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Rated ..vs.. YAR
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10 lines no D.R. no hate no feeding no biting no recyclin :thumbup: No Crew Votes |
Checkin in,
I spit first |
Murked this nigga something terrible
aight check it... This You aint ready nigga, I peeped you battles I dont care what anybody said Nigga its 2:54, time for bed,Cant rap even if a Microphone was attatched to his head Noob told me he feed off of Lloyd Banks and stuff he has to stack up in layers He shit is so broke up and Fucked they used more then video casset players Cant even elevate front lines will be ya steady and battling grounds Notice how everybody murked this bitch they left him spinning like marry-go-rounds Joining hit squads blinking murderaz,Spitting things like if he was a wannabe Nas I murked this bitch with my verse,he had no color like if this was the Wizard of OZ Hmmm maybe you good enuff you join my Illegal Juniors and maybe see me teach This nigga so happy to battle me he rejoicing so much ever since the Martin Luther King Speach |
come on now u cant be serious aight here is my
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Aight..not wit those lyrics son aint no way you'll get signed or get paid
He doesn't know the barrell on my 40. cal spin like a lawn-mower blade How im suppose to tell u somethin when i dont even know you Fuck you and ya whole crew...yes them niggas blow too Dumb bitch i told ya'll before im infected wit the lyrical curse For you to be so smart why the hell u spell ya name in reverse i break niggas u take niggas lyrics and make them ya own I get around i roam like cell phones and your now in my zone Its been to long but now i see the end..but where does it begin Its time to write this line,get it ova and click send |
You been murked good night there is no way you could beat me with that verse LOL
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Rated took this hands down...more complex verse...punches and personals
just hit harder...You aint ready....i think you werent ready.... Rated takes this everything overall better except maybe for the struc vote-Rated hit up my battle with DON |
ok shut up bitch....it wasn't my best verse i know...it was posted at bout 4:00 in the mornin...brain wasnt really clickin...but o well we can do it again
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uppin and lets get some votes this time please
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alright good battle...rated u came pretty hard... ready ur stuff was pretty simple but all in all this was a pretty close battle.. rated ur lines were a little stretched but punches were better... soo my vote goes to rated
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I Think Da Noke Won It His Lyrics Were Pretty Hard Other Dude Need To Shorten Up His Rhymes
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aight nervez...but u aint vote...but it dont matter...its 0-2 lets get some votes for eitha side....tired of lookin at this
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Rated= ya punches came harder then YAR lol. ya structure was still stretched out though.
YAR= ya punches were just bad. Work on that and get some betta vocab too. |
ummmm Nerves Ask me this Damn Question, Please Just ask me this
and this one only.... WHO THE FUCK IS DA NOKE PLEASE TELL ME THIS PLEASE Which means you just trying to vote and you got the wrong thread |
rated: hott verse but your lines are stretched gotta work on that just make them shorter...other than that ya verse ya hott...LMAO@wizard of oz line lol good shyt nice punches and good flow everything was consistent except for the structure good W/P... another hot line was the microphone on head line that was nice...good verse
overall: 8/10 YAR: your verse was good but the first thing i noticed was it wasnt complex at all it was pretty simple and that isnt good...and your last 4 lines are really played....cell phone...roam lines and your last line about resending...played not too many good punches consistent flow and structure and good W/P and multies...no meta's tho that were good except for the lawnmower blade one.... overall : 6.5/10 vote: rated ~!1!~ |
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Rated got this, for tha fact, my boi had alot hotter verses, better punchlines, and had some humor, but one dude was rite up there, u stretched ya lines a lil bit. Gotta work on that. I will vote for you on tha poll if u vote in one of my battles in my sig, then pm me and tell me u voted. Peace.
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