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kiilin' Spitz vs. Blimp
10-16 bar max u spit first verse due in 20 min.
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this is my check in
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waitin on u ill post later holla back...................................
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here it is
fake niggas like you think your so fly// you can't out rap me so why even try// I got lyrics as good as slimshady// and i'm so pimpn' i even fucked your lady// you lyrics are written, but the paper is torn// after this rhyme you'll wish you weren't born// you like to face newbies to insure a win// but they whoop your ass like you commited a sin// all you ever do is recycle and bite // you hating this pimp is nothing but smite// you thing your gehtto but really your not// my BABY sister can out rhyme you on the spot// |
Iigh kill ya need to elevate alot!!!!!!just elevate iight 1....
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if dis battle was a test then nigga ima ace dis//
and put da chrome 2 ya grill jus like braces// dis nigga thinkin he hard cause he rude// ill kill u swallow ya spirit and really eat soulfood//(get it) u da bum type lay on da couch// and ya whole style trash like oscar da grouch// don't bring it 2 me cause he gutta// plus ya girl thick and spread easy like peanut butter// i aint da friendly type so don't be givin me dap// cause my gunz are like stripper asses known 2 clap// u dont but we, my crew we be shootin// especially when my pockets slim like whitney houston// muthafuka holla back |
it took a while cause i went 2 penn. 4 a funeral holla back need votes
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waitin 4 some votes yall need yall votes so holla back
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Imma go wit Blimp on dis one Harder punches and i liked his lines were a lil longer both came good. Spitz dont be so general good ideas just a lil dry.....Vote=blimp
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FUCK i accidently voted for spitz imma vote again damn my bad hope they can remove dat vote
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Lmao //\\
Haha Nice shit hands down Blimp nice shit... I dont need ta explain better punches better word play better structure! Return tha fav dawg.. http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=132257 |
good lookin need some mo votes so we can end dis
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uppin 4 votes come on yall
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hoola back uppin
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killin' spitz: hmmmm......................well that wasn't a very good drop
kid but you'll get there..............punches didn't really hit hard in my opinion seriously....also not enough words in each lines...flow was just half-decent....vocab no need for it so whatever.............................. originality/creativity was aight..... Blimp: you did aight I think this was a one sided battle in your favour.... because you were just a lil more complex and flow was ok............... punches hit much harder than spitz....originality/creativity was ok.... vote goes to: Blimp do a honest vote on shit links in the sig hotshh!! vs me... |
LOL this was good right here I was rollin when i read this:
if dis battle was a test then nigga ima ace dis// and put da chrome 2 ya grill jus like braces// dis nigga thinkin he hard cause he rude// ill kill u swallow ya spirit and really eat soulfood//(get it) I think Spitz had the better structure, but Blimp's flow was nice. He came harder with the punches, and was consistent about it thru his verse. This was one of his better verses that i have seen. Spitz, you had a nice flow and good structure, but you need to come a lil harder next time. Your rhymes were a lil basic, and blimp was just more creative than you with the metas. v/Blimp |
Kill, ya flow was there, but your punches weren't.. Might also consider workin' on ya structure, your bars seem a bit on the short side.. Keep workin' at it dawg.. it comes with time..
Blimp, you know you took this, I don't even really have to explain.. All out had a better verse.. Much respect to both cats though.. v/Blimp one~ Also, could I get a vote or 2? Links in the sig.. thanks folks.. |
def i give this to blimp
the first verse just wasnt cutting it |
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