|
DON <VS> Black Thief
aight 10-20 lines
no cheating no d/r no hate no crew no feeding aight verses due by tomoro night good luck pc |
aiight checkin in and droppin my lil keystyle....
comin out swingin...wont even give ya pen a chance to leak "Rule" ya jaw(Ja Rule) make it drop when I "murder" ya "ink"(Murder Inc.) thinkin he Italian...son been watchin to much "Sopranos" Ill have this cats teeth lookin like missin keys to ancient pianos Hittin Don till hes "punch-drunk" like an alcoholic Makin no sense (cents) like walkin around wit an empty wallet Man you just artificial...no street in you...you not real My lines kill...even you admitted that yours just fill havin the balls to call yaself a godfather yet he only 15...this bitch aint nuthin but my godaughter And after this battle...I have ya whole whack crew bowin laughin as i dismember this fake italian |
black theif your just a bastard, the product of monogamy...
talk about fake you even keystyled your own biography ... and your avatar is the only time your name is associated wit a mic... your verses suck so bad...i wish chapelle would "wrap it up" and say sike*... your open mic wasnt bad, specially the title "had to get them"... but the rhymes sucked...cause your boy big kountry wouldnt have bit them... black theif those words describe you like a synonym... talkin to streetsweepa is the closest hood your livin in... your records 13-15 and most the opponents were new... jus stop fakin son...the tits in divinities sig are realer than you... *in the show there was a segment bout the wrap it up box u had to see it to understand wen chapelle said sike aight enough said that was good lets get some votes |
hmm i think Don took this..he had a lil bit better personals..black yours was aiight but i felt like your shit was a lil bit played..that cents line was played and that jarule murder ink line is mad played..but your shit was aiight..i felt your punches hit pretty hard but not ur personals...u both had good structure but Don you ahd the better punches n personals....ur shit was aiight..you edged this by personals mayn..good ish
vote: Don rtf http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=130194 |
yo streetz u need to have 5 or more wins to vote on elevated but thanks for ur feedback though
|
Uppin for votes...and leave links to your battles as well
|
uppin leave a link to ur battle and ill return the favor aight pc
|
uppin............................................. ..
|
iight...lemme do this by category
opener:thief....even though it didnt rhyme closer:don punches:thief flow:tie personals:don vote:thief...he had overall better punches and more complex verse, he was consistent wit his rhymes on most lines, so he had the better overall drop vote - thief |
aight half his verse was fillers but it dont matter still uppin this one
|
some of your lines were fillers also fam....lol....anyways no problem Uppin
|
uppin lets get some real votes my entire verse was nutin but personals and punches all made for u urs had nutin but prewrittens that u could use for anybody and weak played out personals fam...lol...no problem...uppin haha
|
pre-written?lol...ok whatever fam....anyways 1-0....uppin this bitch
|
uppin no hate here i jus said somethin cause u did
|
don....i vote honestly, i jus felt he won.
|
aiight then no beef....anyways vote on this shit....Uppin
|
don what the fuck is with the fuck is with the hypelinks?
black thief won black thief had peronals punches and flow and opener DON had complex and vocab but black thief won |
uppin bitch hyperlinks r funny u clik on them u kno nah u fuckin dumb uppin...
|
lol....Uppin for votes.....leave links to battles....
|
BT DROP:
comin out swingin...wont even give ya pen a chance to leak "Rule" ya jaw(Ja Rule) make it drop when I "murder" ya "ink" AIGHT OPENER FEELING IT.....7.5/10 thinkin he Italian...son been watchin to much "Sopranos" Ill have this cats teeth lookin like missin keys to ancient pianos HAHAH NICE PUNCH NO FALLING OFF AFTER A OPENER GOOD 8/10 Hittin Don till hes "punch-drunk" like an alcoholic Makin no sense (cents) like walkin around wit an empty wallet GOOD FELL A LIL BUT STILL GOOD 7/10 Man you just artificial...no street in you...you not real My lines kill...even you admitted that yours just fill OK NOT A VERY GOOD PUNCH BUT IT WON'T HURT YOU AT ALL. 7/10 havin the balls to call yaself a godfather yet he only 15...this bitch aint nuthin but my godaughter OK CALLED HIM A GIRL QUITE UNCREATIVE 6.5/10 And after this battle...I have ya whole whack crew bowin laughin as i dismember this fake italian WEAK CLOSER BUT AGAIN WON'T HURT YOU...... 6.5/10 OVERALL: 7/10///70% DON'S DROP: black theif your just a bastard, the product of monogamy... talk about fake you even keystyled your own biography ... AIGHT OPENER USED SOMETHING AGAINST HIM GOOD 7/10 and your avatar is the only time your name is associated wit a mic... your verses suck so bad...i wish chapelle would "wrap it up" and say sike*... UH NOT FEELING ALSO 6.5/10 your open mic wasnt bad, specially the title "had to get them"... but the rhymes sucked...cause your boy big kountry wouldnt have bit them... UH SHITTY NOT GOOD AT ALL 5.5/10 black theif those words describe you like a synonym... talkin to streetsweepa is the closest hood your livin in... IT WAS AIGHT TO ME NOTHING SPECIAL THO...7.5/10 your records 13-15 and most the opponents were new... jus stop fakin son...the tits in divinities sig are realer than you... OVERALL:6.5/10///65% VOTE GOES TO: BLACK THIEF (nice drop) do a honest vote on my shit links in my signature. ~I'm Out~ |
uPPIN
|
opener:thief
closer:don punches:thief flow:tie thief...he had better punches and more complex verse, & the structure was ok vote - thief |
uppin for votes....^^this one doesn't count....he aint vote anyways...WE NEED EXPLAINED VOTES....
|
uppin.............................................
|
uppin.............................................
|
Uppin this bitch...an leave links.......
|
nice battle both of yall made me laugh in yo verses and it was tight nice drop by both
Don bestline-and your avatar is the only time your name is associated wit a mic... your verses suck so bad...i wish chapelle would "wrap it up" and say sike*... Nice worsteline-your open mic wasnt bad, specially the title "had to get them"... but the rhymes sucked...cause your boy big kountry wouldnt have bit them... get creative dont use them twice Black bestline-comin out swingin...wont even give ya pen a chance to leak "Rule" ya jaw(Ja Rule) make it drop when I "murder" ya "ink"(Murder Inc.) tight like spandex worsteline-none nice drop Black-8.4/10 don-8/10 winner-black |
Uppin for tha K.O.......
|
uppin.............................................
|
uppin.............................................
|
Uppin
|
come on vote on this and finish it off i need the open space
|
uppin come on close this off i need the space.....
|
BT DROP:
comin out swingin...wont even give ya pen a chance to leak "Rule" ya jaw(Ja Rule) make it drop when I "murder" ya "ink" 8.5 nicely done...liking that bar... thinkin he Italian...son been watchin to much "Sopranos" Ill have this cats teeth lookin like missin keys to ancient pianos 6 meow...that means decent Hittin Don till hes "punch-drunk" like an alcoholic Makin no sense (cents) like walkin around wit an empty wallet 7 pretty good man...i'm liking your word play Man you just artificial...no street in you...you not real My lines kill...even you admitted that yours just fill 6.5 whatever...meow havin the balls to call yaself a godfather yet he only 15...this bitch aint nuthin but my godaughter 7 pretty good... And after this battle...I have ya whole whack crew bowin laughin as i dismember this fake italian 6.5 decent pretty good verse man good spite DON'S DROP: black theif your just a bastard, the product of monogamy... talk about fake you even keystyled your own biography ... 7 haha...a link please... and your avatar is the only time your name is associated wit a mic... your verses suck so bad...i wish chapelle would "wrap it up" and say sike*... 7 iliked this...haha... your open mic wasnt bad, specially the title "had to get them"... but the rhymes sucked...cause your boy big kountry wouldnt have bit them... 5 whatever dude...although i do dislike big country..jokes black theif those words describe you like a synonym... talkin to streetsweepa is the closest hood your livin in... 4 what...that is just bland...just bland your records 13-15 and most the opponents were new... jus stop fakin son...the tits in divinities sig are realer than you... 7 good closer...still not that strong of a punch though v- black thief... please hit up the battles in my sig...thanks |
| All times are GMT -4. The time now is 07:37 AM. |