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Poison v. *The~Star*
10 lines aka 5 bars
no crew or hate votes lets do it |
listen
star thinks he's hot, i dunno who sparked his flame, they need to tell em tha truth he aint even hot as his name//
i bet chu was raised by wemon, gay uncles an hermaphrodites, if all da lyricists in tha world taught u how to spit u still wouldnt be tight// ima bout to end yo stardom an wipe tha tears from ya face, take ya fathers roll an say stay in a childs place// ya like my student an im tha teacher givin a lesson, star don fuck wit poison or you will need a spiritual blessin// tha bottom line is, ya thought this battle would be easy, ya like a blind kid cuz youll neva be able to see me// im done |
uppin for votes
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Just let u know,I'm a female.OK,here we go....
+I do this ‘dude’ bad, treat him like he had ‘detention’/ Treat him so ‘rude’, you wouldn’t wanna ‘mention’+ +Don’t take ‘long’ for me to get in his ‘mind’/ So he wanna ‘prolong’ the battle, cuz he know the win ‘mine’+ +’Cold-hearted’, I’ll leave you in a puddle of blood’/ ‘Retarded’, you’ll try to play in it like was ‘mud’+ +Stop trying to touch the ‘crown’ of being on my level/ But you gone be ‘drowned’ to reach yo level+ (ha) +I ain’t gotta spit ‘flames’ against ‘lames’ to show my ‘name’ I’m the one to play the ‘games’, cause ‘shame’, bury ya ‘fame’+ |
o my bad i didnt kno i thought you was a dude lol
still uppin for votes |
uppin fa votes
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come on niggas vote
show us both love |
POISON-
star thinks he's hot, i dunno who sparked his flame, they need to tell em tha truth he aint even hot as his name// WEAK- 2 i bet chu was raised by wemon, gay uncles an hermaphrodites, if all da lyricists in tha world taught u how to spit u still wouldnt be tight// MORE WEAKNESS- 2 ima bout to end yo stardom an wipe tha tears from ya face, take ya fathers roll an say stay in a childs place// ALMOST PUNCHED- 2.5 ya like my student an im tha teacher givin a lesson, star don fuck wit poison or you will need a spiritual blessin// WEAK-2 tha bottom line is, ya thought this battle would be easy, ya like a blind kid cuz youll neva be able to see me// WEAK-2 POOR VERSE- ELEVATE MAN. STAR- +I do this ‘dude’ bad, treat him like he had ‘detention’/ Treat him so ‘rude’, you wouldn’t wanna ‘mention’+ WEAK- 2 +Don’t take ‘long’ for me to get in his ‘mind’/ So he wanna ‘prolong’ the battle, cuz he know the win ‘mine’+ ALMOST A PUNCH- 2.5 +’Cold-hearted’, I’ll leave you in a puddle of blood’/ ‘Retarded’, you’ll try to play in it like was ‘mud’+ MEH, WEAK- 3 +Stop trying to touch the ‘crown’ of being on my level/ But you gone be ‘drowned’ to reach yo level+ (ha) BETTER- 3.5 +I ain’t gotta spit ‘flames’ against ‘lames’ to show my ‘name’ I’m the one to play the ‘games’, cause ‘shame’, bury ya ‘fame’+ MEH- THATS A POOR MULTIE FLOW- 3 STAR TAKES THIS. POOR BATTLE |
Come on People
We Need some Votes It would be nice |
im ashamed of my self cuz i kno i coulda did WAY better, i wouldn be suprised if star won. but we need votes so vote
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yo star got this 1 she came out hittin like muhhamid ali and landed i would say on the letterman card all punches
poison came out kinda wack wasnt really tryin it seems v/thestar I ain’t gotta spit ‘flames’ against ‘lames’ to show my ‘name’ I’m the one to play the ‘games’, cause ‘shame’, bury ya ‘fame’+ like that line by da way Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
We need some more votes.
Won't take long. I'll return the favor,just leave links Holla back |
Posion gets my vote his punches hit harder and his flow was smooth.
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W e n e e d v o t e s
They need to be nice explained votes. |
DAMN,I wish you assholes would stop sleeping and hit dis battle up ya dig.
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yoyoyo, this battle wasn't good, I seen both rapper go b4 and they both fell off in this battle. I guess it wasn't a good time to battle. Poison got a couple in but Star was more constitent.
winner..... *The~Star* Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
i think poison got this one cause i think his punches were better and his flow was real tight
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Upppin 4 Votes
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alright
poison: wasnt feelin ur verse and ur shit was stretched and very very VERY bad structure..you could of did much better in this battle...your punches werent hittin and either was your personals..and the first line i heard before.....you could of did much better the star: your stuff was aiight...your opener wasnt that good..but you picked up and got better...and your closer was ill...you had ok punches..and good personals..good flow and structure..good job vote the star |
It's nice to see another femcee, but I just wasn't feeling you Star. You had the world play and all, but your punchlines didn't hurt or have the effect that Poison's did.
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poison had good structure and some decent punches but lacked in personals. he started off well but the quality of his punches went downhill. star started off by playing with poisons teacher call which wasnt too good. she threw a good punch about skill, but it couldve been better (rhyming level twice had a negative effect). the attempted multi at the end only really boosted stars flow
WIN ---> star because of the "level" punch http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=130600 <--- peep it please |
Come on peeps just one more vote or a couple of more.
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i hope u win star, cuz this was so shitty comin from me, im disappointed in myself i coulda did way better
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this battle sucked.
both punches were lacking , not many personals... Poison came a little harder though (punch-wise) overall: Poison Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
aight it was a aight battle but poison's punches seemed to be hitin harder plus i was feelin his flow vote poison
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aight since my fukin vote got dq'd ima go wit the same person the star
out of 10 punches/7 vocab/8 structure/9 humor/7 poison dawg u came out strong to dawg punches/6 vocab/7 structure/5weak humor/0 vote pison for havin more stats she is the winner poison good luck dawg but no hard feelings she wooped my ass 2 lol |
Vote on this damn battle,Its been going 4 ever
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This battle will never be over.Wake da fuck up peeps.Thank you
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Need Votes
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pretty weak battle..poison i have seen way betta from u, u didnt come out hard at all..shudnt have taken star so lightly..star iight punches and good flow, and structure
v/star return da favor and vote on da battle in my sig |
WEAK battle ive seen better then this
Do i need 2 say who won?? Star got this she had better word play and better punches... Nice shit... V//Star! |
This battle hella old.This was my first battle.I think Poison too.So yeah it wasn't all that
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yea this sux..............but im murkn cats now
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iv seen better from both of you!.. but ima say this goes to star... she had a few more punches then pois did... neither one of you drop nething like this again lol :P (jokes)...
Punch strength:pois # of punches:star structure:star flow:star wordplay:star vote:star |
where the smiley face is, meant to say Pois, but that smiley is there instead of the P
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