Verbal Violence vs... Poison
 

yo 8 - 16 lines max
u spit first
first to 5 votes wins
no crew votes
hater votes
d/r votes non of dat shit ight
~one~

here i go
 

ayo im about to cease tha peace, man my rhymes off tha chain so i jus released tha beast//
battlein me you must be havin a moment of defiance, dude ya rhymes are so dead i had to give em a moment of silence//
ya rhymes are healthy man an mine are jus so sick, see me an you are tha difference between a man an a bitch//
ery time you battle ya must turn on ya pathetic code, not knowin wuts goin on while im changin the protein synthesis of ya genetic code//
ill melt chu wit heat in mah lyrics, call em lasered eyed rhymes, come back next time wit some plagiarized lines//

im done

uppin fo votes

are you gon spit?

aight yo

yo he clames to be poison well im the anti virus//
more than the lethol injection i think ur rhymes need the silence//
u claim ur rhymes are sick well im the doc//
i think its time for ur so called sickness to end and stop//
when i come with the mystic style ur knees weakin and u start to drop//
make him choke like em did to poppa doc//
its the end of his time but he aint know how to tell time on a clock//
take a note and pen read my rhyme take advice on how to plot//
man and bitch ur the one legged hoe who stoled my rhyme and got caught//
just to get a piece of mind go back to nursery school learn how to rhyme//
than maybe u could come wit some plagiarized lines//

aight yall need to vote on dis right here alright~one~

uppin fo votes^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^

Vote=Poison

He took this.He had a nice spit.He had harder punches.Some real nice punches.But it was still a nice battle. Make sure ya hit minez \/

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Aight

Flow-Both
Punches-verbal
humor-verbal
vocab-Verbal

Overall-Verbal

Poisen u used words in a nonsense kind of way.

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A realy realy close one but i have to give it to Verbal Violence.
Poison had better flow but Verbal Had better punches, and punches is where it matters

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good, battle... real close too. Poison came strikin vicious and then fatigued at the end. Verbal also slowed down at the end, but he hit with strong rebuttals and took it.

winner.... verbal violence

uppin for more votes!!!!!!!.................. aight~1~

we need mo votes

like i told the others i'm getting tight with the voting cuz no one votes on my battle but yet i vote on your so before i vote on your battle can one of you please
vote on tha battle on my sig and i promise i will return tha fava

verbal voilence u got to come harder. make sure ur punches make sense. You said "anti virus" but what u should have said was antidote. it makes mor sense. poison U had this guy with punches but remember dont cantradict ur self. first u said his flows were dead then u said his flows were healthy. all in all Poision got dis ko

can yall vote on this battle for me Its on front line bowelle 1

uppin for more votes on dis if yall could~one~
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i felt that poison won this because his verse had better vocabulary and harder hitting punches.. decent battle tho

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break down

punches:both
flow:poison
wordplay:none
structure:poison
overall:poison

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vVe3rbal Vionlence all da way he dont Strech his lines out like a over weight ho wit Strech marks get it < - - - -:laugh2:

Verbal won this cause of none Streched lines better flow personols punches more action packed Verse he won any way im a good voter and battelr allmost all niggaz kno me and they whould say da same shit

V/Verbal Vionlence

verbal gotz mine, they were both good as fuck, nice battle, but idk, i just liked his better, his punchlines, and other dude seemed like he was using words carelessly, alrite peace.

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man i dont know about this battle both kinda simplistic...aight not gonna vote on this at the moment

buddah if you wasnt gon vote why da fuck u postin in here?
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yo yall need to uppin them votes and make um so they dont get dq'd gith and dont forget to post ya poll 2

vote please ill return tha favor

Eh... Verbal yah shit started out tight but it faltered, stumbled, and bombed at the end. What happened man?

Poison, you took this dog. My fav line:
battlein me you must be havin a moment of defiance, dude ya rhymes are so dead i had to give em a moment of silence//

Hilarious man. Remember that when you need my vote- the funny is what I like.

Vote- Poison.

aight
i think poison won this cause i was feelin his flow and his punches hit harder and verbal did good but kinda fell off at da end good battle yall

I loved both openin's, I liked Verbals lil retaliation to Poisons moment of silence line.
This was a close battle, Both had some pretty good punchlines, Both's vocabulary wasnt to bad, poisons did have a lil better tho, kept it a lil simple, but it was good. Ummm Verbals went all together better, U know what it was so close, i think ima have to go by openers and close'n lines. I didnt really like Poisons opening line, i loved Verbals opening, it was pretty good. Both kinda had tha same endin line, u guys said nothing about feeding off eachotthers stufff, and Verbal did do that, but he did add a lil more and made it sound better, so ima have to say.. my vote goes to Verbal.

v/ verbal.

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this battle came down to punches, the rhyming and flow were on equal levels. poison takes this because he threw good punches and his verse was entirely original, while verbs bit off posion for punches. this also ment that verbal basically copied poison for a rhyme scheme, but poison had better rhyming involved with stronger punches

win ---> poison
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http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=128964
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Ok i think Poison got this because he had better punches overall and harder hitting ones.. flow was smooth and rolled all the way through this and structure was pretty steady but could use a little summit summit doing to it..
VV you had some good lines but some were Eh! which let you down and caused you the loss..
\/0te Poison..
pz.