exogenious VS xXvEnOmXx
 

ight heres tha rules...

20 lines
no dr votes
no hating votes
no returned favor votes
dont take a dayum hour for your verse ight
u spit first

ayo hurry tha fuck up i aint got all night to play withchu seriously hurry

ok here i go

let me spit first cuz you cant drop a clean verse on the bod
and like he says he reps colorodo and he loves the ROD
He's fourth from the crown so his up-bringing is reproduced and done
I’m about to put cat in the E.R. Like they were showin’ Re-Runs
ill knock u out the park farther than Bonds hittin "72"
strange how i could turn a vagina side ways, add eyes and mistake it for u
I’m not playin games can't he get more Original with a Lamen Name
I actually think I’m your DNA the way you Say My Name In Vein
He’ll have a Loss of Memory so his Brain Waves will be Idle Lines
I’ll have you in an Ambulance Reppin’ ya Hood then you’ll really Show Vital-Signs

oh and check

you finally got your verse done hooraayy//
if u asked me id say it took all day//
leave this bitch in silence wit nuttin to say//
talkin bout hes my DNA but if he was then i'd be forced to be GAY//
dayum right im reppin in colorado, watch me let this go full throttle//
step to me again and you'll get yo head cracked wit a bottle//
talkin bad about me dawg thats bad for your health//
im cuttin off your legs so ill have u lookin like an elf//
leave this rap shit alone put your mic on the shelf//
ill leave you insane like, have u in tha frontlines tryin to battle yourself....

lets get the votes in now....

now we uppin for votes people....who u think won????

need some votes

vote bitches

im cuttin off your legs so ill have u lookin like an elf//
leave this rap shit alone put your mic on the shelf//
ill leave you insane like, have u in tha frontlines tryin to battle yourself.

nice line ven..
punches-7/10
structure-7/10
flow-8/10

I actually think I’m your DNA the way you Say My Name In Vein
He’ll have a Loss of Memory so his Brain Waves will be Idle Lines

thas the only punch i saw
punches-1/10
structure-6/10
flow-5/10

my vote goes to venom he came out strong with his punches and just dominated his opponent
v/venom

we need some votes up in this muthafuka wheres everyone at??????

exogenious drop:

let me spit first cuz you cant drop a clean verse on the bod
and like he says he reps colorodo and he loves the ROD
OK DECENT OPENER NOT THAT GOOD THO 6/10
He's fourth from the crown so his up-bringing is reproduced and done
I’m about to put cat in the E.R. Like they were showin’ Re-Runs
NOT THAT GOOD BUT STR8 PUNCH 6.5/10
ill knock u out the park farther than Bonds hittin "72"
strange how i could turn a vagina side ways, add eyes and mistake it for u
UH WOW NOT GOOD 6.5/10
I’m not playin games can't he get more Original with a Lamen Name
I actually think I’m your DNA the way you Say My Name In Vein
THIS WAS A AIGHT PUNCH LIKE HOW YOU USED WORDPLAY IN IT 8/10
He’ll have a Loss of Memory so his Brain Waves will be Idle Lines
I’ll have you in an Ambulance Reppin’ ya Hood then you’ll really Show Vital-Signs
IT WAS A DECENT CLOSER NOTHING SPECIAL 7/10

Overall: 7/10

Venom's Drop:

you finally got your verse done hooraayy//
if u asked me id say it took all day//
HAHA THAT WAS A WEAK PUNCH FOR A OPENER 5/10
leave this bitch in silence wit nuttin to say//
talkin bout hes my DNA but if he was then i'd be forced to be GAY//
UMM TOO MUCH HOMO PUNCHES GETTING OLD 5/10
dayum right im reppin in colorado, watch me let this go full throttle//
step to me again and you'll get yo head cracked wit a bottle//
WEAK NO WORDPLAY BASICALLY NOTHING 6/10
talkin bad about me dawg thats bad for your health//
im cuttin off your legs so ill have u lookin like an elf//
YOUR HALF-DECENT PUNCH HERE 7/10
leave this rap shit alone put your mic on the shelf//
ill leave you insane like, have u in tha frontlines tryin to battle yourself....
WEAK ASS CLOSER NO HATE BUT ITS TRUE 5.5/10

overall: 6/10

vote goes to: exogenious

uppin

uppin for votes

eww

ex: you had good flow good personals good punches.....saw a couple good meta's your structure wasnt the best but it was pretty dope..your opener was ok...your closer was better though...overall your shit was aiight

venom: wack u need to elevate and dont put / at the end of your lines put ..........you should atleast be able to put 5 "." if not then the line is probably too long..........bad punches bad personals........bad structure..elevate

vote: ex

i aint gon poll vote until u drop an honest explained vote in this battle http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=132816

uppin for votes

more votes

Decree Wun just poll so can get this shit over with....inactive bitchs

terrible...

venom... stop reading nursery books and pick up something with more than one syllable words in it... "See Dick Run" lines won't work here. no originality,wordplay, vocab, meta's, personals, and very weak punches... you got in over ya head in this one.

soin... not much better ... but better none-the-less. you had better punches, structure was a little better,but lines were still kinda weak... work on wordplay...v/ soin

dam thanks maybe i can get this closed cuz this isnt upping this and it inactive

uppin