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reddot06 06-18-04 03:13 PM

::.Red Dot vs. Limited Edition.::
 
alright you know the rules we already decided... house rules.. 10-15 lines due in an hour of checkin

reddot06 06-18-04 03:14 PM

ok this is my check in

L.E 06-18-04 03:21 PM

A'ight...checkity check in-check mo fucka...haha jp...

reddot06 06-18-04 03:28 PM

alright L.E your the leader of a wack crew ill intentionz
while im dropping hot shit getting honorable mentionz
you think you hot while your just candian bacon
you call yourself a topical head but you just fakin
keying up typing your verse but your hands is shakin
you so nervous u know red dot is droppin a hot freestyle
while you molestin ten year old boys you pedophile
little bitch your touching boys in their private parts
saying "i will give you candy" like sweet tarts.... (molesters offer candy to kids)
alright you didnt know reddot would rip ya.. right?
fuck yourself you got a dick and a pussy... *hermaphrodite (have two sex organs)
alright so im gonna end this battle saying you a sick fuck
soo next time you wanna battle let me wish you good luck

reddot06 06-18-04 03:29 PM

man my verse was wack.. but hopefully it will get the job done... g'luck limited

L.E 06-18-04 03:48 PM

A'yo...check it...

All's you can see...is tha 'red dot' aimed at ya heart
Murder 1st degree...a breath of ma skill blows yours apart
Steppin' up to tha best...You gon' be 9-3...haven' u heard?
You can't beat 'better'...and the better wasonly an herb
Why did I decide before...to let you back in tha dopest crew?
Why do you try? Against tha 'Master'...wat can 'Hopeless' do?
You claim that your a 'newbie rapper'...isn't that amusin'...
You so wack...I'd rather battle a cockroach that's producin'
Learn to take shit seriously...your destined to be in a circus...
Take tips from these battles...

...but then you still could not be able to merk shit...

reddot06 06-18-04 03:52 PM

good verse limited... hahah my battle versus blimp thats funny.. i didnt even try hahahaha but its cool... this should be a good battle.

L.E 06-18-04 03:53 PM

Yeah, good luck...I was spittin half assed this battle too...

Replay 06-18-04 04:21 PM

ok red dot won this but here the breakdown:
Opener: i guess reddot06's was better but it was bad for both. um both just jumped in.
flow: not gonna say who was better cause it was equal big up to both on this
Style: same as the flow very nice to both
Complexity: red you had bigger words and longer sentences
punches:red i didn't get some of um but they were better than Limited's
personnal: red that double sex line very nice limited had um oh yeah nothing really
closer:red you wished him good luck so i guess that counts.

Best line: basically everything red said

tips for both:
red nothing much just do what you do
Limited quit the hype link shit and .... in the middle of the ryhme. update your words

[♡]_Fuck_you_ho 06-18-04 04:58 PM

Checckity Checck Checck

Reddot:
alright L.E your the leader of a wack crew ill intentionz
while im dropping hot shit getting honorable mentionz
^Nice Diss On His Crew & An Alright Opener... 9/10

you think you hot while your just candian bacon
you call yourself a topical head but you just fakin
keying up typing your verse but your hands is shakin
^Aight Personal.... Lackin On The Punch Though!!!.. Kiid 5/10 !!

you so nervous u know red dot is droppin a hot freestyle
while you molestin ten year old boys you pedophile
^Played Out Lines' ... Kiidd... 2/10 Aint Feelin It!!!

little bitch your touching boys in their private parts
saying "i will give you candy" like sweet tarts.... (molesters offer candy to kids)
^O...k... That Was Weakkkk...!! Most Deff.. 0/10

alright you didnt know reddot would rip ya.. right?
fuck yourself you got a dick and a pussy... *hermaphrodite (have two sex organs)
^Nice Punch' .. Playa...!! 6/10

alright so im gonna end this battle saying you a sick fuck
soo next time you wanna battle let me wish you good luck
^Weak Closer' ..!! Tragic..!!! 3/10

Reddot!!! 25/60

Checckity Checck Checck

Limited Edition:

All's you can see...is tha 'red dot' aimed at ya heart
Murder 1st degree...a breath of ma skill blows yours apart
^Alright Opener..!! Boi I Know You Can Do Betta' .. Why Did You Go So E'z!! 7/10

Steppin' up to tha best...You gon' be 9-3...haven' u heard?
You can't beat 'better'...and the better wasonly an herb
^Weak Punch....!! Baby' lol Sorry To Tell It To Ya... 4/10

Why did I decide before...to let you back in tha dopest crew?
Why do you try? Against tha 'Master'...wat can 'Hopeless' do?
^Aight Punch..... 7/10..!!!

You claim that your a 'newbie rapper'...isn't that amusin'...
You so wack...I'd rather battle a cockroach that's producin'
^Heated !! I Like That Bar' Probably Your Best Line In Your Verse' ... 9/10

Learn to take shit seriously...your destined to be in a circus...
Take tips from these battles...

...but then you still could not be able to merk shit...
^Nice Closer' ..!!!!! I Was Feelin It..!!!!! 9/10

Limited Edition 36/50

Vote: Limited Edition!! ...!! For The Fact That Reddot Fell Off In His Verse At The End... Or Else He Would Have Got Thiz' ..!!!!

MoTiF 06-18-04 06:52 PM

Red that was sad Fake Personals 1 line missen full bars...Up ur vocab and stay on flow,,,no self Glorification..5/10
LE...Wasnt really fellin that but u had some punch trys and personals were ok..Vocab could be better.Ur flow seemed to stay on besides that..6.23/10

Vote-LE

reddot06 06-18-04 07:00 PM

how do i need to up my vocab using words like pedophile and hermaphrodite i think those are pretty big words....

L.E 06-21-04 02:11 PM

A'ight uppin this shit.........3 slept on battles fuckin sucks......

femcee 06-21-04 02:57 PM

red dot:

comment- overall GARBAGE...
punches:5/10
personals:3/10
creativity:4/10
vocab:5/10

score:17/40

suggestions:2moro's gaol, "must rhyme"....
next- flow is key, use it next time
structure- didnt even score that, cause there was none...
personals- give us some dirt on your opponent, you expect to beat him with a freestyle?

Limited Edition:

comment- not bad, semi weak for being in elevated front lines...
punches:7/10
personals:6/10
creativity:4/10
vocab:5/10

score:22/40

suggestions: kinda weak, but it damn sure stepped on "8th Disciple representitive"...

you could work more on punches, if they would have hit harder, you would have KO'ed somebody,

my vote: Limited Edition

return the favor... http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=130233 ...

~Fem~ From BP, holla at em

DeLeon 06-21-04 04:56 PM

Red- not a good drop...self glory....ahhh NO! next time throw punches and
use some good personals..overall aight flow...

6.0/10

LE- not the best...but you took this...threw some nice punches and some personals
overall it flowed good...just come harder

vote-LE

DeLeon 06-21-04 04:59 PM

O shit forgot to rate LE's verse....since it wasnt all that good a 6.5/10

Pop Lotty 06-21-04 05:47 PM

THIS BATTLE WAS SOME SERIOUS "EHHH" MATERIAL

OPENER:LE..JUS BECAUSE OF THE FACT THAT IT WAS A BATTLE LINE
CLOSER:TIE...WERE THOSE SUPPOSED TO BE PUNCHES? IDK
PUNCHES:RED....HE HAD SOME DECENT ONES, WHILE LIMITED WERE TYPE WACK
FLOW:LE...ALL HIS LINES WENT TOGETHER, ALL HIT AT THE RIGHT PARTS
PERSONALS:TIE FOR NONE....LE, IT SUX WHEN UR LINK DOESNT WORK...LOL
VOTE:REDDOT, I JUS THINK HE CAME HARDER WIT THE PUNCHES, I DIDNT SEE NONE THAT I LIKED AT ALL FROM LE...SO HE GETS THE VOTE..
DONT BE HERBS PLZ HIT THIS UP......
http://community.rapbattles.com/sho...6960post1356960

For$akeN 06-21-04 09:15 PM

REDDOT'S DROP:

alright L.E your the leader of a wack crew ill intentionz
while im dropping hot shit getting honorable mentionz
WEAK SELF GLORIFICATION NOT NEED 5.5/10
you think you hot while your just candian bacon
you call yourself a topical head but you just fakin
keying up typing your verse but your hands is shakin
NOT A GOOD PUNCH NOT FEELING 5/10
you so nervous u know red dot is droppin a hot freestyle
while you molestin ten year old boys you pedophile
WOW DO YOU HAVE PROOF IF NOT....NO PERSONAL 6/10
little bitch your touching boys in their private parts
saying "i will give you candy" like sweet tarts....
WEAK WEAK WEAK 5/10
alright you didnt know reddot would rip ya.. right?
fuck yourself you got a dick and a pussy... *hermaphrodite
DECENT BEST PUNCH YET 7/10
alright so im gonna end this battle saying you a sick fuck
soo next time you wanna battle let me wish you good luck
WEAK CLOSER TO FINISH 5.5/10

OVERALL: 5.6/10///56%

LE'S DROP:

All's you can see...is tha 'red dot' aimed at ya heart
Murder 1st degree...a breath of ma skill blows yours apart
GOOD OPENER 7/10
Steppin' up to tha best...You gon' be 9-3...haven' u heard?
You can't beat 'better'...and the better wasonly an herb
THAT WAS AIGHT NOTHING SPECIAL THO 6.5/10
Why did I decide before...to let you back in tha dopest crew?
Why do you try? Against tha 'Master'...wat can 'Hopeless' do?
WEAK ARE YOU EVEN TRYING??????6/10
You claim that your a 'newbie rapper'...isn't that amusin'...
You so wack...I'd rather battle a cockroach that's producin'
OKAY PUNCH NOT THE GREATEST 6.5/10
Learn to take shit seriously...your destined to be in a circus...
Take tips from these battles...
...but then you still could not be able to merk shit...
AIGHT NOT A GOOD CLOSER BUT IT'LL DO FINE 6/10

OVERALL:7/10///70%

VOTE GOES TO: Limited Edition

L.E 06-22-04 12:18 AM

A'ight uppin this inactive fuckin' shit...one more dawgz come on close it...

L.E 06-23-04 08:13 PM

Fuck.............uppin' to close this inactive shit...............

L.E 06-24-04 11:36 AM

Come on people...one more fuckin vote to close this shit.....................uppin'........

DeLeon 06-26-04 12:07 AM

uppin this for yall....dont got anything better to do...ha ha

Ca'lam 06-26-04 01:27 PM

to me this was an easy win for limited... his verse flowed much better, and it seemed like redot put vocab where it really didnt fit.. that hermaph line fucked ur sylable count pretty bad lol... when you say that shit out line it sounded pretty bad.. you need to work on vocab and your flow.. just cause you use the words dont mean they helped your verse at all, you gotta use ie correctly along wit flow... good job both of you, but limited looked like he went a lil easy on this.. any easier you woulda lost :P...


v/Limited

Ca'lam 06-26-04 01:28 PM

how do you become a registered voter ?? <--- would like to know.. aight get at me

Know-Gimix 06-27-04 02:23 AM

Vote - Limited Edition....

I felt your verse flowed better, and had much better punches--- example

You claim that your a 'newbie rapper'...isn't that amusin'...
You so wack...I'd rather battle a cockroach that's producin'
basic... but effective and funny--- Good luck to the both of you in the future... ez

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=131305


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