jefferson vs exogenious
 

10-20 lines
house rules
verse due tomarow at 3
(I have two other battles and i have to work)

since you and me are late...i'll give the verse till tonight...

but i got one in 30 min

ok this is my no show verse

jefferson no showed i win enough said
beat him in one line now he's clearly dead
in a hert he strugles to be above the bubble
now he is truely surounded by trobble

if he shows then i will put a new verse...

aight im here

with the toxic content i release you should leave me in peace/
why fuck with a hot convict that wont hesitate to leave you in peices/
bringin more beef than cattle stampedes, you cant handle my splatter techniques/
waste of talent when i battle for free, strike with enough force to rattle your knees/
u a genious on the outside? what about the inside, bout to be where the slugs lie/
herb gives up while other thugs try, chumps run from war with drugs on his mind/
thinkin im the man while i rip this man to shreds, untill the cannon jams/
wear off road clothes like treaded threads, body thrown in empty space like stranded vans/
i keep trippin out on these, clowns that you suckin off for fees/
you wouldnt make money, or have a sex if you were born without knees/

ok here is my real verse...

I lack to see the punches in this flop of a scripture
homie's streched like a road map of rose ann but no adventure
get that full assed avi outa your posts and your rhymes
cuz yor shit is half assed and standard like white ho's and white lines
your rapper is eminem and it does punches as hard as vinimen
wait...vinimen don't spit venom, nether does jeffersone so your worse than him
and dam you remind me of one of thoughs late night junkies that fell of the map
bittin and stealing what there adicted to, them its crack but you is raps
wait...did i just say you fell of the map? sorry about that. you just cant see me
you on the map just as much the town you hale from missouri

that should be enough to ground him....

exo, that was wak dogg. I was'nt feelin any of it. U need to quit changing shit just becouse U think its kewl kid. fell off the map, no wait, U did'nt fall off the map. this type of shit just got me angry at U. Ur opener was garbage, good rymin words but bad use of em. Ur closer was wak. all in all, U should've kept Ur fake verse, it sorta made me laugh a lil.

Jefferson, Ur rymes were nice but Ur flow was tremendously off and stretched out. I felt like I was in big Oprahs swim suit from how stretched it was. Ur punches were alot better than Ur opponents were in my view. He tried but U suceeded I guess.

V/Jefferson.

Vote honestly on my Battle wit my Boy WillNova, Its 2 verses each.

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=128842

uppin

could this get some votes....

drop a link to your verse and ill hit it up with a fair vote

yo J, try posting Ur battle on other peoples shit when U vote, or better yet, make Ur sig like how I did mine, that shit brings in votes like these niggaz was grupies and shit.

heh thanks for the advice

both verses were good.. but i think ex won this one.. he was rippin on your more jeff.. you need to put harder punches in ya verse, cause the flow is pretty good.. i htink he gets the win here due to his punches hit a bit harder than yours... good battle tho.. get at me



v/Exogenious

Exo-Good structure, punches were koo, No multis, no personals(besides the missouri shit but that didnt work out as a punch)...Sickest Punchline was the one about the ass in his avatar and how his rhymes were halfassed...

Jeff- Your verse was koo, but i wasnt feelin it that much...punches were not that direct feel me...although some of the shit you said was koo...so exo gets my vote

BOdy COunt vs. C-Quence

im not tryin to hurt yall feelings but that battle was weak as hell...........

exo your punches were better than his and structure was real good

jefferson...you disapointd ive seen you come wy harder than that you was all over the place in ya flow


vote exo

retutn the fav
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=132947
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=132781

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