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TheOne 06-14-04 07:13 PM

TheOne vs. sdizzle
 
aight
due tonight
10-14 linez max
no d/r, crew or hate votez
peace an g/l

sdizzle 06-14-04 07:28 PM

he bites his names from movies... so u know that hes all fake
... the one wouldn't be hard.... if he was on bodies by jake
hes a no-name.... hell be made famous as a lost to urs truely
........and ill have him seeing star like on the set of a movie
u wont go far..... and the role u play in this battle is co-star
and u only pretent ur hard..... like faggot porn stars
u dont write lines u bite mines.... and dig into my mind
..... and have u out cold..... like hes stuck in the alpine
these newbs give me headaches.... and with all my scolding
.....i cant seem to make him understand... not to use bolding
jesus all u use is fancy symbols trying to make his punches hit harder
...... and u saw ronald regan die.... do u want to be jimmy carter?
to let u know...... the s in sdizzle.... well it stands for scott
and the ones on a c-trip.... cuzs hes been riding on my cock

TheOne 06-14-04 07:29 PM

aight, i'm ready, letz do thiz

Y u kallin urself sdizzle, u ain't even a nizzle
Or a nigga, who r da best, no doubt, fo shizzle
I mean sure, u wanna be a blak boy
But wait, i kan't be judgemental, i'm a white toy
Who likez to release his mind through rhymez
Aw..dissin u....man those were the easy timez
They were easier then pullin big crimez, too easy
Or actin in a soap, which r sooo fukin cheesey
I saw ur "pretty challenged" naw ur just tryin
To be sum1 else, don't be sum1 else, ur lyin
To urself, on the inside, that meanz u weak
A future in thiz path iz lookin really bleak
Be u an no1 else, let go of the rap "threadz" be u an no1 else, u dum fuck
If thatz u, fine, but itz not ur look, like rappin, get sum help, beatin me!...u need luck

TheOne 06-14-04 07:31 PM

u dont write lines u bite mines.... and dig into my mind

if thatz true ur mind iz pretty weak, but anyway letz get sum votez on thiz battle ppl!!

sdizzle 06-14-04 07:48 PM

give me my win..... upping for 5votes

TheOne 06-14-04 07:50 PM

yeah. u wish man, i tried to go easy, so i went wid ur "pretty challenged" bullshit

TheOne 06-14-04 07:54 PM

so ya, i'm gonna stop wid thiz bitch, an letz get me sum winnin votez ova here!

TheOne 06-15-04 07:57 PM

cmon ppl, we want sum votez on thiz battle, cmon letz get sum

SKForty7 06-15-04 08:10 PM

Vote- Sdizzle, Flow was tighter,
"ill have him seeing star like on the set of a movie"
Nice Line,
TheOne, Your Rhymes were just childish and amateur,
Need To work on your flow too.
Not Beefing, Just Givin My Opinion, Peace

SKForty7 06-15-04 08:12 PM

Leave An Honest Opinion On This Battle When CS Has Posted His Verse
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=129891

sdizzle 06-15-04 09:23 PM

upping..... skforty ill hit up yours a little later

jefferson 06-15-04 09:32 PM

good punches are how battles are won and i didnt see any in TheOne's verse... gotta work on that man.. nice verse sdizzlei saw some punches in there that got at him pretty good you get my vote

sdizzle 06-16-04 05:42 AM

upping

SKForty7 06-16-04 07:37 PM

In Need Of Honest Votes -
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=130067

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=130025

Peace, SK

TheOne 06-18-04 03:37 PM

yo ppl, cmon vote on thiz battle an leave the feedbak!!!!! thanx peace out(\1/)

-NERVEZ- 06-19-04 12:39 AM

the one came wit it put it down on sdizzle.dizzle blood you was to predictable with da rhymes fo me though "bodies by jake had me n my folks rollin it seemd like u showed him mercy im goin fo da 1

LiL HoPPa 06-21-04 05:20 PM

idk wut any of yall wanna say, the one gotz this one, he had a real cutt up in his rhymes, he knew somthin about sdizzle and used it agianst up, his line that went like this.."I saw ur "pretty challenged" naw ur just tryin
To be sum1 else, don't be sum1 else, ur lyin"
hahaaa boyz cuttn up on his pic, and he do be lookn like hes pretty challenged.
But ya i was feeln it, and i didnt like tha beat that sdizzle was use'n.

TheOne 06-21-04 05:49 PM

aight all tied up now letz get sum mo votez on thiz battle

SparSin 06-23-04 09:48 PM

the one
Y u kallin urself sdizzle, u ain't even a nizzle
Or a nigga, who r da best, no doubt, fo shizzle
1/10 fuck ya racial shit white black dont give a shit
I mean sure, u wanna be a blak boy
But wait, i kan't be judgemental, i'm a white toy
2/10
Who likez to release his mind through rhymez
Aw..dissin u....man those were the easy timez
1/10 weak ass punch
They were easier then pullin big crimez, too easy
Or actin in a soap, which r sooo fukin cheesey
1/10 who u throwin punches at??
I saw ur "pretty challenged" naw ur just tryin
To be sum1 else, don't be sum1 else, ur lyin
2/10 weak punch
To urself, on the inside, that meanz u weak
A future in thiz path iz lookin really bleak
6/10 sounded better then the rest
Be u an no1 else, let go of the rap "threadz" be u an no1 else, u dum fuck
If thatz u, fine, but itz not ur look, like rappin, get sum help, beatin me!...u need luck
4/10 alright ender

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SDIZZLE
he bites his names from movies... so u know that hes all fake
... the one wouldn't be hard.... if he was on bodies by jake
6/10 nice opener and punch
hes a no-name.... hell be made famous as a lost to urs truely
........and ill have him seeing star like on the set of a movie
5/10 nice methaphor
u wont go far..... and the role u play in this battle is co-star
and u only pretent ur hard..... like faggot porn stars
6/10 lol i like your disses you a pimp
u dont write lines u bite mines.... and dig into my mind
..... and have u out cold..... like hes stuck in the alpine
4/10 alirhgt shit
these newbs give me headaches.... and with all my scolding
.....i cant seem to make him understand... not to use bolding
1/10 weak line
jesus all u use is fancy symbols trying to make his punches hit harder
...... and u saw ronald regan die.... do u want to be jimmy carter?
3/10 alright shit
to let u know...... the s in sdizzle.... well it stands for scott
and the ones on a c-trip.... cuzs hes been riding on my cock
3/10 weak ending

ONE-17/50
Sdizzle-28/50

SparSin 06-23-04 09:49 PM

not tryin to hate
 
not hatin on you one i know you got better shit then you just dropped i gave ya an honest vote return the fav

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=131129

-Finy- 06-24-04 06:39 PM

Another Weak Battle, Both Need To Work On All Aspects,But I Feel Sdizzle Took This B/c He Had Better Punches & A Tighter Flow, Not Much Multies From Either Side, Wordplay Was Weak, Anyways VOTE: sdizzle

servin them up 06-29-04 01:19 PM

to be honest neither was hot neither had punch lines nor did each other have excitement in there flow....... i say its a draw

pk 06-30-04 10:52 AM

sdizzle threw some punches The One needs more work u r gettin it mabe next time

sdizzle 06-30-04 03:23 PM

upping

Archeologist 07-01-04 11:16 AM

vote.. Sdizzle just better simple as that..
pz.


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