DON<VS>-$treetZ-
 

aight 10-12 lines
no cheating
no feeding
no d/r hate votes
u drop first good luck go

alright checkin in....................good luck.............

Don's Tryin To be Mathmatician's..add the bullets subtract your life....
Woulda Fucked your wife..until i realized...you was the wife.......
Your lifes a joke..even if you tied me to a tree i still wouldnt choke....
Aint talkin bout water guns when i say.."i'll leave you soaked"....
Im Dangerous..Lyrics Contageous....shut your book, rip your pages....
you was a vet when i was beginnin...you been wack for ages....
you could touch all the people in china..and you still couldn't be sick..
Make you dissapear..but you wont come back..like bad magic tricks..
Claimin You a Don..but as you can see..he's clearly My Bitch....
claimin' you a man...but your voice is High Pitch...
What more can i say "YOU WACK" kid cant even spit a rhyme....
when the kids about to get merked..excuse is.."Oh LOOK AT THE TIMe"...

bitch the only thing you know about streetz is that theyre paved...
id throw you a lyrical lifeboat but your rhymes satill couldnt be saved...
new to rb still doesnt give you an excuse...
just the same call me bishop cause when i drop you ill have the JUICE...
ill illegal juniors end up in the juvy not the prison...
and ill have you feedin ur family wit public service workin in a soup kitchen...
the only time ur ass sees green is if he changes the color of that money sign....
this bitch sucks up to every crew hed suck dick jus to get in DESTINED TO RHYME...
streetz is here hes as rare a talent as a 4 leaf clover...
but i think your mistaken bitch cause i jus made ur game over...^^look at his sig

aight lets get some votes

bitch the only thing you know about streetz is that theyre paved...
id throw you a lyrical lifeboat but your rhymes satill couldnt be saved...
Opener this sucked 2/10

new to rb still doesnt give you an excuse...
just the same call me bishop cause when i drop you ill have the JUICE...
that was allright but you streched to much no word play 3/10

ill illegal juniors end up in the juvy not the prison...
and ill have you feedin ur family wit public service workin in a soup kitchen...
this was just ass to 3/10

the only time ur ass sees green is if he changes the color of that money sign....
this bitch sucks up to every crew hed suck dick jus to get in DESTINED TO RHYME...
dont get this personal you got to explain shit like this cuz it is fucking confusing *scratch's head* 2/10 :huh:

streetz is here hes as rare a talent as a 4 leaf clover...
but i think your mistaken bitch cause i jus made ur game over...^^look at his sig
wow one good punch that accualy made me chuckle word 7/10 :evilgrin:
Don 17/50 34%


Don's Tryin To be Mathmatician's..add the bullets subtract your life....
Woulda Fucked your wife..until i realized...you was the wife.......
Gay jokes are played unless you set these up better but an allright opener
4/10

Your lifes a joke..even if you tied me to a tree i still wouldnt choke....
Aint talkin bout water guns when i say.."i'll leave you soaked"....
good mulity the only one i see so far not a good punch though 5/10

Im Dangerous..Lyrics Contageous....shut your book, rip your pages....
you was a vet when i was beginnin...you been wack for ages....
lol this was a hot mulity and a hot punch man word 8/10 :spit:

you could touch all the people in china..and you still couldn't be sick..
Make you dissapear..but you wont come back..like bad magic tricks..
not good man this wwas wack more of a filler i feel 2/10

Claimin You a Don..but as you can see..he's clearly My Bitch....
claimin' you a man...but your voice is High Pitch...
fuckin wack punchmaybe if you used some word play and switch the two lines this would have been alot better but wack as is 1/10

What more can i say "YOU WACK" kid cant even spit a rhyme....
when the kids about to get merked..excuse is.."Oh LOOK AT THE TIMe"...
This was allright but as your closer you got to come hot and you didnt man this was alright not hot 4/10

Streetz 24/ 60 40 %

v/ streetz just had some better set ups and punches

ok thats good but he had no punches jus shit he had written in his notebook for anybody but w/e uppin

oo shit don u merked this cat.... streetz u had a good verse... but don just came harder harder harder... better punches and flow.. vote goes to don

v/don

only thing about the streetz is that there paved pretty funny dawg ur flow seemed to have alot of vocab punches etc..

street wasnt really feelin ya but ok verse i will say

uppin.............................................

thats 2 d/r votes..they both gettin closed...omg...anywayz i wrote that for u..fam..i didnt d/r if u want me write another verse i will..so i can show u my skilz

u wana get votes closed i could count big kountry as a hate how u kno them 2 r d/r's u dont fuckin kno ill jus have them come bak and get them explained

since their was no crew votes mentioned i can vote

flow don

punches don

humor don

complexity really both kept it simple but don had it

overall vote don

streets u good but u just gotta keep elevaten and keep workin on ya flow peace

more D/r votes.....this shit ur gonna get D/q'd if u keep doin this

yo man it isnt dr votes u just got beat i hate this when u guys wine cause u got beat just take it like a man and stop complainin

don had dis cuz he had punches and less fillers..i aint gon vote cuz i dont want dis bitch callin it a d/r vote jus givin feedback

return da favor wit honest votes
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=129293

Lol /\ love that my name is in your sig/\ hey lets get honest vote in this battle word unexplained sux balls give and honest assement dont suck dicks Don is Good And Streez is good honest fucking votes lol

Okay, I've evaluated tha shit.
Streetz some of your shit was good but most just sounded stupid!!ex. "you could touch all the people in china..and you still coudn't be sick.."It sounds like your saying he's immune to shit, be more specific, make sure it says what u want it to say so other people can get it!!! Tha flows OK but punches were weak.

DON's shit was good.It sounded intelligent,using personification and other poetic devices really helps flow was good, punches were better.Streetz I'm not jokin' when I say to get an english book and study the poems in it, you'd get better!!!!

Vote: Tha DON

Im Not Wining You Can Not Tell Me Al Those People That Just Voted Explained Did They..no!

e-dubz
= Crew votes.. they mite be on the rules at the top but they are the rules..
V.I.P..

$treetZ wins for not running to his crew when he's losing for votes..

eh, streetz took this shit with better punches n wordplay
thats all that needs to be said.
both need to elevate.
n don u need to fuckin spell words proplly ETC ETC

\\// streetz

yeah i vote 4 streets he had mo punchlines den u don sorry 2 say

ya ya---streets---don shot ya
 

that opener wuz hot
damn near spit out ma biscuits on da lyrical lifeboat line. :laugh2:

ya ya man, ma smart so I tought bout it and got yur sars metaphor streets but ma had 2 tink 2 much 2 get it.

keep elevatin

Don dat wuz hot

streets keep honin yur skill

check out ma battles
peeps sleepin on dem
got 3 I wanna close

peace

I'll share my 40 fo honest votes

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