Tweeza Vrs "++"
 

Rules
10 lines
30 minutes after check in spit due

my spit
 

had to do it in 15 minutes or so might sound weird...

ya flow need some spice and season
cuz what you speaken no one's believen
next time ya family go fishin, gana catch tweeza
face down under water, pruny like a geeza
trowin punches straight at this bitch
words hittin harder then knights right fist (Shuge)
couldnt get a fat chicks digits
if you bribed her with cream whip
dont think this rook can bring it

Checkin' in...

Check this fagget, he gots nothing else better to do//
He sucks dicks when he's bored, damn is that really true?//
Your punchlines suck not as much as you blow cock//
You're just like Jenny, she goes around the block// ( Jenny from the block)
There's no way your rhymes could possibly beat mine//
You said 10 lines minimum, but you only got 9 lines//
I'll take you with me fishing, chop you up for chum//
The fish will eat you up just like the way you swallow guys' cum//
This is over, you are beaten, is that all you got, double cross?//
I spit 10 lines, you spit 9, you automatically loss//

Ok double cross, we finished spitten. Now we have to let everyone decide, who's flow was the dopest? UPPIN FOR VOTES!

I tthink tweeza ripped it. I like da last part of da song nice flows.double cross u need to spend more time on yo hit n b creative i go for tweeza

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I'm still uppin' uppin' uppin' uppin' for votes. Anyone?

ay. hit this battle up and i vote here.
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=130545
pm me after u vote tho, and give me the link in the pm. peace.

uppin
 

hey im uppin this battle, show some love, if ya want leave a link ill hit your shit up honestly if you hit this shit up honesly...

easy vote
 

this battle goes to tweeza with a breeze... doublt you didnt have shit what the fuck wronge wit u?

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Still uppin'! Come on guys please vote! Show some luv!

Song playing::: "where is the luv" by black eyed peas (LOL)

my vote goes to tweeza i dont need to explain just look at dem

and go drop a vote on me vs theone and me vs rapmaster i didnt feel like gettin tha link so go vote

Vote 2 tweeza he had better punches and better word play and good structure...
Return tha fav in my Envee Vs ILLunatic battle

V/Tweeza

Please vote guyz! Don't let this sit! Show some love please!

Tweeza got this one. He had punches and disses. DoubleCross's flow was garbage. I dont know what he was writin. Tweeza took this easy with an easy structure to follow and punches that were hittin harder...

Vote - Tweeza


Vote on these:
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=134177

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=134111

ya flow need some spice and season
cuz what you speaken no one's believen
??how does spice and season help people believe u? weak opener 3/10
next time ya family go fishin, gana catch tweeza
face down under water, pruny like a geeza
nah..not happenin..weak 3/10
trowin punches straight at this bitch
words hittin harder then knights right fist (Shuge)
lmao..suges fist..lmao whack 3/10
couldnt get a fat chicks digits
if you bribed her with cream whip
dont think this rook can bring it
huh??..dat was a weak closer..3/10

averaged: 3

Check this fagget, he gots nothing else better to do//
He sucks dicks when he's bored, damn is that really true?//
ehh..type weak opener 3/10
Your punchlines suck not as much as you blow cock//
You're just like Jenny, she goes around the block// ( Jenny from the block)
ehh..whack punchline..weak weak 3/10
There's no way your rhymes could possibly beat mine//
You said 10 lines minimum, but you only got 9 lines//
lol..is iight if u spit less than 10..whack personal 3/10
I'll take you with me fishing, chop you up for chum//
The fish will eat you up just like the way you swallow guys' cum//
ENOUGH WIT DA BLOWJOB SHIT..is gettin whaack..1/10
This is over, you are beaten, is that all you got, double cross?//
I spit 10 lines, you spit 9, you automatically loss//
WHACK..u cant automatically loss wit juss 1 line short..type weak closer 3/10

averaged: 2.6

Vote-Double Cross
Can yall please vote on my battle on the bottom, heres the link, please!!:
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=133085

structure - dble cross
flow - dble cross
creativity - tweeza
punches - tweeza
vocab - tweeza
metaz - ?
personals - tie

tweeza u seem obsess wid suckin dick, blow jobs n swallowing cum, find anotha subject, u got the battle but weak personals r the made up ones

v - tweeza

drop 1 on this link

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=134062

Guyz! Please Show Some Luv! Vote Vote Vote Vote! Thank You!

Ok..

Structure..
Tweeza had that hands down with the structure.. they were longer also

Flow.. Tie

Punchlines: Tweeza had a couple of gems..

Meta's.. no goods one's, but Tweeza takes that.

Opener.. Tweeza

Closer.. Tweeza...

V/Tweeza..

Return favor with a votes on my battle will you?

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=130254