Round 2: Poison v. Verbal Violence
 

min.10 lines, 15 lines max
no crew or hate votes
no d/r votes please
all fully explained votes
verse do in an hour
lets do it

Its gettin serious yall!

ok heer we go again tramp//
im commin again bout to push on u like the stamp act//
cuz im flippin pages im bout to get Ridiculously outrageous//
he about to get served thats his wadges//
im the lyrical terror bynladen i have him going through phases//
so step back as my verbal attacks come out from u and retract//
its my killer instinct tellin me to attack//
kids dumb though he moved into my flow and didnt know how to react//
i marked this kid as my test that went bad//
now all he hyped up under a trance//
he called a round 2 knowin he aint got a chance//
im bout to inject my venom a.k.a anthrax//
im done witht his clown now im strapped//
this kid lost and i won like the lakers back to back//
~1~!!!!! holla bak

lets go
 

mah rhymes is noble an worldwide, you can call me tha duke
see tha first time we battled you can call it a fluke//
when it comes to ya rhymes, "you got it bad" like usher
you a tru busta, an im tha superior rhyme crusher//
ya right you are bin laden ima send you into hidin
you aint no lyrical terror man quit lyin//
ya cant kill this, ima "die hard" killa like bruce willis
nobody reads ya shit like nobody wants syphilis//
tha basis of my flow been dated back to a million yrs. ago
found written on tha walls of a temple in tha middle of congo//
my rhymes ancient, an you battlein a legend
labled as a emcee killa wit lines emphasized as weapons//
im like tha clouds dawg im ova ya head
you should be banned for waistin space in a thread//

done.

uppin for votes^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^

he shouldn get one vote look^ stapped an anthrax dont rhyme at all

Vote=Poison

Once again to me it was murder.Poison came hard on the punches for every bar.Verbal had some nice punches 4 sho,just not harder than Poison.Poison also had nice structure & flow.To me,Poison just ripped you up.Holla back.

yo could yall vote on this right here!!!!!!!!!!~1~

Poison ya fuccen ripped his neck off. ya flow xcellent. way much better than opponent. and plus ya lines wasn't basic, disses and similes were 'sistent. but both nedd 'vatin on mult's. Verbal you were rhymin, but try varyin ya rhyme scheme a little-- i aint the best at it-- thats why u keep practicin homie

my v/ Poison

i dont have 20 yet but u got my pinion. i poll when i get 20

im sry verbal, gotz to give this battle poison, his rap was better overall, your pretty good verbal, i think u just wernt concentrated enough, keep it come'n peace.

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yoyoyoy, round two was hotttt, verbal v came out hittin hard but not as hard as he could, might of been sleepin. Cause Poison struck him wit a hard combo of punches and his bars were tight. Do I hear a round three??? tiebreaker???

winner.... Poison

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ayo das a good idea nova.
still uppin fa votes

flow=both
punches=verbal
vocab=verbal
humor=poison
overall= verbal

Verbal smoked u by........ now all he hyped up under a trance//
he called a round 2 knowin he aint got a chance//
im bout to inject my venom a.k.a anthrax//
im done witht his clown now im strapped//
this kid lost and i won like the lakers back to back//

and poison this is what made u lose.......tha basis of my flow been dated back to a million yrs. ago
found written on tha walls of a temple in tha middle of congo//

that was tight
flow-both
voc.-poison
ryhme-poison
punches-both

i think overall - poison got ya but still tight flow verb

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ok my vote was dq'd hey verse shit u lost and now u tryin to dq everyone. here is this explained enough for ya

verb ur punches didnt hit as hard as poisons.. poison had better wordplay and used good vocabulary.urs was good but posion had a better flow .. your flow wasnt as good .. plus i liked reading poisons more cause it was entertaining

why the hell isnt the votes like they were it was like 4 to nothin now its like 2 nothin and the battle we had before is like 2-nothin whats up wit dat?

yo i didn wan u to feel like i was cheatin by advertisin, so i had all tha unexplained votes removed. so he did both battles.

uppn fo mo votes

verbal violence won this because of his hard hitting punches that just beat poisson eay, he had better flow in rhymes, better vocab, better creativity, better word play, and just had the best overall hard hitting punches that whooped your ass. You need to elevate poisson you serously wack, no offence.

yp uppin for more henst votes up on dis and make them so they dont get dq'd giht~1~

please vote ill return tha favor

My vote goes to poison hes punches hit harder and his flow was smooth.His structure was good too.

vote ill return tha favor

so much favors isnt there a hinest battle any time instead of people votin for favos ohh well wutveer pleases there seed dont matter

Verbal, did'nt hit him wit any punchess, he basically just stood there and took it like a man. It honestly was'nt a battle till this other kat crushed him wit weak rymes. In this case there were just about good enouf to put Verbal away. Though it wouldnt Faze me in this situation, but thats another story. Verbals flow was'nt too good, and his structure was crumbling right befor my very eyes. Poison tried his best and caim up wit an easy victory. Verbal dawg, I warned U that shit would Get U.....

My Vote....Pioson.

one more vote please vote

Ayo, I don't think either of you hit as hard as you could have. I guess y'all prolly felt the other wasn't even worth coming up to parr, but... neither of you really impressed me. The way to this woman's heart is by being funny...

I heard the "you got it bad" before...
Heard the "anthrax"
Damn...
:rolleyes:

It was really close, but I'm going to go with-

vote- verbal

vote on this please..................................

dayum lol i give this to verbal..he jus had btter flow..both had bad personals but verbal edged it a lil bit more...poison had the better vocab....but both verses were weak..could of done much better...verbals closer was the sickest in his verse...so my vote goes to verbal cuz of structure,flow and punches

This was weaker than round 1 which dissapointed me..
VV:- dropped good but opener was weak and i dont like all of the // bullshit put .. instead.. punches were strong but not all of them were some were weak and very Eh!..
Poison:- Same with you all of these // get annoying put .. instead like i said Verbal violence.. Punches were strong and hit pretty hard but you also had weak lines.. flow was better than his overall which tipped it for you..
Vote.. Poison..
pz.