
just came in harder too me, had nice conceptz could have be worded better tho.. |
Lemme break this down fo ya
punches-both Flow-One Man Band Structure-One Man Band Vocab- One Man Band My vote =One Man band |
lol still 1 - 1... did u vote or just post?
peeace |
ite man one-man took this, he had better vocab, better punches, better disses, n that bout it coz neither was off the hook, ya both need 2 elevate. Find out sum shit bout ya opponent before ya battle him n then nail him wit personals. Keep battlin n u will get better ite. vote on this plz coz its a wack battle wen i was i was a newb n i want it closed lol!
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its already closed man... pm me ya next battle if you want me to return the favor.
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If one man had better punches, and more creative lines he wouldv gotten my vote. sorel did'nt have much vocab but that tombstone by the computer shit was ill. I was just disappointed that I aint get to it first, ow well, theres always momma jokes right. both of Ur flows were good. I just thought that Sorels was a bit better than One mans' becouse one man tried the back to back ryming thing and could'nt pull it off as well as I hoped. to me that took some points away, stay up though kid, U did good.
V/Sorel |
I'm goin wit Sorel. Although he had only a few punches they hit hard. One-Man Band yo punches was iight but they seemed like they was too easy to come up wit. Be more creative, take longer to think. Vote - Sorel
P.S. - Return tha favor. Link in my sig. |
vote is one-man-band...
i feel like his was less filler.. and definatly less self-glorification... sorel you talked about how many bars you spit, buts filler man.. i liked the way band's verse drew you in, i was done reading that long shit before i knew it.. thats pretty hard to do.... i feel like the line complexity was pretty "thuro" in bands verse.. and sorel you used band to end a line twice and they werent in the same bar.. kinda look like you were runnin out of things to say ya know :P.. maybe i just percieved it wrong, and you wanted to do that.. dunno good battle tho... v/onemanband |
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no bull shitin one man band did his thang but i also feel sorel came harder
not by much though his ending is what decided it |
yo hoops, battles over man. pm me your next one if you wanna call in the favour.
peace |
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