insane16 vs Krusty D
 

aight
I'll drop witin 20

no feedin

agreed?

Lil A.J. vs Krusty D


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dis be da one
my mission bitch wants her pillows back so I gotsa dip fo a minute and go get ma soup i'll drop in about a half

hahahahahahahaha
 

*Krusty tells da dealers ta wait while he axes yo mom ta beat box while he drops dis verse*

Start da track ya fat ho


Oh shit…. I need anudda hit~gots ta merc dis lil busta~
and I needs ta do it quick

Quick like your posts~that’s how they were read~you always talking bout faggots what the fuck is wrong wit yo head

Maybe too many trips ta tha closet wit yo daddy~I ain’t mad at ya growing up like that even I wouldn’t be happy~

That’s probably why your moms buys the rocs and acts as my muse~
Do you know what the fuck that is, well krusty’ll cut loose
It’s a bitch that inspires me~a ho that admires me
Like a key in the ignition~the fat ho always fires me
Up like a blunt krustys runnin full throttle~
thankful for your mom cuz I’m broke and she bought the bottle~

Did I see in one of yo posts you talk about money and fans~
Muthafucka I make more returning my bottles and cans~

ouch :laugh2:

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:spit:
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kid get it right i never tlked about money and fame/
so since u tlk to much shyt insane here to bestow u wit shame/
ill fill u wit napalm spark a light and burn this pussy bitch like a candle/
yes i will steal dis win...known as the hip hop vandal/
and my shyt is more presidental then the xyz scandal/
apparently i brought to the plate 2 much 4 u 2 handle/
im tired of these wanna be bitches tryin to fake it/
u want my title well u can have it~try to take it/
and im the white kid who aint tryin to be like eminem/
while u on the corner in a dress tryin to be a feminem/

uppin for some voters to get this shyt goin iight............................................. ..............

nice verse----not
 

dat was whack and it only took ya 2 days :laugh2:
bought time you posted
feminem dat shit wuz lyte
you can't match ma creative might :gfy:

i tell storys muthafucka wit set up
i just don't go ta word rhyme sites

you gettin dr votes
dat be yo only way
if peeps vote true
yo be in ma siggy grave :spit:

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uppin for some fukin voters yo........................

u r a fag kid rhymen in an afgter battle shyt lol loser...it took me 2 days cuz i dont have a comp at home right now mines broken so i had 2 wait till i got back into school...i dont prewrite like other people iight.....

aight my vote goes for krusty yo ur shit was funny specially returnin the cans makes more money line ur structure was real good too jus keep doin wat ur doin.insane ur verse was weak work on a more complex structure and flow and harder punches

v/krusty
return the favor
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=129340

uppin fo votes
help close dis one out
vote for either one and get dis ball rollin

favors returned wit stops at yo battles

peace

both didnt have really any punches. n ya both need ta elevate .....
my ima vote for insane he just came harder...

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iight lets keep this shyt goin uppin..............

i gotta go wit krusty, insanse was to simple wit it, an he jus didn come as hard.

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iight uppin to get this over with...........................

im going wit krusty on this one. dudes rhyme was more funny and creative and his arrogance sorta came across as tho he wudnt lose. . .if that makes any sense lol. anyways, v/krusty

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can y'all help close dis one out or whut
i'll stop at yo battles also
peace

yo uppin for some votes to get this shyt over with.........

can y'all help close dis one out or whut
i'll stop at yo battles also
peace

we both wit hit up anyone who votes on dese

krusty you take this battle cause of ya punches n creativity,wasnt feelin ya flow but overall ya came smarter/both had no wordplay
insane i thought ya shit was a bit weak all over but i liked ya flow betta but can't win battle witout mad punches or personals,if ya would've had 1 mad personal i think this would've been a hard choice/
breakdown
punches/krust
flow/insane
multis,wordplay/none
creativity/krusty
vocab/krusty
overall effect/krusty
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~honest vote/krusty~~~~~~~~~~~~

an insane said i needed to elevate lol. yea ok......

uppin fo votes
help close dis one out
vote for either one and get dis ball rollin

favors returned wit stops at yo battles

peace

uppin fo votez
gotta close dis weak shit out
help us close
we help you wit stops at yurs

peace

uppin for voters....................................

uppinh to finish this offf.................................

ok krusty u just merked this cat... you came way harder... better punches and flow... insane i think u can do alot better than u did on thist verse.. so im gonna vote for krusty due to better punches and flow

Krusty had a fun ass openner but his rymes were corney. I felt like this was battle between Shaggy 2Dope and Violent J. Clowny ass niggaz.
Krusty was missing a flow, punchlines, was getting off topic, and I couldnt tell if he was seriouse about this being a battle. insane had better flow, punches, and all out verse. Krusty made me laugh and shit but that was all in the intro. then he got stupid as shit. Insane kept a seriouse face through out the battle and Knocked Krusty wit the dullest punches that Iv seen in a bout 3 mins.
V/ Insane16
plus vote in tha battle on my sig honestly, thanx ya'll did ok. just need more practice.

krusty D:

Oh shit…. I need anudda hit~gots ta merc dis lil busta~
and I needs ta do it quick
^^is this even a bar if it is its wack 4/10
Quick like your posts~that’s how they were read~you always talking bout faggots what the fuck is wrong wit yo head
^^decent punch played scheme 5/10
Maybe too many trips ta tha closet wit yo daddy~I ain’t mad at ya growing up like that even I wouldn’t be happy~
^^weak 2/10
That’s probably why your moms buys the rocs and acts as my muse~
Do you know what the fuck that is, well krusty’ll cut loose
^^still weak 3/10
It’s a bitch that inspires me~a ho that admires me
Like a key in the ignition~the fat ho always fires me
^^decent meta and punch 6/10
Up like a blunt krustys runnin full throttle~
thankful for your mom cuz I’m broke and she bought the bottle~
^^weak and stretched 4/10
Did I see in one of yo posts you talk about money and fans~
Muthafucka I make more returning my bottles and cans~
^^your hottest bar 7/10

overall : 31/70

insade16:

kid get it right i never tlked about money and fame/
so since u tlk to much shyt insane here to bestow u wit shame/
^^decent punch nice multie 6/10
ill fill u wit napalm spark a light and burn this pussy bitch like a candle/
yes i will steal dis win...known as the hip hop vandal/
^^decent but stretched 4/10
and my shyt is more presidental then the xyz scandal/
apparently i brought to the plate 2 much 4 u 2 handle/
^^good punch nice meta 6/10
im tired of these wanna be bitches tryin to fake it/
u want my title well u can have it~try to take it/
^^played line weak 4/10
and im the white kid who aint tryin to be like eminem/
while u on the corner in a dress tryin to be a feminem/
^^lmao hottest verse in the battle 9/10

overall: 29/50

vote: insane16

return the favor links in sig

his verse was better overall even tho this was a weak battle not many hard punches both need to work on that

~!1!~

uppin for votes...........................................

uppin to end this shyt man.......................................

Krusty D - LOL. Opening was funny as hell...Give it to ya. Need to elevate lyrically. Only had on good punch. Structure was all mixed up too. 5/10

Insane16 - Not a bad verse. Ya had Good structure. But you lacked lyrically. It seems that you get a lot of props for punches but i didn't see any. Keep elevatin. 4.5/10

Vote - Krusty D

lol he says mine was pretty good and urs was ok and u get a higher score wow sounds like dr......

uppin for some voters to end this shyt.............................................. .........

Insane16 won that battle cuz...

That battled sucked ass though, you know what i'm sayin. Krusty basically lost to me, because he had too much glorification in his verse..

both of you had the same flow. Insane had better stucture... no personals that hit, or punchlines... but I have to go with Insane based on what I said above mainly...

Oh and return the favor with a vote in one of my battles....

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=132827

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=133042

Krusty D: I really like your flow. Your punchlines was pretty good, but it was much better than Insane's. Just work on your structure a lil' bit. Alright cool!

Did I see in one of yo posts you talk about money and fans~
Muthafucka I make more returning my bottles and cans~
I really liked that!
Overall: 8/10

Insane 16: You need to work on your punchlines, they didn't hit hard at all.

and im the white kid who aint tryin to be like eminem/
while u on the corner in a dress tryin to be a feminem/
This line was completely unnecessary. You could've have done better. Better luck next time

Overall: 5/10

My vote: Krusty D