mixtape vs. ketch22
 

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verses due by thrusday
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no dick riding
no crew votes
no freeposting that's what the beef thread is for if you do it here more then three times your dq'd
no feeding off of other guys verse
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get me off ya death list dog
i merked ya

fuck you
 

^^fuck outta here u lil ho..i won that shit .. you went n cried ta strobe..it went ta closed battles as a win 4 me an u got it takin back out an got ya boy ta vote on it..fukin geek stay out my threads..i should calm down or you prolly go cry ta strobe again..lil faggot..1

kEtCh~22
40CaliberHitz, A.K.A., Ainmo, Big Kountry, Mc's Reaper 1 16.67%
Kingz
Lethal Kahn, Mad Dog, RASCAL, Rated, t-storm 5 83.33%

who got murked..fuu outta here..i don't need a mod ta get me a win..thas why u stayin on the list..lol

It's god spitting, guess who's on top winning…
Your more like 'how much could i take till i get busted' like shoplifting…Me vs. who's in this bout… The rudeness amounts, contort forms which'll literally have you putting your own fucking foot in your mouth…
Hand grenades makes it too simple…
I'd rather take the pin out, stabbing your own chin out to turn pimples into dimples so deep…
the buried dead flinch in grief…
Uncontrollable, Known to Put my tounge to a bullet and lick shots before the bullet hole forms in you…
Watch the infinite speed, in less than minutes leave,
Ketch appearance fucked up seriously…
I hate you already, Throw you off the earth so hard the crust moves like pizza delivery…
It's funny how when you see your own watch leave your wrist and take defense you know time must be running out...

here it is ..g luck
 

g-luck....

First off! ya 'Threads are Froze' Like Washing in Blizzards,
Stuu ya in Barrels And Tombs, Inflicts Terror while Spittin Perils Of Doom,
Me Taking A Loss? that's Unheard Of Like Christmas Carols In June.
I Provoke This Bastard, so dog, ya Better Get Ghost Or Blasted,
Cause Da Only Hollow Tips Mix Carry Are Cliff Notes From Casper.
jokin, at no Time Do Glock's Hover, but still ya need ta Stop Brother,
cuz You'll just Neva Be On mY Plane Like Boxcutter's.
& Its Plain-ta-seA like J.F.K, Parents Prolly Lames & bitch Cowards
shit... if u was Raised by Muslims, U still couldn't Trade wit dis Tower.
This is ova..dun wit rippin this Gay, time ta spit on ya Grave,
What do think, RB's Dumb, Everyone Know U neva been on ya Name!!!

EDIT...left out a line...here we go again

g-luck....

First off! ya 'Threads are Froze' Like Washing in Blizzards,
I'll Leave u at Tha Bottom of tha Atlantic'like Tha Washington Wizards.
Stuff ya in Barrels And Tombs, Inflicts Terror while Spittin Perils Of Doom,
Me Taking A Loss? that's Unheard Of Like Christmas Carols In June.
I Provoke This Bastard, so dog, ya Better Get Ghost Or Blasted,
Cause Da Only Hollow Tips Mix Carry Are Cliff Notes From Casper.
jokin, at no Time Do Glock's Hover, but still ya need ta Stop Brother,
cuz You'll just Neva Be On mY Plane Like Boxcutter's.
& Its Plain-ta-seA like J.F.K, Parents Prolly Lames & bitch Cowards
shit... if u was Raised by Muslims, U still couldn't Trade wit dis Tower.
This is ova..dun wit rippin this Gay, time ta spit on ya Grave,
What do think, RB's Dumb, Everyone Know U neva been on ya Name!!!

up................................................ ..........

can we get some votes fam

Mixtape- your struc was off bad...fix that next time...as for your verse...overall it was
good, but you didnt have any personals and your punches tried to diss ketch..but didnt

who's in this bout… The rudeness amounts, contort forms which'll literally have you putting your own fucking foot in your mouth…
this line was alright......but kinda weak
Ketch appearance fucked up seriously…
I hate you already, Throw you off the earth so hard the crust moves like pizza delivery…
this line was ok but you really didnt diss him....more like you hate him
overall: 7.5/10

Ketch- again your overall flow was good....i think your punches hit harder than mixtapes....and since neither of you had personals thats what makes this decison

& Its Plain-ta-seA like J.F.K, Parents Prolly Lames & bitch Cowards
shit... if u was Raised by Muslims, U still couldn't Trade wit dis Tower.
nice line....punch and good use of wordplay

This is ova..dun wit rippin this Gay, time ta spit on ya Grave,
What do think, RB's Dumb, Everyone Know U neva been on ya Name!!!
ha ha......nice punch again

overall: 8/10

vote: Ketch 22

An alright battle i guess.....................

Mixtape u came real weak in my opiniopn and i think u cud have done better.....ure structure was a bit wack and that gave u a choppy fucked up flow in places....u had the punches and personals in there....a couple of nice hard hitting ones but mainly weak and played....u need to elevate in that area.......overall 6/10

Ketch~22 u came gud in this battle....u had a nice structure which helped ure verse to flow well from start to finish.....u to came pretty weak with the punches and personals though....u did show a little creativity with some alright wordplay....nuthin real basic to point out....i just think u need to further elevate ure punches and personals to....overall 7/10

V/- ketch~22

uppin 3-0 thanx for votin all..1................

mixtape- u didn't hit hard enough, a couple good lines but ure flow n shit was way off, i didn't really feel u
punches-6
flow-4
over all verse-6 16/30

ketch tape-u killed this guy easily, ure punches hit hard and ure flow was nice, u won the battle hands on cause of structure and better battle
punches-9
flow-9
overall verse-9 27/30

ketch tape takes this oen ez

I dont feel like explainen much Mix is in my crew but i vote aginst him..

Ketch just had better Punches and flow hestays on the same track also.Mix ur elevatin i understand all ima say.

V-22

ketch wins. structure sucked for both, but he had nicer punches. both need to step up, especially with the personals.

lol dog u got all herb votes, unexplained too. all u did was PM for votes
ya verse was wack as fuck

ketch22 wins