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the_crazy_one V/S DON
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no hate or crew no d/r 3-0 KO 4-1 TKO this is a no beef battle just pratice for both of us but is on battle credit system so dont sleep |
yo ive been here for 4 months/
and im already tearin it up/ chillin wit my ni99ers in lyrical infection/ just so I can be in fection yall/ and all I got to say is that this white boys AK-47 is never missin a beat/ cause ever day im a bring da heat/ and every couple days ill roll through your hood/ just to let you know that were not messin/ as I suppose your guessin/ that im a fake-wackass-cracker/ but how’s that when im the on whose killin you son/ now whose the fake-dumb-one/ when were the ones runnin clips through our guns/ and your then one who sees us comin and don’t even begin to run/ cause if you don’t then you will be dead from the holes in ya head/ cause im the crazy one and just remeber that son and just remeber to run/ cause if not then we will be callin you the-dead-one/ Not DON there dumb dumb/ and if you here that name then you just better start to run/ cause im a cross of the grim reaper and god/ so remeber that when you rollin 6 feet deep/ and im still up top killin all of your peeps/ Out............................................... ................. .................................................. ................. allright DON there you go |
aight i got no problem batelin but i wont be here at all today im leavin now there was an emergency so im goin bak up to phili for the night wit my gradmom aight pc
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all ight thanks man ill holla at ya later
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dont get it closed ill wait to drop till tomoro wen i get bak aight man pc
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WoW u need to elevate the crazy one u need to keep elevating man......wat good ur verse was very veyr bad elevate
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crazy one is stupid he asked me to battle cause he thinks hes hot...
but crazy describes him i mean the bitch even believed eminem got SHOT ... i duno maybe in indiana the whites believe that theyre really black... but a white crip damn this boy deserves to be SLAPPED ... nobody would laugh at ur punches not even if u bribed the crowd... braggin your from keokuk sounds like a vaginal disease,so i wouldnt be proud... even if your title was in caps i would still be dominant... he made the advance from my bitch to flyweight wow thats a real accomplishment... this country boy shouldapply for pimp my ride AND rhymes cause damn boy you suck... your done and unpimpable i mean look at wat cd he jus bought for his TRUCK ... |
uppin for some votes lets go......................
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uppin for some votes here dont let it sleep aight thanks pc
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uppin come on vote................................
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uppin come on somebody vote god this is takin too long
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yppin god damn it
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yo i got to give it to don
punches-don structure-don flow-don over all-don yo crazy u woulda had it if u came wit better punches and flow but u came weak i dont knoww hat it was but elevate more dawg v/don |
aight thanks for the feedback uppin for some more votes
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keep uppin dis shit
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uppin dont let this sleep i need this to close so i can battle somebody else so VOTE!!!
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aiight aiight lol Don got this easily..crazy your shit was elementary bad flow BAD PERSAONLS...no punches..horrible structure...but you'll elevate soon time..jus keep your head up..feel me...your shit was pretty bad though..i wasnt feelin any lines..and they were too short
DON: your shit was good...you tried to hard though lool...you coulda merked him with elementary rhymes..your shit was pretty good..i was feelin your opener..good shit..good punches..good personals..ok structure..good flow...good battle mayn vote : DON |
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Don took this with ease. Crazy one showed no true talent. Bad structure and some of his shyt didn't rhyme. Don had harder punches and a better overall verse.
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uppin u can leave some links if u vote aight pc...
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Don gotz my vote, you both need to elivate, Don just directed his punchlines better, and u both stayed simple. And thats pretty much it. Peace...
V/ don, but i'll vote on tha poll after yall vote on one of tha battles on my sig. then hit me up after ur done, peace. |
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DON got this one...he just murk'd this nig & left...DON you had some pretty good punches and thw flow was aight..structure was good...tha whole shit was good..CrAzY...stretch ur lines out more cuz hardly any of em made since...and elevate more..then come battle some1...
v/ DON |
uppin all i need is one more vote to finish this off so vote i dont care if u leave a link
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uppin..........................one more vote to finish off
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this is a one-sided battle ... Don took this all the way: Flow,Punches,Structure,ect ...
vote: Done |
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