blackie vs yo-YO
 

ite man 10-12 lines (the usual)
no crew votes
no account change postin(coz i will kno ^^)
ite man i will drop 2moro, I aint pre-writtin or any shit, just that only time i can get 2 a computer. O n by way mine gun be a freestyle like most o my battles. U can do same if ya want, up 2 u.

Igght whereU AT DAWG

i will vote when u guys spit, if yall vote here...http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=129719
i'll be chekcn up on this thread, peace.

ite srry i got delayed even longer than I thought, srry,

overall son im good at mathmatics n i could count ya freinds n it'd be "no1"//
they store your type on the bottom shelves so ya dun get mixed wit the "top-guns"//
u just a soft one, u aint even half wot i am so just change ya name to "shook ones"

u had better look for jesus coz that the only way u gun be "saved"
this kids so "brave" coz he the only one that knows he's "afraid"(verse nxt 2 his name)

ya never "diminish" me n im full of "avidity" n ya scripts are a "no-no"
victory over me??.. hell no u gotta be pullin my strings u fukin "yo-yo"//
n i supposes i cant mess wit u, or fuk wit u because ya from the "bronx"//
it doesnt matter coz im like a elephant n im bound to leave ya "stomped"//
im tryin to settle things "nicely", but after u seen this u gun wanna "fight me"//
just tip buckets of ice of ya head and ya neck coz dat the only way u be "icey"//
no ever sees u, u never come outta ya house so i guess ya "extra-terrestial"//
make a cd, get the fuk outta ya house, n lower that fukin "cholestrial"//

I swear to god these people never fukin type their verses after yours, I swear man u better fukin spit n not do a runner like a lil bitch

igght lil bitch ive been locked u fuck in piece of shit ill fuckin kill u hoe im drop my shit right now u fuckin took 2 days to drop ur shit bitch

ill vote in here, when the next man spits, if yall tryn to vote on the two battles in my sig. Ill return other favors for yall too.

Blackie Fuck you comin at me for? Its a damn shame my verse gonna rock yo speakers/
Cause i just got out the cell and still have you tweakin yo tweakas/
Took you two days to drop a verse and they still sound like what be on the bottom of of united center toilets/ Yo rhymes BULLShit/(United Center Bulls Play NBA)
I thought i told ya before you aint nothin but my lil bitch/
You cant go on lyin about what u gonna do you snitchin on yo peeps and turn into a lil trick/
You buggin me about some petty ass shit that dont even matter/
You prolly some rich white kid surfin the internet/ While im sittin here drinkin shit that can destroy my bladder/
So im not gonna stop/
Juke jab bust back grab straps blakie get iggnant get smaked/
See my lyrics are hot like tuscon/
Bring it on/ IM droppin Bomb after bomb like Vietnam/
I stomp in/ wit I got a .357 that has a bullit named blackie and wont hesitate to use em/
Yo-Yo Nasty like hawk spit/ Im about as hot as hot can get/
Yeh its the Arab Terrorist in the cockpit/
Have blackie runnin away from the rubble that he created like the september 11 shit....

Blackie:

no ever sees u, u never come outta ya house so i guess ya "extra-terrestial"//
make a cd, get the fuk outta ya house, n lower that fukin "cholestrial"//
This was a weak, to tell you the truth, it wasn't even necessary.

ya never "diminish" me n im full of "avidity" n ya scripts are a "no-no"
victory over me??.. hell no u gotta be pullin my strings u fukin "yo-yo"//
This was a nice personal.

Yo-yo:

Most of ur lines didn't rhyme. Wasn't really feelin' your flow. Work on your structure.

You buggin me about some petty ass shit that dont even matter/
You prolly some rich white kid surfin the internet/ While im sittin here drinkin shit that can destroy my bladder/
What's this ish all about? Who wants to know about you drinkin'? I don't...

Vote: Blackie

uppin

blackie gotz this shit, yoyo lacked tha whole rhyme'n part. Blackie hit alot harder than yoyo and had better structure, thatz y he gotz my vote.

v/blackie

ill vote on tha poll one of ya vote on one of tha two battles in my sig, peace.

wow..
hit up my sig.. anyways


Personals-Yo-YO
Punches-YO-YO
Multis-NONE
Structure-blackie
Flow-none really
Overall-YOYO 2-1

vote/yo-yo

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Uppin for some more votes keep em comming

Uppin For Some Votes Come On Yall Vote Honestly

uppin............................................. .................................................. ..

I cant belieave I lost to blackwell in me 2nd ever text battle, Both U were wak in here. since black was one of them niggaz that beat me and taught me a thing or two about my text writin I thoaght he was tha shit, ha ah, this niggaz garbage, his punchlines were weak and stupid like kids in busses wit tinted windows. Yo, yo was actually worst tho. His shit was stretched to the point were I had to get some one else to read the right side of the screen while I red the left side. and I still aint get thru his verse. My vote goes to blackwell tho cuz his structure was better, he had no flow but his punches or swing, w/e was a lil better. I thought I heard Yo yo was a vet somewere so I expected too much from him. U both need to elivate a lot, black, I'll email U when I gotta battle opennin so I can whipe floor wit U.

V/ Blackwell

BLACKIE.........beta structure flow
harder punches.

YOYO.woz aiight..gud flow/wordplay...
seriously lacked punches
so vote-BLACKIE

RETURN THA FAV
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=135179

[size=1] One-Sided Battle ...

Flow: n/a
punches: yo
personals: yo
multis: n/a
structure: yo
overall: yo

Black Well Took This Easy
Harder Hitting Punches Better Flow And Stucture Was Koo
Yo Yo Jus Go Go And Elevate