Cannibal_Lyricis VS immortal_Souljah04
 

aight 10 lines minimum. Souljah u go first bro.

lil keystyle........

all I need to win this battle is a keyboard and a 15 inch monitor//
fuck the rest. the screen & keyboard heating up a thermometer//

I guess I'm the one merking the other cat to me you can't compare//
have two extra legs just to runaway from this battle like a chair//

battling cats not on your level is all you be doing on this site//
blah! the only way you elevate is flying a plane at full flight//

you probably be listening to Cass & Banks to see what to bite//
you fake emcees just go red instead of green like a traffic light//

you be trying to rhyme like keystyles in a really really tight spot//
if you even get one vote you be like Kobe in game 3 a lucky shot//

not my best but whatever.........

aight listen up imma do ma best.

Listen here immortal Souljah/
thinkn ur the best damn thing since michael Jordon/

Well ur not, u dont have good rhymes, ur wack/
And im gonna prove that/

Im sitting in front of my pc trying to think that ur not gonna beat me/
which u wont, im really not worried about that/

Your not immortal im gonna make sure of it/
im about to tk ur ass back into the past where u belong/

you shouldnt even be here/
you fucking wannabe emcee/

ya i didnt really do all that great but nice battling ya. and its a damn shame i didnt even have 10 damn lines. its pitifull.

ya my spit wasn't my best either but whatever good luck on this yo....

ya u 2 bro. but im bouts to go to bed aights imma add ya to my buddy list if thats cool wit ya.

yep its cool wit me................................................ ..........

yo i wasnt feelin none yall i mean u both came weak sunded like it took u a while i think of ur rhymes but i am going to give this one to souljah boy right here his line was just a lil better than cannibal ohh and cannibal elevate more man cuz ur lines are pretty basic get more vocab in them and rhymes
v/souljah

okay I know I came weak..........well anywayz uppin for votes in the bitch!

My vote goes to mortal he just planly took it all flow and punches

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all I need to win this battle is a keyboard and a 15 inch monitor//
fuck the rest. the screen & keyboard heating up a thermometer//
aight.....no punch
I guess I'm the one merking the other cat to me you can't compare//
have two extra legs just to runaway from this battle like a chair//
aight......
battling cats not on your level is all you be doing on this site//
blah! the only way you elevate is flying a plane at full flight//
ok...nice punch
you probably be listening to Cass & Banks to see what to bite//
you fake emcees just go red instead of green like a traffic light//
ha ha ok
you be trying to rhyme like keystyles in a really really tight spot//
if you even get one vote you be like Kobe in game 3 a lucky shot//
alright......ok closer

7/10
you had some punches no personals but you came harder than the next
verse im about to break down

Listen here immortal Souljah/
thinkn ur the best damn thing since michael Jordon/
ok.....NO
Well ur not, u dont have good rhymes, ur wack/
And im gonna prove that/
no punch....
Im sitting in front of my pc trying to think that ur not gonna beat me/
which u wont, im really not worried about that/
ok.....wheres the punch
Your not immortal im gonna make sure of it/
im about to tk ur ass back into the past where u belong/
this line didnt even ryhme.....
you shouldnt even be here/
you fucking wannabe emcee/
ok again....NO

elevate kid...thats all i got to say..work on your punches and personals
3.5/10


vote=IS

drop an honest one on this

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=129783

ill do a vote on ^^^that one lata gotta go to school got a exam today

~I'm Out~

uppin 4 sum muh'fuckin votes up in dis bitch!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=129834
vote on that..

IS took this for a better verse altogether.. punches hit pretty hard and flow was smooth..
CL your verse was ok but weak punches and flow was off...

VOTE.. Immortal_Souljah04...

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Damn Weak Battle...Cannibal...you new and all but your verse wasn't good...and your punches well really didnt hit hard..but some didnt even rhyme manye...but you said you tryed so it's aight all ya gotta do is just elevate manye....immortal you came weak wasn't your best but good enough for the win...so your verse was decent ...your punches were good also...so overall Immortal got his with a better verse and punches.....

v/Immortal Soulijah

its as if verbal took my words. i really agree to what he was sayin. with exception that cannibal jus threw words out there that weren't really connectin'. But both were aight.

yall two need to get double/triple rhyme scheme on.
Work on Multi's

if ya need help P.M. Me

its as if verbal took my words. i really agree to what he was sayin. with exception that cannibal jus threw words out there that weren't really connectin'. But both were aight.

yall two need to get double/triple rhyme scheme on.
Work on Multi's

if ya need help P.M. Me

Check out the second link with Me and Souljah(Finished)20 posts min.

aights uppin 4 votes and remember to explain it...and leave links if you want
i'll get back to it fo sho

aights uppin 4 votes and remember to explain it...and leave links if you want
i'll get back to it fo sho

~Im OUT~

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Listen here immortal Souljah/
thinkn ur the best damn thing since michael Jordon/
^-/10 Weak Opener..!!

you shouldnt even be here/
you fucking wannabe emcee/
^Weak Closer -/10

!!

Imortal Soulja..:

all I need to win this battle is a keyboard and a 15 inch monitor//
fuck the rest. the screen & keyboard heating up a thermometer//
^Safe Opener..!!! Aight Punch!!!

you be trying to rhyme like keystyles in a really really tight spot//
if you even get one vote you be like Kobe in game 3 a lucky shot//
^Weak Closer' .. But Betta Then Any Of The Other Cats.. Lines' ..!! 6/10

Vote: Immortal...