TheOne vs. Blimp
 

no d/r, crew hate votez
8-10 linez no mo no less
spit 10min afta chek in

aight u no show bitch, u gotta spit today like u said u were or ur d/qed

aight chechin in 8 or ten dats all i need 2 win nicca

can u drop an honest vote on this battle..ill return the favour http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=129341

da rulers back so nigga facts i got 2 give//
i run shit, like laxitives//
i understand u hatin cause im hot like i hang wit satin//
da best out theres no debatin//
u don't like it well, i get attention like fights in jails//
flow deep like pipes in wells, u don't like my style tell dis nicca eat ice in hell//
i aint gotta impress u special//( as in retarded)
they hear me like dats who, come and let da god come bless u//
u need so help, go 2 gunfights and reach 4 ya hip and dis nigga only sqeeze his belt//


dats it holla back

aight, nice nice, ain't gonna be negative, now letz get sum votez on thiz battle

y u ain't spit nuthin they can't judge a one verse battle

oh ma bad, lmao:laugh:

Thiz guy right here thinkz he kan beat me
Well i'm gonna stand up and make him see
That wen ur wid me ur gettin burned
So pay attention, an at the of of skewl i hope u've learned
The basicz of rhymin, rappin an a fukin battle
U suk sum cok, actually more then a slut, give her a rattle
She comez to the room sukz ma cok again, an ur still tryin to get betta
So i'm gonna waste u now, give u a collision course, put u through the shredda
Ur getin grinded up an learnin ur lesson
I hope u now no how to battle, an no mo r u guess

now letz get sum votez on thiz battle, don't kare if i win but gimme sum feedbak ppl!! :thumbup:

yea need some votes so we end dis battle holla uppin 4 votes

letz get sum votez ppl, u neva vote!!! fo ma battlez anyway......:confused: so letz get sum votez in!!

i think da blimp won hands down, da one kinda lost me in da middle reread it an still was lost. you said u were goin 2 stand up an make him see but u went off someelsae not hatin holla

i think it wuz a hate but wuteva, i don't kare bout winz, itz all good man peace out, thanx fo the feedbak

uppin 4 votesholla back so i can close dis and battle someone else

letz get sum votez ppl...drop votez an feedbak on this battle

need some votes so we can end dis battle so check it out and vote

aight ppl....holla atcha boyz wid sum HONEST votez an no hatez (like nervez did) but w/e letz go!!!leave linkz an we'll hit em up

need some votes come on yall

Thiz guy right here thinkz he kan beat me
Well i'm gonna stand up and make him see

TheOne what kind of opener was that, I just totally didnt understand it.

Blimp you didnt really open that well either.

Both of yall need to work on ya structure, and your flow cause they are way off and it makes it harder to read.

In the punches their wasnt really anything spectacular, other than blimps closer...that was the best punch of the battle. TheOne the rattle rhyme has been played so many times, you need to be more creative with it.

No real good metas, multies, personals.

It has to come down to Blimp throwing the better punches.

v/Blimp

Vote=Blimp

THis battle wasn't very good.TheOne had bad structure.His punches also wasn't very good,along with flow.There was no wordplay.Basically it overall was a bad verse.Blimp could have came better,but he did enough to win the battle.Even though the punches were weak,they were better than what TheOne had.

I'll poll when someone hits my battle up

need some votes come on yall

i gave it 2 BLIMP
i liked his wordplay n
punches plus ONE's
flow was kinda off
v/BLIMP
vote 4 deez battles
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=138339

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=137991

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=136487

peace

i run shit like laxatives i get attention like fights in jail good punches bad follow ups though.neither had personals blimp had better flow struture and vocab and a better verse with better disses neither really spit hard this is more like a whos verse is better then a battle.......blimps verse is better so he gets the vote.






honest votes get honest votes back check my battle with ill bing

Blimp

da rulers back so nigga facts i got 2 give//
i run shit, like laxitives//
->>second line too short...it was decent

i understand u hatin cause im hot like i hang wit satin//
da best out theres no debatin//
->>second line too short...weak bar

u don't like it well, i get attention like fights in jails//
flow deep like pipes in wells, u don't like my style tell dis nicca eat ice in hell//
->>ehh..weak

i aint gotta impress u special//( as in retarded)
they hear me like dats who, come and let da god come bless u//
->>doesnt make sense

u need so help, go 2 gunfights and reach 4 ya hip and dis nigga only sqeeze his belt//
->>weak closer it needs another bar



TheOne

Thiz guy right here thinkz he kan beat me
Well i'm gonna stand up and make him see
->>weak opener

That wen ur wid me ur gettin burned
So pay attention, an at the of of skewl i hope u've learned
->>decent

The basicz of rhymin, rappin an a fukin battle
U suk sum cok, actually more then a slut, give her a rattle
->>second bar fell off bad

She comez to the room sukz ma cok again, an ur still tryin to get betta
So i'm gonna waste u now, give u a collision course, put u through the shredda
->>so-so

Ur getin grinded up an learnin ur lesson
I hope u now no how to battle, an no mo r u guess
->>decent


Kinda weak battle but TheOne took it. Blimp you were all over the place you gotta work more on punches. No personals from either end.

Wanna Battle
 

Hey The one u wanna battle............if u do set it up and PM me or somethin

Blimp i like your name and your lines had good catches, they needed to flow a bit better though,

you were much better though