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deadly vision vs. enygma
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battles go up sunday night around 10:00 pm eastern check in by wedsday verses due by thrusday votes due by the next sunday around 9:00pm eastern rules: no dick riding no crew votes no freeposting that's what the beef thread is for if you do it here more then three times your dq'd no feeding off of other guys verse bar limits: 4 line min. 16 line max. |
Wtf We Battlin For The Second Time!!!
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Third actually. Well, if you would have showed in last weeks tournament battle it would have been three.......
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Yea the 5 way match .....damn sou l told me about it after people voted. OOh well homey. Lets do this....10 lines blah!! aight. |
Here's 12 for ya.....I hope you like it :)
You watch the tough get going....cause your going's getting tough I should stretch before givin ass whoopins.... ....But your lines are stretched enough Where's the fucking bandwagon?....cause this dude just loves to board 'em This faggot's begging to get recognized... .....In his own fucking forum! You shouldn't get your hopes up.....shit, I like your confidence But I'm ripping this pussy.... ....like a clumsy Gynocologist You must be fucking crazy.....don't know who you're fucking wit I can tell you're fucking nuts.... .....Your asshole's too wide for just the dick This cat's gangsta? Are you kidding me?......shit, I'll admit it This dude's busting caps.... ....his head's too big for the fitted Stop beating around the bush.....you'll never be in the coochie so please, be frank.... .....cause we're sick of you being Suzie! Owned! |
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23-9!! Witness me dig the 'Spade' in his 'Heart' this verse is Haneous from Start.. Enigmatic homo! u love My dick juss cuz I got mah Name on the Charts.. =Heat= He knows i got harsh words that'll 'Split his Girdle' when I Spit this Verbal.. A so called Vet! Enygma the only play that u get is yo crew giving u honor or jerkin off to Info-Mercial.. Go ahead diss me while u Roam from Board 2 Board Suspiciously.. U aint cookin like i said! U beggin for a rematch might gain u some Publicity.. Vicious Felonies, while his weak open mic crew C.S spits 'Friendlier Melodies'.. Beat u b4 herb,but I Got a Question when attemptin 2 battle me again was it Envy or Jealousy.. =M-E-R-K-E-D= Quote:
^^U claim that u are 'fly', switch it around but deserve tittle herbness for Life'.. Nothin Personal, Just Business!!Ur rhymes are weak & ugly, Like his mugshot wit his transexual Wife.. Blah!!Hope u enjoy this...one. :thumbup: |
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WOW......we're fuckin dope! We are the only ones to drop on the first day.....
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aight this is a mediocre battle if u ask me
dv ur structure was really better but quoting is gay since every1 is doin it ya know, enygma urz it quite garbo, i seen wordplay come from the both of you to Vicious Felonies, while his weak open mic crew C.S spits 'Friendlier Melodies'.. Beat u b4 herb,but I Got a Question when attemptin 2 battle me again was it Envy or Jealousy.. ^^that was the punch that just killed it, dv got some personals on enyg You must be fucking crazy.....don't know who you're fucking wit I can tell you're fucking nuts.... .....Your asshole's too wide for just the dick ^^this was ur best punch but i believe u didnt have that much to actually take him down vote-dv he didnt just have punches he had stronger personals too if neither of u two slutbags like this vote then you're both gay :) |
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lol well let me break it down E, came alright can tell he didnt really try, didnt have hardly any punches. personals where alright tho DV just came harder in my mind in all aspects. he wanted it more. he got it.. flowz: dv punches: bearly dv personals: dv multies: none wordplay: dv pretty much sums it up. \\// DV |
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Engyma got this shit easily. better punches more wit. DV, the links get played out after a while. expecially when you dont use them creativly v/Engyma for coming stronger |
breakdown for enygma:
flow:kinda off in some spots i thought wasn't workin as well as i've seen in past weeks 5.5/10 volcab: alright nothing really to say here 6/10 punches:a couple of alright lines not too bad on trying with the personals my fav line,"You shouldn't get your hopes up.....shit, I like your confidenceBut I'm ripping this pussy........like a clumsy Gynocologist" alright job 6.5/10 overall:18/30 breakdown for deadly vision: flow:alot clearer then enygma i thought good job 7/10 volcab:nothing overly special here workin alright though 6/10 punches:some good lines my fav,"Nothin Personal, Just Business!!Ur rhymes are weak & ugly, Like his mugshot wit his transexual Wife.. " good close, both of you did well on the personals 6.5/10 overall:19.5/30 vote--close battle but i'm voting for deadly visions |
LOL.......are you serious?
How can anyone say that he had a better flow? I threw a punch talking about how stretched his lines would be and he still came with them. I can't believe you fucking idiots don't know what a good verse consists of.... Nice spit DV.......I just thought mine was better...... |
^^thanks u had nice verse to dawg.
score: 3-1 up please. |
enygma's verse had some nice creativiiity,punches.structure and flow was good...i like the punch about the stretched out lines...but yes you had some nice word play in this verse
DV ur structure was a little ugly from my point of view...punches were decenent...but the gay jokes are mad played...,okey shit man you flowed okay in this,.....but ur puntches didnt hit as hard as enygma's did v/ enygma-- for harder hittin punches,and a nice structure |
I am sorta in DV's crew but if u except this vote im being honest. Il break it down to show u how i think.
Sorry but rules are rules!!! It says NO crew votes so this vote is cancelled!! |
You watch the tough get going....cause your going's getting tough
I should stretch before givin ass whoopins.... ....But your lines are stretched enough 7...gud personal, but nuthin too special!! Where's the fucking bandwagon?....cause this dude just loves to board 'em This faggot's begging to get recognized... .....In his own fucking forum! 8...LMAO!! nice personal!! You shouldn't get your hopes up.....shit, I like your confidence But I'm ripping this pussy.... ....like a clumsy Gynocologist 7...gud punch, nice vocabs!! You must be fucking crazy.....don't know who you're fucking wit I can tell you're fucking nuts.... .....Your asshole's too wide for just the dick 8...TIGHT SHIT!! funniest line yet!! This cat's gangsta? Are you kidding me?......shit, I'll admit it This dude's busting caps.... ....his head's too big for the fitted 7...another funny line!! Stop beating around the bush.....you'll never be in the coochie so please, be frank.... .....cause we're sick of you being Suzie! 7...gud closer!! 23-9!! Witness me dig the 'Spade' in his 'Heart' this verse is Haneous from Start.. Enigmatic homo! u love My dick juss cuz I got mah Name on the Charts.. 6...wasn't feelin it,the gay shit don't work, unless its really funny!! He knows i got harsh words that'll 'Split his Girdle' when I Spit this Verbal.. A so called Vet! Enygma the only play that u get is yo crew giving u honor or jerkin off to Info-Mercial.. 7...nice multi, but the 2nd line was too stretched!! Go ahead diss me while u Roam from Board 2 Board Suspiciously.. U aint cookin like i said! U beggin for a rematch might gain u some Publicity.. 6...aight punch, some gud vocab!! Vicious Felonies, while his weak open mic crew C.S spits 'Friendlier Melodies'.. Beat u b4 herb,but I Got a Question when attemptin 2 battle me again was it Envy or Jealousy.. 7...nice line, gud vocab and nice multi!! ^^U claim that u are 'fly', switch it around but deserve tittle herbness for Life'.. Nothin Personal, Just Business!!Ur rhymes are weak & ugly, Like his mugshot wit his transexual Wife.. 8...hott closer!! nice personal!! POINTS TOTALS enygma - 44/60 73% dv - 34/50 68% V/ - enygma |
aight umm 4 like 1000th time there's no such thing as flow usin text...but aneway dis battle was wun sided 2 me enygma i dont know whuts good dogg but only like wun of ya bar's ryhmed lol true story u had a few personals datz cool no punchlines...and dat was't wordplay dogg u need da leave whut eva u was tryin da alone
deadly u know we dont like each other but u merk dis nigga...ya structure was betta and ya punchlines was killin him..i dont caer about flows n shit personals and punchlines is whut battle r about and u had dat my vote-deadly.......enygma pleez dont say nothin smart just accept da lose |
enygma wasnt really feeling your verse that much.....didnt like yuour flow or yousr structure.....i know that its different but i just dont like i i used to use that but then stoped cause it fucked wit the flow...u had a few personals but you didntreally have any punches
deadly u merk dis nigga...ya structure was betta and ya punchlines was killin him..i i also enjoyed your flow and your structure more and felt that your punches hit harder then his along with your personals |
Ummm......did Marvy or Flash even read the verses?
Marv.....what didn't rhyme? Every one of my lines rhymed with each other. And if you can't see flow in text, try to read it out loud.....or are you one of those "A.....a.......buh....buhh.....boy....went....tuh.. .. tuh.....to......the.....ssss..sss... store" Fucking illiterate bastard.... and how do you say that personals are what battles are all about and then have in your sig "personals r played...4 real" Flash.....what wasn't a punch? I clowned him in every line. I would have came with the same old personals like I did in our last two matches (like deadly did) but I thought I would try something original instead..... Thank you for helping me decide to leave this site......I will finish my obligations but I will accept no new battles. I'm Out!!!!! |
^ a wise decision, enygma-sun.
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ummmm dogg u must didn't read whut da fukk i said in my last line....dont say nothin smart u fukkin got killed ya fukkin garbage ass lines did not ryhme and ya structure looks retarded....and about da personal u suppose da use personals but every battle i had niggaz start off sayin some "u da sickest on da site" just like u when we battled u played da shit out....dont get madd at me dunny step ya rap game up and everybody flows different so how da fukk can u sombody read ya lines and say oh his flow is hott shut da fukk up stupid...just accept dat u fukkin got merked nigga move on
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Ok Enygma u kno u my dawg.......is just a battle............u aint got to leave the site for a damn battle man..........
anywayz i lost track of the score up. |
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^ You what alot of shit shut the fuck up. Before I personally merk you & teach you how to speak english. |
5-3 for me.
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You watch the tough get going....cause your going's getting tough
I should stretch before givin ass whoopins.... ....But your lines are stretched enough ~6/10 Where's the fucking bandwagon?....cause this dude just loves to board 'em This faggot's begging to get recognized... .....In his own fucking forum! ~7/10 You shouldn't get your hopes up.....shit, I like your confidence But I'm ripping this pussy.... ....like a clumsy Gynocologist ~7.5/10 You must be fucking crazy.....don't know who you're fucking wit I can tell you're fucking nuts.... .....Your asshole's too wide for just the dick ~LMFAO...9/10 This cat's gangsta? Are you kidding me?......shit, I'll admit it This dude's busting caps.... ....his head's too big for the fitted ~ 6/10 saw where u were headin but coulda been worded betta Stop beating around the bush.....you'll never be in the coochie so please, be frank.... .....cause we're sick of you being Suzie! ~4/10 wasn't feelin it... 39.5/60=6.58 23-9!! Witness me dig the 'Spade' in his 'Heart' this verse is Haneous from Start.. Enigmatic homo! u love My dick juss cuz I got mah Name on the Charts.. ~ 6/10..ok He knows i got harsh words that'll 'Split his Girdle' when I Spit this Verbal.. A so called Vet! Enygma the only play that u get is yo crew giving u honor or jerkin off to Info-Mercial.. ~ 5/10 Go ahead diss me while u Roam from Board 2 Board Suspiciously.. U aint cookin like i said! U beggin for a rematch might gain u some Publicity.. ~ 6/10 Vicious Felonies, while his weak open mic crew C.S spits 'Friendlier Melodies'.. Beat u b4 herb,but I Got a Question when attemptin 2 battle me again was it Envy or Jealousy.. ~ 6/10 Quote: Originally Posted by enygma Catch me in real life and I look a little more thugged out.Looks can be decievin seein ^^U claim that u are 'fly', switch it around but deserve tittle herbness for Life'.. Nothin Personal, Just Business!!Ur rhymes are weak & ugly, Like his mugshot wit his transexual Wife.. ~ 8.5/10...nIce personal 31.5/50= 6.3 close one but its goin to enygma... please return the favor http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=129590 |
5-4.
up. Its close. thnx for voting. |
You watch the tough get going....cause your going's getting tough
I should stretch before givin ass whoopins.... ....But your lines are stretched enough LOL STRETCH BEFORE GIVIN AN ASS WHOPPIN IS FUNNY..... Where's the fucking bandwagon?....cause this dude just loves to board 'em This faggot's begging to get recognized... .....In his own fucking forum! THIS WASNT HARD HITTING AT ALL You shouldn't get your hopes up.....shit, I like your confidence But I'm ripping this pussy.... ....like a clumsy Gynocologist I DONT LIKE THIS AT ALL You must be fucking crazy.....don't know who you're fucking wit I can tell you're fucking nuts.... .....Your asshole's too wide for just the dick LOL ITS FUNNY...BUT ISNT A NUT SMALLER THAN A DICK? I GUESS IT DEPENDS WHAT NUTS UR TALKIN ABOUT... This cat's gangsta? Are you kidding me?......shit, I'll admit it This dude's busting caps.... ....his head's too big for the fitted LOL I LIKE THIS Stop beating around the bush.....you'll never be in the coochie so please, be frank.... .....cause we're sick of you being Suzie ROFL...... 23-9!! Witness me dig the 'Spade' in his 'Heart' this verse is Haneous from Start.. Enigmatic homo! u love My dick juss cuz I got mah Name on the Charts.. I GET THE 10,SPADE IN HIS HEART PART.....UR VOCAB IS ON A LOT HIGHER LEVEL..BUT THE PUNCH IN THE 2ND LINE WAS WEAK =Heat= He knows i got harsh words that'll 'Split his Girdle' when I Spit this Verbal.. A so called Vet! Enygma the only play that u get is yo crew giving u honor or jerkin off to Info-Mercial.. I DONT LIKE THIS AT ALL Go ahead diss me while u Roam from Board 2 Board Suspiciously.. U aint cookin like i said! U beggin for a rematch might gain u some Publicity.. PERSONAL....BUT NOT THAT HARD HITTING... Vicious Felonies, while his weak open mic crew C.S spits 'Friendlier Melodies'.. Beat u b4 herb,but I Got a Question when attemptin 2 battle me again was it Envy or Jealousy.. THIS IS NOT A PUNCH..... =M-E-R-K-E-D= Quote: Originally Posted by enygma Catch me in real life and I look a little more thugged out.Looks can be decievin seein ^^U claim that u are 'fly', switch it around but deserve tittle herbness for Life'.. Nothin Personal, Just Business!!Ur rhymes are weak & ugly, Like his mugshot wit his transexual Wife.. LOL.......WELL,U COULD'VE SAID WAYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY MORE ABOUT HIS WIFE MAN.......... OK,VISION HAS BETTER VOCAB N MULTIES N SHIT......BUT ENYGMA GOT BETTER PUNCHES....PERSONALS ARE EQUAL I THINK MAYBE VISIONS GOT MORE.......BUT AGAIN,PUNCHES ENYGMA GOT....I THINK HE KEEPS IT MORE SIMPLE,BUT HAS HARDER PUNCHES,...WHICH IS WHAT COUNTS IN A BATTLE,VISION,U REALLY DIDNT HAVE ANY PUNCHES JUST PERSONALS....U USED TO WRITE DIFFERENT I THINK I MENTIONED THIS BEFORE U SHOULD STICK WITH UR OLD STYLE..................VOTE ENYGMA |
5-5.
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kinda weak battle,
flow-d (i couldnt follow enygmas very well) punches-d metas- weak, but d multies- weak from both, but e creativty- d structure- d vote- deadly vision kinda weak battle truthfully. You watch the tough get going....cause your going's getting tough I should stretch before givin ass whoopins.... ....But your lines are stretched enough (lol this was iight) He knows i got harsh words that'll 'Split his Girdle' when I Spit this Verbal.. A so called Vet! Enygma the only play that u get is yo crew giving u honor or jerkin off to Info-Mercial.. LMAO, i liked this one |
uppin over no shows
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6-5 deadly visionz
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