V.i.p. Vs Canopy
 

aight spit man

aight checkin.......

Ya both suck so why ya even bothbattling lol im joking go ahead and do go KillaCamFlow

You dont get respect on this board we dont be serving hobos//
Only "pound" you ever receive was on a "virgin mobile"//
You walkin in my shaddows so take ya bible n skim faster//
Cuz you wont see "Shine" like "albinos with skin cancer"//
how can u think on an empty stommich u just bicker far//
You Beating me? thats another "side effect of hunger" go eat a "snicker bar"//
Hes my Free Vote, and this battle is starting to bore-me//
Since hes battlin me, he'll get on an alias to vote...its 5 to nothing//
You bin smoked v.i.p as long ur career and yo raps go//
But he still fights the "Truth" like he protesting against "Tobacco"//

Cam why you always tryn to diss cats, an make it seem like you tha best?

how long are you gonna take??
its only ten lines

when it comes time to spit he starts to choke/
he should be a comedien cause his rhymes a joke/
your ~weak and soft like a fuckin poptart/
hit your ~cheek and blow u over wit one fart/
o he a magician and gonna pull a fuckin trick/
wat come out his hat nuttin less then a dick/
my rhymes murder u with out a fuckin trase/
he look a lil bit betta since i nutted on his face/
talkin bout i'm fine and u wanna get on my ~snickers and take a crunch/ (finisher)
when my rhymes hit him he's gonna be seein 9 like tha brady bunch/


not alot of multis

sorry man i had to help my dad he just got home from work

aight uppin for some votes cmon bring um in thank u

ight both u cats need to elevate.. but this what I rekon

punches: canopy
flow: canopy
mutlies: vip had the only ones
wordplay/strcuture/complexity: canopy

one sided in my mind

\\// canopy

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vote on my battle wif street warrior yall
:)...

uppin for more votes be honest to please it would be apreciated

uppin this.....

Becuase i can lol...idk i just like talking junk nah keep the flowing go..just trying to make this rapbattles hott trying o have everyone againist so i got problems noone like to battle em so ill have people hate me

uppin

this battle was very one-sided to say the least....canopy had better punches, better vocab, better opener and closer....better everything
vote canopy, im returnin a favor for but canopy didnt poll his vote in my other thread so im not pollin till he does and we can get that battle finished
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=128990
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yo wtf is this shit ^^^ it was a close battle he didnt win hands down theirs no dr here

A'ight...heres the way I see it...both need to elevate...Canopy, your verse barely rhymed...yopur punches was good, but you need to ryhme...V.I.P took it simply because he ryhmed better, and that went well wit his punches (played tho). No hate, just stating my opinion.

Vote- V.I.P

uppin for votes honest ones tha favor will be returned

yo uppin for some votes tha favor will be returned

vote v.i.p he cmae stronger and had some good punches s0o0o0o0...
v/v.i.p

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aight uppin for some votes yall favor will be returned

if i could vote for this, i'd vote for canopy for better structured verse and harder hittin' punch

i just wasnt feelin canopys flow so vote goes to vip

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my vote goes to vip

his punches were alright
the flow was koo
but i wasnt feelin tha vocab from these cats

hard desicion
 

this was a weaker battle not tryin to hate both need to elevate... but the punches would have to go to VIP, canopy you still had good ones tho his poptart made me laugh tho, and thats the only shit between both of ya that gave me a smerk.

aight yall uppin for votes i had already had 5 and won but somethin happend so can yall vote

punches- vip
humor- both
ryhmes-vip
flow-both
cano bunch of stuff didnt ryhme good luck in the future (both emcees)

aight uppin for votes i had 5 and this won but canopy had tha votes deleted so uppin yall

like the whole battle but i think v.i.p got this one he came hard with punches and structure i wasnt really sure if i should call it a tie but v.i.p got it

aight uppin for votes i had 5 and this won but canopy had tha votes deleted so uppin yall

K,I don't give a shit what any1 of these cats say both ya'll have what it takes to be good textcees;
canopy you gotta try n stretch ya idea's out n be a little more creative with ya words/
ya have good idea's but just don't build them right.
punches/both
flow/vip
multis/canopy
creativity/none
vocab/vip
overall/vip
vip the only reason you won this was cause canopy's flow was a bit weaker than yours
and ya played out your ideas better ,this was actually a close battle/you both should check out the/tutorials/for more info(this is what i had to do n nobody cared enough to tell me so im tellin you) v/vip

It was onesided V.I.P gets my vote great flow good structure and an ok flow


uppin for votes look belowV

Both of you did ya think. Still need some work. Both of ya could be better. Lyrically i'm gun have to gow with Canopy. He just had better rhymes.

Vote=v.i.p.

He Had A Overall Better Verse.he Had Better Punches & Flow.canopy Had Ok Punches,but He Didn't Really Have Punches.good Battle.
Hit Da Battle Up\/