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Ill - Legal . .
Ill - Legal
Soul Skripts Restricted Carsonjet & Ill - Legal Juniors Rated - Leader Aka Best Junior. Dread Rush delinquent_zero If your a newbie or someone who is not uterly wack i will take you under my wing & help you get better . . Just post me a link. |
wot do u mean?
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LoL - what do you mean what do I mean ?!?!? It's a crew tryout thread. |
Upin
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lol aiight aiight...im finna tryout for this..each crew needs a hot newb (wont be a newb for long..) but check this....
Ive Been Hot For A while..you been rappin for 4 years..and still wack... Like michael jackson..burn your face off..and ask you, are you still black?... I don't want to waste my rhymes in this tryout..so imma say it like this... I Insist..you slit your wrist..cuz im tired of hearin your voice like cannibus... Wire Your mouth Shut and ask you if you knew who you was talkin too.. Leavin trails of lava..as u melt imma ask you..who u think u walkin through. Its Game over put the controller down..and My Rhymes Too.... Get out of my House..ill show you the door and my Nine Too... freestyled that in about 5..wat u think |
Ive Been Hot For A while..you been rappin for 4 years..and still wack...
Like michael jackson..burn your face off..and ask you, are you still black?... Wack . . no potential . I don't want to waste my rhymes in this tryout..so imma say it like this... I Insist..you slit your wrist..cuz im tired of hearin your voice like cannibus... Filler who cares about hearing you voice like cannibus Wire Your mouth Shut and ask you if you knew who you was talkin too.. Leavin trails of lava..as u melt imma ask you..who u think u walkin through. Nope . .wack Its Game over put the controller down..and My Rhymes Too.... Get out of my House..ill show you the door and my Nine Too... Nah that's realy wack kid Your really not good . . I'm not even sure i want you in junior's come back with a link when you have beaten someone. |
so am i in or..waz gwan?
cause that was 5 mins i didnt put my best effort...so ..do i gotta elevate or wat? |
A Punch line is what finshes your last line out of your verse to make what you said before make sense . . and usally witty or a hard disss
Your verses were full of fillers & disses were not played but dint make sense liek the canibus line. [I'll tell you what - Rock Ill - Legal Juniors < in ya sig. & we'll have a training program get you to battle to each other and get better . . |
word word i feel you...here imma do this jus' cause im bored..lol..imma try in this one i guess....
Rhymes'll Hit you So High..You Could stick your tongue out at left eye... Your Rhymes Are unsteardy, Reload the nine and Pop You In ya left thigh... My Rhymes Is "ill" Legal?..Naww I murder Kids For A Livin... Rip out your ribs..and stuff you like a turkey on thanksgivin... walkin' with sickness..so every time i touch someone they guaranteed to die.. Like Ali Vs Mini mee....in this match...i dont even have to try... |
Sup Skriptz...If You Interested I'm Free....What Dis Crew Gone Be Like?
~R~ |
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I told you on aim . . Added to Ill - Legal. |
Rhymes'll Hit you So High..You Could stick your tongue out at left eye...
Your Rhymes Are unsteardy, Reload the nine and Pop You In ya left thigh... It's still a filler . . Your not making a point at the end of the 2nd line Check this . . Example.. Your girl's a local whore & i'm always popping them bra's. And she's got a comunity chest . . like monoply cards . . If you've played monoply you will know what community chest is . . It's also trying to say .. the comunity all have a go with your girl's chest/brest.. Thats wordplay & a punch because the monoply cards explain's & make the wordplay kick in.. & it make it a witty punch But if i was you & said And she's got a community chest.. Im always hitting the bitch It would be a filler it doesnt finsh the joke or sentence or diss you get it no wordplay found. |
Yepp thanks soul Skriptz, Im up in hurr
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Oh Great...More Wackness LMAO...
Aiyo Looking At Getting Peeps In Hurr.. ~R~ |
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naah he aint wack he just need's to elevate a bit more & i'm gonna help him so just squash the beef for now . . |
Aight....
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^the way u type and layout ur sig reminds me of my old friend mystic mind. Good luck with this Soul and if u elevate those kids to ur standard I see this as the top crew...but till then...AI are setting the standard ;)
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ayo can i join this
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If i were to try out.. where would i be placed... ILL LEGAL or ILL LEGAL JUNIORS....
Jus wonderin... |
LoL...Ugh...Juniors...Both Of You...
~R~ |
^ Word . . .
You would both be junior's. |
Yo Soul....
You Like CarsonJet2X?? He My Boi and All...and If You Want I Wanna Talk To On AIM.. Holla ~R~ |
Check Out My Two Newest Topicals and Tell Me What You Think..
~R~ |
yo so i'm i in
yes or no |
Aiyo Go HIt UP My Battle Against DeadlyVision..
Its Topical..In Elevated Front Lines.. ~R~ |
lol@ soul takin noobs under his wings thats so thoughtful of you lol...newayz good luck with ya crew looks like u already got some ill heads
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Yo im Gonna Send ya a Link iight tell me if im in'
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=128362 http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=128526 http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=128547 http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=129164 Tell Me if i Made Junoirs and if u check the last 1 Vote on in to closes it 1 |
You can probably make Juniors becuz you still need to elevate alot but lets see what Soul and Restricted thinks
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Restricted am i good or not tell me if i am thanx1
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You Ain't ILL-Legal Material...Up To Rated..He Da Mod Of Juniors..
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aight this is how it is....Your on Phase Trial and if you dont elevate by then your cut no more questions asked,
nuff said -'Rated' |
So RAted Drum Roll.... Please ~ | * So * | ~
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Shit Every Time i look theres another post iight nigga i got chu 1
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Nope you aint Ill-legal
Complex is in. Rush is vinman?!?1 i'll let you in junior. |
Yo R get Carson up on this Shit . .
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here check this link out a battle against poison http://community.rapbattles.com/sho...313#post1345313
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Nope your defently NOT junior material. |
Yo im lookin to get into the top ill-legal..
Heres my links.. o and just want yall to know these 10 minute keys.. yall see some of me real shit in that tourny.. http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=129321 http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=129664 http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=128376 holla @cha boi |
*Aiyo Skriptz We Mos Def Gotta Talk On AIM*
Yo Dreed Your In Juniors...Elevate.... We Don't Need A Million Herbs Where Da Fucking Vets? ~R~ |
Aight Updates...
I Have Dreed Battling PoLiFick...If He Beats PoLiFick Then He Is In ILL-Legal Vets.... Complex Illness Is Battling Me...He Winz He Goes Into ILL-Legal Vets...I Win...and He Outta Da Crew ~R~ |
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