e-dubz vs. jefferson
 

8-12 lines
no crew,hate or d/r votes
no feedin
spit 15 mins from check in
u spit first

you forgot to mention no biting, so no feeding & no biting.... check

yea dats jus obvious..checkin in

to compete with me u gotta use extreme high velocities/
be prepared to spit to a hostile beat, slug flying high speed/
its like a chain reaction, the pain tacts in and my words rain reactive/
fuck around get your cranium smashed in, replace ur brain with shit cuz in fact its/
better for u to have shit for brains, than get verbally slain/
what bitch? aint heard of my name? you'll get hurt in a way/
theres a part of me that says fuck the harmony/
ill hit from a distance like connosieurs of archery/
im strapped with a gigantic armory, shouldnt have started beef/
you couldnt flow with a mic in your artories/

im so far ahead of u u cant see me wit a microscope
ur a newbie dont try to spit wit E i’ll leave u like scope
washed up and spit out, u got merked dats my feelin
da last time u had a fan it was spinnin on da ceilin
ur so played out i thought u was da old skool joint of da day
dats all i can say, i'll leave u wishin u knew how to spray
im nastier den wuts between lil kims legs b4 she started rappin
E all ova niggaz like a blanket, teachin yo girl how to get it slappin
u spittin rhymes causin da earth to freeze, please pack da burner
cuz u jus got beat worse den tina turner

iight lets get votes up in herre..holla

can we get some votes on this shit please?

uppin

Vote=E-dubz

That was a decent battle.I gave it to E-bubz for the fact he was actually rhyming,as with jefferson you didn't do that.That's a factor when battling.Do work on that jefferson.

uppin..

the star dont ever vote again.. his flow was nice... u just to simple minded to see it.. his verse ate e-dumbz.. no beef dub, but his vocab was nice, and his flow wasnt ur average normal joes.. feel me ? i might not be able to vote cause of my low posts,, i dont just post ne where... all of em have been cyphers... but back to the point, jefferson clearly won this...

jefferson- most of ya shit didn't rhyme but ya had an okay flow... tip to E-Dub i actually like the arrogance in ya flows but make you don't specialize in that... Good flow both you two...

E-Dubz took this one..

i dont see what you guys talkin bout when u say it didnt rhyme... but what ever... uppin

Hey yall niggas this battle was alright thats it for new guys to this shit it was str8 jefferson i see what u tryin to do wit ur different style but u gotta understand that u gotta get at the nigga u battlin and i didnt see that too much with E yo shit was good for a beginner ;but that last line has been played out dawg but your punches and structure were there so it goes to you...

I voted did you

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=115870

thanks fo da feedback..uppin

lets get some mo votes in here

uppin dis shyt again

uppin fo da ko holla

uppin

my votes gon go to e-dubz both need to elevate and get punches, he just came out better on this battle
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vote in here http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=129694 with honest explained votes please

wow...
 

ay no beef to the people who voted.. but seriously.. jeffersons shit was so more proffessional on the reall.. e-dubz was rhyming like "ima stabe ya hardout, and then eat you and fart out".. na mean ? to simple... the line that got me for jefferson is when he said e-dubz couldnt flow wit a mic in ya artories.. his rhyme scheme murked e-dubz verse.. whats worse: a verse with kiddy punches, or a verse wit actualy hip-hop in it.. jefferson had the better verse.. flow was there, vocab was there, punches could have been more, but he even hit harder wit the artory line.. iiht im off my pedastol now

edubs got my vote, just for tha fact that the other guy didnt really rhyme much at all.
V/edubs.