DON <VS> Jesus's Father
 

aight 10 lines
due at 9 30
no cheating
no d/r or hate
no feeding
no crew
this is due in a half an hour at 9 30 if its not in by then its dq's aight good luck pc

check in...........................

*gets back on clowd and rises up*

the only rising you do is cause you got an erection...
hurry this battles 30 minutes open your notebook and use 10 from your collection...
i wanted a quickie to put this god back in his place...
let the shitting on commence thats all that comes out your mouth and your face...
0-0 this record reminds me of the millenium...
he has so many saved prewrittens he had to upgrade his pentium...
if your from heaven then bow down and praise me...
if your the god at the end your gona be askin o please don you gota save me...
tryout for mafioso i see your a dickridin groupie...
the god has been crucified but son this aint a mel gibson movie...

well i gotta drop early,

well i hope this wack bitch doesnt no show,
cuz i would...
...if i was a leader of a bunch of newb who call them selfs mafiso,
not homo, that is a big fucking tale,
this bitch bites hard....
....like junes rookie of the month failed,
lol/\ its funny, if you dont get it i mean big kountry,
you might as well pull that....
....cuz thats the only way you steal votes from me,
and you voted for him you herb,
this should be a pink slip match....
....so i can kid you wack ass to the curb,
so lucifer you gonna finally say sorry man,
cuz hell is the place for you...
.... i just made you kick the can.

wow for 9 minutes that was good aight jesus lets see if you can work a miracle u got another 15 minutes

aight already uppin this battle lets get some votes

uppin.............................................

Jesus' Father: that was weak, man.
"I can kick your whack ass to the curb". No.

Don:
"So many prewrittens he had to upgrade his Pentium". Yes.

Vote: Don in a murder.

don all the way i dont c how the jesus father can get a vote nuttin rhymed nuttin went flowed and he seriously needs more vocab and punches well he had some but its like spider amn hittin the hulk uncrushable ahaha
v/don man u killed him

uppin..............................lets some votes on dis battle

Don u took dis cuz ur punches Structure n flow was mucch bettah Yo J.father u need 2 practice on ya structure son dat shit iz all messed up n erything...

Flow:Don
punches:don
Structure:Don
wordplay:don
Humor:J.father

J father u need 2 elevate on all does things..ur punches is iight but keep elevatin dogg u need 2 get sum new structure do dogg iight ~!1!~

uppin dont let this sleep i need the open battle slot so lets get this voting finished

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uppin get some votes on here and u can leave links pc

uppin ur all lettin this sleep only 3 votes come on jus get this over wit i k.o.'d him

Don-You had like 4 lines that was really hot and murked
it and mainly not that much metaphores but plenty
similies


Jusus's Father-First I didnt understand you that much becuz of
your Structure..I personally think you didnt have that much punches
but they was aight but you had the balance and a few Metaphores

v/Don Return the favor please http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=130117

aight thanks uppin still one more.................

uppin.............................................

Don:

the only rising you do is cause you got an erection...
hurry this battles 30 minutes open your notebook and use 10 from your collection...

Very nice punches.

J.F:

Man, i'm catholic... You seriously ain't "god". You need to seriously work on your structure and your punchlines...

My vote: Don