poison v. andu09
 

10 lines aka 5 bars
no crew or hate votes
lets go

its ova
 

tired of cats disprespectin, im steppn it up.

andu betta find a way to escape this match, cuz poison bout to lyrically rape this cat//
as soon as this starts im quick to get it over,your weed, im cocaine you gotta admitt that im doper//
my lyrics stay smokin, like cheech an chong, thats prolly why i got ery girl in ya fam on they knees in thongs//
im quick to murda cats but i aint no thug,do you see this dudez rhymes, this is wut its like when ya brains on drugs//
its all good though, you can stop breathin hard from ya chest, so write ya lil verse cuz beatin me is far fetched, but go head an try ya best//

elevatin daily hataz

u battlin , but u chose the elite/~~/ ya better get ya head on straight/~~/ fore u get swept off ya feet/~~/its gettin late but i still can get some satisfaction/~~/thats right ya girls ass on my dick/~~/ i can feel the fuckin traction/~~/ ya done challenged a lyrical genius/~~/ 10 lines , 5 bars, we'll see who's the meanest/ goin against this im pretty u goin need a clean diss/~~/im feelin this shit all the way /~~/ every flow every ryhme /~~/ beatin yo ass everyday/~~/but ya should know that u wasted your time/~~/cause i just lyrically dominated , so the win is mine
andu vs. poison

uppin for votes

need some votes

damn yall nice battle even though i cant vote it was a nice one

aight people someone gotta vote

ayo im out ill up this shit tommorrow aight peace

both need to elevate a fuckin lot and PACK PUNCHES

my my votes gon have to go with posion, just had more disses

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could ya cats vote on my battle with the outsider cheers
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=129321

if i could vote i'd vote for andu09 for better punches, but both need to elevate

by the way could any of yall battle me, set one up tommarow 12am eastern time, around that, thanks

dread you need to fuckn elevate, an economics you crazy as fuck.

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krusty
 

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dat wuz nice and the flow wuz smooth
brain on drugs
hahahahahahahahahaha :laugh2:
i'm doper
hahahahahahahahahaha :laugh2:

nice start aight finish
nice work wit yur brain



couple nice lines in dere
but den sum choppy shit like

goin against this im pretty u goin need a clean diss/~~/im feelin this shit all the way /~~/ every flow every ryhme /~~/ beatin yo ass everyday/~~/but ya should know that u wasted your time/~~/cause i just lyrically dominated , so the win is mine

y'all both did good
keep doin it if iz fun
vote/poison

hit up ma battles below
no hatin
just from heart

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my vote goes to poison he had way better punches and a very good flow to go with it

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Vote=Poison

Nice spit from Poison.Audu stuff wasn't even rhyming.Poison just killed him.Nice spit.

vote please

vote please
need mo votes

need more votes.

please vote ill return tha favor

lemme break dis down fo ya

punches-poison
flow-poison
structure-poison
vocab-poison

This has to be the most one sided battle ever
Vote-poison

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one more vote thats it please vote

one mo vote please end it

finish this off an vote

Oh, hell nah.

Andu, dude. What is up with your structure? There were no punchines, no wordplay, and your whole verse was choppy.

Poison, I hate to say this but... You didn't do as well as you could have either, but you still did better than that other cat.

vote- Poison.

vote.............................................. ..

whew.............
This was one of the best battles Ive seen so far
The punches were very good on both sides and boy did Poison come hard on his freestyle

Open -Poison
Structure - Poison
Flow- Tie
Punches - Tie
Ending- Poison

UNDO ALL YOU HAVE TO DO IS COME A LITTLE HARDER ON YOUR OPEN AND CLOSING AND YOU WOULD HAVE TOOK THIS ONE

my vote = poison

Could some of yall vote on one of my battles

BLUE WATER

this was a good battle but id have to give it to poison....he had tha better punches that hit harder than ando09s poison had a better rhyme scheme thou keep elevatin

vote ill return tha favor.................................

vote ill return tha favor..............................

[size=3][font=arial narrow]Poison won this...str8 merk'd on this kid..he had mostly everything to merk this kid...tha punches...tha flow....tha wordplay...tha personals..and tha structure..Andu...for some advice...elevate more then come & face some1...so that u won't get merk'd again...my vote goes to Poison...peace...