Immortal_Souljah04 Vs. [(REAL+POLITIK)]
 

rules are...

10 lines max
no dick ridin
2 days to post after check in
u spit first -- u got the advantage

check checkin in i'll be done in a while i'll drop 4 bars.

nevermind I'll do it in a day or so............................................

ok ok here it is lil keystyle no pre-written shit not my style....


hmmm....homie look here's another wannabe version of Pac & Nas//
he drops and he waits for an hour and realizes he gettin' no applause//
(cant hear anything on a computer unless people have a mic)

bad boy blah! look at they record label not a hit since Tha B.I.G.//
he looks like a fuckin' she and was kicked out by a goddamn banshee//
(ban-shee I said he was a "she")

ha is dat you in your signature looks ridiculous like DML said//
couldn't have any good brainz if he sucked a dick ya know head//
(brainz are in ya head!!!!)

summin' up your age's number is the only way this cat can be lucky//
you just another chickenhead you probably came from Kentucky!!//
(hes 25 years old 2+5=7 7= lucky number)(KFC=Kentucky fried chicken)

Sorry 4 the wait homie (Vacation)
 

:laugh: :laugh: I look at this Comp & Laugh :laugh: :laugh:




If u saw the measurin' rod that Real Politik was holdin'/
U know u fall shorter than "Webster" & Gary Coleman'/

A grown man, more like a "Lil Bow Wow" wit No Fans/
He holds hands, wit dudes, a "sweet" fag energectic/

My lines uncontested He collapses from "sugar"...... "DIE-I-BET-IT!!

You humans with a penis, the only thing vicious about this nigga is how well he take anal/
You got an A in math cuz you sucked ya teachers dick at a 90 degree angle/

(2+5=7---this nigga can add, double that = his age-- lmfao)

I spit shit so hot that satan had to take an ice bath/
This man is a coward and a homo, he scurred of vagina but he love getting ass/

Nigga you dont 'Stand A Chance' like 'Legless People Playin Soccer'


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this was real hard but i think R.P. had funny ass punches and good flow.. and shouljah real nice if rp's wouldve been just a lil weaker ya would have got it but
vote = R.P.

i gotta vote for R.P. because what the other nigga spit was already wrote down and that isn't battling cuz he didn't really talk about the opponent.

nice drop POLITIK for real good luck well uppin 4 votes anywayz!!!!!!!!!!!
and leave links

ur nice too. uppin..........................>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>.

well i personaly didnt care for this battle... just wasnt feelin it is all, both had pretty good verses but imma give this one to RP due to the humor factor alone... they both had ok punches... structure on both was a mess... but RP wins this one because it was funny as hell.

VOTE-RP

okay nice battle but da shit was wun sided soljah ya personal was wack y would u post da link 4 dat lol

opener-real..is was kind of weak but it was betta tan soljah's
structure-soljah...real all da color's shit dont work
punchlines-real..dis were he killed u at soljah
creativity-real
multis-nun
personals-a tie
finisher-soljah...real ya shit was 2 long
enjoyed-real....his punchlines killed u dogg str8 up and soljah ya verse was 2 basic and ya ryhme scheme was wack u need da step dat up 4 real

my vote- real

PLEEZ RETURN DA FAVOR DA LINK IS MY SIG...GON

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Dogg Whuts Really Good Y U Uppin Dis Post Askin 4 Votes When U Dont Vote On Shit I Took Da Time Out Da Vote On Ya'll And Ya'll Cant Drop Me A Honest Vote In My Shit...matter Fact Ima Get My Vote Changed Fukk It

uppin>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>........................................... Goddamn fuccen vote

lmaooo ur a clown 4 real i wont be votin on nun of ya battles no more

Uppin 4 Votes Yall. 111111111111111111111111111 more vote

Souljah04
you had the structure...everything was in order...punches were hard 'n' shit..but the kentucky shit.....slum'd down... :(

R+P
your structure was a lil' off..the punches were harder than Souljah's & it landed..ur verse had me weak wit the gary coleman shit....haha...

Overall
R+P took this one...had harder punches, the punches landed & the verse was betta...

Souljah's best line (probably)
hmmm....homie look here's another wannabe version of Pac & Nas//
he drops and he waits for an hour and realizes he gettin' no applause//

R+P's best line (probably)
If u saw the measurin' rod that Real Politik was holdin'/
U know u fall shorter than "Webster" & Gary Coleman'/

vote = [(REAL+POLITIK)]