L.I. verse A.I. (=topical=)
 

lol tittle: I.I vs A.I

but ooh well..................................

A'ight...haha at title name...a'ight lets do this...checkin' in droppin' later.

hehe nice thread name...had me confused....goodluck fellas....

*i truely know where im going at the end of my ~live~*
*2 get there im gonna have 2 b unselfish and sacrifice*
thats supposed to be life not live...

uppin for him to spit his verse...........

Topic: Heaven or Hell
 

A'ight, uppin this shiznit for some votes.........

Nice spit both of yahs... good spits... peace

Up.

A'ight...this is bein slept on hard.....uppin this shit..........

I dont even think this is needed because Deleon is beating Flash.= A.I won

But ooh well..lol

the name of the thread keeps trickin me lol....up this for these guys.....VOTE BIATCHES.....

Well you kicked DeLeon out of A.I...so if I happen to win this, we will have a final match. Uppin this shit so we can see who won...

nice spit man close close battle.... good luck uppin^

^^^^^^^^^Werd. At least fuckin vote on this battle...for fuck sakes been slept on for like 4 days....

hmmmm
 

fairly average topical overall..............but the topic woz tricky
very close between..not much in it at all......

breakdown
Wordplay..basic from both nothing special...shadows slightly more complex
Flow-limited took it just...jus found it easier to read
Structure-both good...nothin in it really....
imagery...i think limiteds was again slightly beta...i like how he compared heaven and hell...i jus felt it more than shadows
multies..shadow..more of them

overall...tight battle
limited takes it for me..think his flowed beta,i jus felt his verse more,more imaginative.

vote-limited

Fuckin' uppin' this shit for closure.....at least we got a vote.

A'ight...uppin this mufuckin' shit.................................

damn uppin^^ madd being slept on damn....

ok fisrt like to say that sig that shadow has was made by me if you want one holla at me.
shadow was closer to the topic. like ever line went with the topic no trailing away.
Limited Edition some of your stuff was weird you said you going to hell then you said you love people what's that.
i liked shadow better
but it was all good

Ugh.......WHAT DOES IT TAKE TO GET VOTES??????????

Uppin' This Slept Shit...fuck Ya'll...if You Peep It Vote On It.

Upp this mufuckin slept on fuckin shit.......

Uppin' this fuckin' slept on shit...for fuck sakes...been open for a month...

FUCKIN SLEEPERS. This shit has been open for like a month...VOTE HOES!!!!!!!!

yo good battle ya'll shadow i had trouble understanding urs.. it was good but it was hard ... limited i felt u more on this i just think u came harder overall so my vote goes to u

Uppin This Shyt Damn U All Are Madd Sleepin On This Damn

Shadow

*im gonna go 2 heaven 4 all the good things i did*
*not commiting crimes and being saved from sins*
/\ Nice opener

*im staying outa trouble and going to that church*
*all my good deeds an praying will pay-off and work*
/\ A nice bar there

*always read the bible and got the cross on my chain*
*i might swear.. but never use the lords name in vein*
/\ Nice again

*im going to heaven.. cuz im good but im not a saint*
*i dont get evrything i pray for no need 4 complaint*
/\ Aight again

*i truely know where im going at the end of my ~live~*
*2 get there im gonna have 2 b unselfish and sacrifice*
/\ True nice bar again

*i go 2 church evry sunday im there right when it starts*
*i cant be a hater.. becuz hate is murder in thy hearts*
/\ Nice biblic word 'thy' well used

*im not going to hell becuz my life would then b a waste*
* i cant go to hell..im a believer and god is making space*
/\ Nice

*i wanna go to heaven but satan will try some retaliation*
*he would lead me to horror, damnation, & devistation*
/\ Nice rhyming

*but if i stay on the right path and stick with the holy lord*
*heaven is were i shall be and with the angels i shall sore*
/\ Nice rhyming again

*im going to heaven cuz i dont fight and im mild tempered*
* im going to heaven.. cuz i beleve and the lord is my shepard*
/\ Nice closer


Limited Edition

A'yo...Heaven or Hell

Death....a stage of life...just part of the path
I speak to myself, reflecting the pains I've had
/\ Nice opener

Heaven or Hell? The question is present in my mind
Hell.....I would deserve it...when it came my time
/\ Good bar this i liked

I am a person..I care for people that I know and love
But I hurt them at the same time for things I've done
/\ Good bar

I live my life for the Lord...but a Devil in motion
But the Bible says my sins are cast into an ocean
/\ Ok line not feelin that much but ok rhyming

I feel that I deserve...to burn in eternal fire
But I wish to be in Heaven...that is my true desire
/\ Nice line

My emotions are confused...I don't know what to expect
Maybe I can try to change my life...I'm not dead yet
/\ Good bar

I go to church.........though not that often at all
I used to pray everynight...but my lifes in a crawl
/\ Na didnt feel this line much

If I ever die by my own hands...where would I end up..?
My best friend says Hell......but wit life I'm fed up
/\ Nice bar good

Well, God will show me the path...everythin has a reason
Maybe it is my destiny......to wonder wit every season
/\ Nice bar

Until the day I die...I may as well to live life well
'Cause until the day actually comes...

...it will be Heaven or Hell...
/\ Good closer

I'm gonn go for Shadow on this purely because i was feelin his slightly more, both had good verses but Ltd Edition wasnt as consistant v/Shadow.

RTF on this link...http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=132981

LE had alot better flow wit alot better vocab.
Whats wit the center an gay font color's....both of u...
thats dumb.
shadow was kinda wack.
he shit was way basic....seem'd like a 4 yrold's poem about how they wanna live life.
It was like the whole thoughts of the piece were given.
^^thats not supposed to happen.

Le created good imagery....Vote/LE
center font an color's R gay-1

I gotta give shadow this win...i think his topical came over mroe stronger then l.i..did...i think..L.I...shit was rreally good but..I do think it was good enough ..shadow used some really complexed..words..and..and i think he stayed strong over the whole topical..L.I...u used some really good wordplay...and used some strong words..but it kinda started off weak..and half way through..it started..become really strong but i think u needed to just word ur line a little diffrent and it would have won this battle..iight..nice drop both

nice verse both of you............limited nice piece ok vocab and lines...........Shadows was good....nice vocab and yours was more consistent on the topic id say than his was.........................close battle but ill say Shadow srry


pz

Im Just Gonna Have To Say Limited...
He Went Off A LITTLE...
But His Flow And Content Kept Me More Involved...
I Mean, Its One Thing To Read...
But To Actively Fallow Is Something You've Really Got To Achieve...
I'm Gonna Go With Limted...
Vote: Limited...
~One~

i'm gonna go wit shadow on this he really did good in this his vocab was on lock same wit structure witch made tha flow good stayed on topic pretty well coulda done betta in the imaginary department but its all good limited u did good to but i was just feelin shadow more good battle though to both of you
vote~shadow

man...dis was like the most tuff battle i ever had to vote on...also the closest...

shadow: yo, u wrote exactly wut iz in da bibble...n dats wut made it good... ur flow was also pretty good also... but wut made it hott was dat i could feel wut ur writtin n tryin ta say, like i could relate to ur verse alot.........

L.I.: damn dawg, ur verse was good also, i really felt wut u wrote cuz i think of the exact same thing, i could relate to ur verse...props to u..

spit: tie
flow: L.I.
vocab: Shadow
multi: shadow
thought into it: L.I.
Relate to it: tie
More on Topic: Shadow

vote: shadow

yo, dis is the best topical battle i've ever seen...props to both of ya... i'd like to see a re - match of dis!!!

man....i can't vote cuz i ain't registered.... i'll get registerd

1st nice drops by both...
in all honesty i was feeling shadows verse mor it got me thinkin n feeling the topic more so than le's did...it seemed like there was more put into this from shadow,both did well n kept on topic but shadows had more content n i felt like reading it 3 times...le nice drop 2 but i think you lacked in vision n imagery ,it jus seemed like you dint have the content that the other verse showed.....
VOTE/SHADOW
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