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VALOR vs deadly rymes 01
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Look Bitch...
Yo im killin this fake kat he accually thinks he's Good... Goin under the front of a Car Doesint Mean ur Hood... so u wanna GEt Rough u should stop it Fake Thug... Yo Lyrically ill punch u n the Only thing Sheding is Blood What happend Ho can't Get up to my Standards... Hill-Billy Bitch lookin like Big kountry wearin Su-Spenders... Contract my flowz hott Valors Whack... Like a Crew a Battlers i will Attack and make u watch ya Back... Man i been here longer wanna sue cuz u New... Nigga can't Look good wearin Bo-Fu... How High thing Nigga Actin like its Hockey sayin i have a couple of Saves... Nigga Was Scared to battle me why u Reppin atlanta Braves... Tossin and Turnin Flippin this Sqruipt on this Bitch... Flossin and Burning Trippin this Witch ya beat stop talkin Shit... Ya Done like a Flow Blowed Ho wit no punches in this fuck... Got Them hittin u hard packed in lunches,like crunches this ho is beat up.... iight im tired i got no shit right now no feedin w.e u prolly got this im Tired as a Mutha fucka so the Atlanta Braves shit he got a Aim Exspression Atlanta Braves 1 |
yo here it is
kid come on now....battle me?homie your ass is not ready.. i dont know why you think your dope because your rymes arn't deadly..(name) keep it steady,your original rb record was o-3 that aint right.. lol well come to think about it thats probably why you retired from the site..(sig) i beat da magician and graphex already and you will be merked in seconds.. your crew is the wackest on rb so why in the hell are yall called lyrical legends.. this cat comes with rymes that are mad elementery.. hes spittin bout childish shit like they did back in the early 19th century.. and after this battle you herb your ass will remember me.. because after this brudal loss im giving you your ass will be pro-testing injury.. but with truely wack and horrible lines like that,go ahead and be-hard.. this was a fun battle,my only sadness is that i had to go and merk a re-tard.. blah im done |
Whoaa We Both came wack i think tired emceeeees lol!!!!
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Damn Its All Gonna TAke Extra Long To Get Votes On THis Bitch Right Valor well w/e
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yo deadly rhymes too this one ya'll. i really felt his flow especially towards tha end. pretty gud flow there. this battle was practically even on many levels. valor had nice personals towards tha start. i felt he kinda dropped off a bit. both had aiight punches, and good flow. this was n aiight battle, really close but because deadly had better flow im a give it to him.
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lol, cant vote...dunno y it aint letting me...weird shit..sorry
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DAmn that fuckin Sux does it say suntin like Ur not Allow to vote on this battle cuz dat whuold mean some 1 BlackListed You i dont got 1 nigga on ma BlackList
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deadly got this i could tell he came weak on dis cat but i like the flow of it all and the vocab
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ok mt bad for the bad explanation ok here it goes deadly came with punches and vocab and rhymin
i like the flow of this whole battle valor came pretty hard but deadly had more punches and came strong v/deadly |
Iight ...im gonna have to give this battle to deadly he came a lil better...i liked his personals and wordplay...and flow.....valor had punches........valor work on the sturc is was crazy lol....well as ya sayed ya was tired so i can nto say much but i think deadly won because he just hit harder wit his rhymes iight
Vote-dr http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=129513 |
aight both of you had an alright drop nothing special but i think Deadly hit
harder with his verse, he had some nice punches, didnt see many personals but your wordplay was aight Valor...maybe you were tired prob not the best ive seen from you....your punches didnt hit hard but they did hit so with that said vote=Deadly drop an honest one on this http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=129783 |
Lol No Disrespect But I Swear I Killed This Dude With Ill Punches And Sick Personels...yall Dick Ridin........flow Doesn;t Even Matter Lol Wtf....but O Well Lmao Uppin Number 2...no Hate
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yo i duno wats goin on on this site but i see ppl jus murderin other ppl but cause of the voting rings the ppl who did better dont win.aight my vote goes to valor cause i liked ur punches u had strong personals specially bout the old rb but ur opener was weak. deadly ur open was alright but ur flow was too consistent it got boring and ur lines were played out more like they were notebooks cept u did throw in some good punches and persoanls in there.so my vote goes to valor for all around better verse
v/valor return the favor hit this battle up pc http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=130033 |
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yo ill dorp an honest vote here if u drop an honest vote in my battle first http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=133666
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Well I see this battle hella old
Vote=Valor My vote goes to him for better punches.Both could work on flow.Also could work on structure.Yeah but ol' dude wins cuz of punches. |
PLEASE RETURN THA FAVOR
Me vs. SevenThird Deadly Rhymes 01 - Not a bad verse. Tha lyrics could have been better though. You had some iight punches in there. Good structure and a few multi's. Overall ya verse was iight man..........6.5/10 Valor - Overall just lyrically you ate em up. You had less punches yet they were stronger. I was feelin em more. Last line was nice. Left me wit a grin. Good job to both of ya no hate..............7.5/10 Vote: Valor |
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Yo im killin this fake kat he accually thinks he's Good...
Goin under the front of a Car Doesint Mean ur Hood... PLAYED so u wanna GEt Rough u should stop it Fake Thug... Yo Lyrically ill punch u n the Only thing Sheding is Blood ..NOTHIN THERE What happend Ho can't Get up to my Standards... Hill-Billy Bitch lookin like Big kountry wearin Su-Spenders... GAY Contract my flowz hott Valors Whack... Like a Crew a Battlers i will Attack and make u watch ya Back... NOTHIN Man i been here longer wanna sue cuz u New... Nigga can't Look good wearin Bo-Fu... How High thing ???WTF Nigga Actin like its Hockey sayin i have a couple of Saves... Nigga Was Scared to battle me why u Reppin atlanta Braves... THIS IS DECENT Tossin and Turnin Flippin this Sqruipt on this Bitch... Flossin and Burning Trippin this Witch ya beat stop talkin Shit... GAY Ya Done like a Flow Blowed Ho wit no punches in this fuck... Got Them hittin u hard packed in lunches,like crunches this ho is beat up.... WACK yo here it is kid come on now....battle me?homie your ass is not ready.. i dont know why you think your dope because your rymes arn't deadly..(name) AIGHT PERSONAL... keep it steady,your original rb record was o-3 that aint right.. lol well come to think about it thats probably why you retired from the site..(sig) LOL i beat da magician and graphex already and you will be merked in seconds.. your crew is the wackest on rb so why in the hell are yall called lyrical legends.. LOL ...DUNNO WHY BUT I FIND THIS FUNNY this cat comes with rymes that are mad elementery.. hes spittin bout childish shit like they did back in the early 19th century.. WEAK and after this battle you herb your ass will remember me.. because after this brudal loss im giving you your ass will be pro-testing injury.. WEAK but with truely wack and horrible lines like that,go ahead and be-hard.. this was a fun battle,my only sadness is that i had to go and merk a re-tard.. AIGHT...NOT THE HARDEST.... OK THIS IS A NO BRAINER.....DEADLY U ONLY HAD ONE OK LINE,ONE PLAYED THE REST WERE GARBAGE... VALOR..U HAD SOME FUNNY PERSONALS..SOME WEAK LINES,OK CLOSER....U DEFINITELY TOOK IT NO CONTEST |
Hmm... Deadly... The one thing that you really need to work on... Is Played out, and corney as fuck lines... Ok flow and structure... Punches were also ok, could have hit harder... Valor, your stucture could use some clean up... But your punches also hit harder and you had better personals...
V/Valor http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=137958 ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ Hit this up |
yea i agree.. your punches could have hit a lil harder deadly.. your ish is a lil bit played.. but i mean everyone needs to work on something right ?.. jsut work on that and you should be strait...
i thought valor came harder with punches.. and thats all he seemed to need in this battle.. V/Valor http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=137581 hit this one^ |
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