(iLL)Mental Vs. Femcee(B.P)
 

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Due Sat the 19th by 10 Am.

Ill wait till she checks shes never on so yea..

wtf, when did i ever accept a battle with you, ive never heard of mental Anew ???

accept? its a crew battle u fuckin moronic slut.....blue print at its best......

shut the fuck up carson you fuckin homo. before i sick lethal on you for another loss bitch.

amen

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=129452

this forum has contents of Mental Anew as Last months rookie...
...he was once newsance once an herb , and in the past.....once pussy /1
you couldn’t figure me out, if you were ben stein and I was a crossword puzzle...
...18 down- note to self, I-net gun check, OOPS....I Forgot Muzzle /2
this dude cant handle me verabally, he cant handle me surgically...
...unless yor thinkin femcee is literally vagina, you wouldn’t think of one word for me /3
how hypocritical, he says its worse to beef but its really worse to hate...
...only good impression you get from relaunched, is if you impersonate /4
you’d like to say your hard but I’d describe you as virtual soft...
...only famous insenative you’ve got, is if yor best friend screwed Lara croft /5
this fella’s esteem is so out of hand, were just gonna have to Lock your pride...
...cause the only time you flow, is when the lavatory is being occupied /6
how you expecting to show off skill in a verse, when you even fill ‘em wrong...
...just quit yor music escabade, cause your professional experience is like that of william hong /7
you spit beef but when real competition comes, quick hide your posts...
...you DQ yorself from battles, but god bless those dependable dick rider votes /8
why descript yourself from your title, cause your for sure not Mental Anew...
...KO’ing you wiLL be a challenge, but I believe this filler sentence will do /9
like christina, words wont bring him down, he’s already a self critic...
...remedial bitch, his verse is taking quite some time, maybe he needs help with it /10

your up^

w00t False Personals i Love it. :) Ill drop when i get back.

haha somin real quik busy today.and she went over Limit Lol


Saliva drops on this Print watch the Colors Slowlly Fade..
Call me Charles Woodson cause this Pussy im bout to Raid..
Yea i Riot through Threads by this Crew rename these kids Haiti..
Forgot about DP? shes not the Finest Shes the First UGLY Lady..
You could Mold me into a Steel house and u still couldnt Weld-This..
Call me Slum Village i want to beat u by myself Guess im Selfish..
Maybe u Should wear a Helment Im Noticing your not to Bright..
Strap u on a Rocket to Heaven and she still couldnt see the Light..
I could Write u into a Bible and u still wouldnt Understand Scripture..
Make this Girl Moan Like Lisa and she still wouldnt Get the Picture..
Call me Kanye seein as im Done with You,you'll See Jesus Walks..
Guess after this u call me a Soliciter the Way my Punches Knocks..

There.

WTF?!!!! Playa... Keep Mah ' S'N Out Cho Mouf!!!

What Lol i was sayin ur better Lol

Enough Small Talk..!! lol 'Dizz AInt Bout Me' .. BabeBoi' .. So !!! Keep Dat On The 'D'L' .


Upppin This Battle....!!!!!!!!


Ya'll Quit Sleepin On Thiz!!

femcee - ehh...flow sucked because of long ass stretched lines....most of ur links were bad and didnt really add much of an effect....need to elevate on ya shit....use sum meta's to get ya punch landed....elevate ya wordplay....give it a 5/10...

mental- that was weak....flow was better....so points there....umm need to work on ya wordplay....but u had a lil better than hers....punches were boring and dull....nothing amazing....only reason you take this battle is cause u ahd flow and she broke the rule for the line limit....else she woulda had u....

vote - mental...

does hate an DR actually count as a loss? cus in my books it dont....

we all kno who's better....so step back....before I have to merk u.....

audio or text.....or topic.....whatever u want....
learn your place u relaunch reject....

^ oh yeah and both of yall hit this up wit honest votes....its being mad slept on!!!......
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=127870

an actually......ask lethal....i won 5-0 an he went back an got me Dq'd for 6 ups.....

femcee,i thought ur whole verse was filler....long lines that werent hitting at all....AM I THE ONLY ONE WHO NOTICED UR LINKS EITHER DIDNT WORK,OR MADE NO SENSE N THEY DIDNT GO AT ALL WITH UR LINE? NONE OF THEM DISSED HIM AT ALL....i thought that was just plain retarded...no punches to quote...i wasnt feeling the verse,n its too long to brake down line for line

Saliva drops on this Print watch the Colors Slowlly Fade..
Call me Charles Woodson cause this Pussy im bout to Raid..
Yea i Riot through Threads by this Crew rename these kids Haiti..
Forgot about DP? shes not the Finest Shes the First UGLY Lady..
You could Mold me into a Steel house and u still couldnt Weld-This..
Call me Slum Village i want to beat u by myself Guess im Selfish..
Maybe u Should wear a Helment Im Noticing your not to Bright..
Strap u on a Rocket to Heaven and she still couldnt see the Light..
OK I GUESS
I could Write u into a Bible and u still wouldnt Understand Scripture..
Make this Girl Moan Like Lisa and she still wouldnt Get the Picture..
THE MONA LISA LINE WAS DECENT WORDPLAY
Call me Kanye seein as im Done with You,you'll See Jesus Walks..
Guess after this u call me a Soliciter the Way my Punches Knocks
I LIKE THE PUNCHES KNOCKS LINE.......

NOT UR GREATEST VERSE,BUT IT BEAT UR OPPONENT,THATS ALL THE FEEDBACK

aight im votin for mental.u had better personals specially bout bein a femcee and u had a better structure so it was easier to read.ur punches came harder that was good and ur flow wasnt off like hers.femcee u need work on punches and u need to improve the flow and structure.

v/anew
drop a vote in this battle return the favor pc
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=130756

carson your not even on my level kid, your audio sounded like a four yr old on crack. not too mention you look like a homo on your soundclick pic.

something is wrong...with this voting...because I honestly was thinking she would be winning.

thats what i thot, he had no personals at all... nothing made sense

Lol it didnt make sense?

Personals dont win matches.

Punches do.

Next time you try and sway ill have u both Banned.

Ty and have a nice day.

Why don't you stop swaying...I just voiced an opinion...but we can settle this with a battle...like right now...banning...you a pussy seriously. go ahead and make that attempt.

honestly femcee,one of ur links which is supposed to diss him doesnt even work......that kills ur whole effort.....n other links are to an entire thread...who is really gonna go through every post? u needa link to a single post,which is what u are specifically sayin about it........n the ones where i actually bothered lookin what u were talkin about,were super weak like it wasnt dissing him at all..........if u use links,they have to be very funny,n u cant overuse it....n u got to be very specific......u ruined ur verse with that..........n u had no punches at all.......i really strongly disagree with daclassic even though me n him are cool........femcee's verse did not seem like a battle verse to me.........