gottaasswhoopin4u vs MARVOLoUsJ1009...dont sleep kiddies
 

10 lines
no hate
no d/r
no crew
u spit uno.....

150 posts to vote, had to let that be known.

aight dunn we both online check in then i'll spit then u go 20 minutes da drop or u gettin dqed

Iight Dun...lol
Checkin

damn dunny long u gon take to drop.

pardon da wait dunny

JEa!!..look dickhead u aint fukkin with da punches & words dat i bring-
dont 4get "solo" killed u so dis gon be second time u got merk by a "king"-

sombody get dis trash put in a crew,its only men dat dis fag's lookin da crew-
dogg u was about da get jump & left ya lil bro & he took da "asswhoopin4u"-

u need a roll with ya fagget bar's,u think ya flow would embarrass marv??-
dis nigga ass is trash he's "on top of punches" cuzz he's "ova his avatar"-
(look)

dogg u need da quit tryin be tuff when u pussy i suggest u stop hero-
how many wins u got? u like da "online service" cuzz on da "net" u got "zero"-
(netzero..get it)

after i drop dez few bar's just post up ya lame text and leave-
u fukkin borin while u sendin "threats" dogg "jay" is catchin "z('s)-
(jay-z...threats his song and da z meanin his bar's is puttin me da sleep..u'll get da punch)

aight since i took a minute cuzz i was gettin knocked off and on u gota hour da drop

nice drop, punches was hot, some hit hard at home/
but dogg i can kill u by talkin bout ur stupid sig alone/
i can talk however i want, cuz arrogance is bliss/
u made mad crew references, but damn royal sickness dont evn exist/
dog u shouldve ducked this battle, a loss is somethin u cant afford/
u call yaself the sickes on the site, but give shoutouts to niggas that dont even kno u on the board/(he made a reference to restricted in that rhyme in his sig)
there alot of irony in his rhyme, cant u see/
how the fuck he gonna be king, when hes a bitch in queens/
hes already sad i can feel the net tears/
its a shame that hes prolly gonna have that same battle in his sig for years/
this nigga took so long he had to figure what he was talkin bout wit his own punchlines/
ill go over the limit to get this crackhead extra high, fuck 10 lines

y u go ova da line limit in every battle u in dogg but aneway i aint se no punches uppin 4 votes

Up.

up.

damn.........up............... ............... .............. ..........

i like this battle some harsh punches.marvelous had a good strucure but lackd dat rhimin punch..aassswhoopin good whoopin you took his crown this one....."theres a lot of irony in his rhyme cant u see how da fuk he gonna be king when he the bitch of queens" very nice punch you got my vote pimpin.....................

i dont have 150 post so nm its on record though.....

damn.........................

Uppin Fags......

uppin....

got an ass woopin won...wHY? well yall came good in this battle and punches pretty much ties up...but got had more personals, and better ultimately leading him to the win.... nyce job both of you

^^^but u didnt poll....................

Marv- not the best drop by you....maybe your just shakin off that rust
you had an ok drop...you had punches abd personals and your overall flow was good

overall:7.0/10


Gotta- you had punches.......you had lines that hurt your rhyme like this one
nice drop, punches was hot, some hit hard at home/
and this one
can talk however i want, cuz arrogance is bliss/

those arent punches and that hurt your verse....you did have some punches
and personals...overall an ok drop

overall:6.5/10

Vote-MARVOLoUsJ1009

okay good honest vote dogg...keep it fukkin comin ya'll pause...

Uppppppppppppppiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiinnn...stop Sleepin Muthafukkaz And Vote

up....wtf niggas need to poll they vote.....cmoin

easily marv

opener-marv good personal kind of a self glorfication but better then gottas it was ight but didnt really like it

closer- neither really but marv got it again actually had a punch gotta should of left that shit off didnt like that either

personals- both had em but i liked marvs better that shit played odd his name and of his old av was pretty creative an tight

structure-dont count so tie

overall seemed 1 sided to me on this shit the creativitie an punchs marv had took my vote on this battle an gotta that shit in his sig isnt givin props to resticted hes talkin shit to him so that dint make since really had a bunch of filler in this verse to me

vote marv

up.

up.

up. will return favors..................................

^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^vote ppl.......drop ya links and all

This nigga kept me laughin thru out the entire verse, Marv was good but I gotta hand this one to gottaasswhoopin4u. this niggas punches were redulouse, they had me rollin. Marv had good punches too but his lines was stretched. Gotta had on bar that did'nt ryme but I was to bizzy laughin to care. he did suprisingly good in this. I didn'nt expect it from some one wit his record but it was actually a tight battle.

Flow, G
Struct, G
Punches, G
Metaphore, M

V/Gottaasswhoopin4u

^^^^^?......aneway uppipn if niggaz vote 4 u in ya battles dont come ova here doi dat shit

funny battle and i ain't sleep! lol
 

this whole thing was tight:
JEa!!..look dickhead u aint fukkin with da punches & words dat i bring-
dont 4get "solo" killed u so dis gon be second time u got merk by a "king"-

sombody get dis trash put in a crew,its only men dat dis fag's lookin da crew-
dogg u was about da get jump & left ya lil bro & he took da "asswhoopin4u"-

u need a roll with ya fagget bar's,u think ya flow would embarrass marv??-
dis nigga ass is trash he's "on top of punches" cuzz he's "ova his avatar"-
(look)

dogg u need da quit tryin be tuff when u pussy i suggest u stop hero-
how many wins u got? u like da "online service" cuzz on da "net" u got "zero"-
(netzero..get it)

after i drop dez few bar's just post up ya lame text and leave-
u fukkin borin while u sendin "threats" dogg "jay" is catchin "z('s)-
(jay-z...threats his song and da z meanin his bar's is puttin me da sleep..u'll get da punch)

^i got all ya jokes and ya had nice punches Marv.. i like the personal wit' king solo lol...
and it was nice flow to it in my opinion... oh yeah and nice structure not too long very reasonable...

gotta ass whoopin:
dog u shouldve ducked this battle, a loss is somethin u cant afford/
u call yaself the sickes on the site, but give shoutouts to niggas that dont even kno u on the board/(he made a reference to restricted in that rhyme in his sig)
there alot of irony in his rhyme, cant u see/
how the fuck he gonna be king, when hes a bitch in queens/
^ i undastood ya jokes they were funny but ya punches coulda been harder and ya structure be havin' spontaneous changes makin' it hard to follow up... and the two lines over was minor but that can piss sum1 off if they wanted to keep flowin'... respect the rules, nigga... don't stretch 'em and you had an hour to drop...

*Both did good drops but... uhhmmm

**overall vote: marvolous got this fa sho...**

drop votes on the battles in my sig... ;) keep blazin'...

Marv, Gotta aint never vote on any of my shit befor, wat U talkin about? If anything I voted on U in that Black Haze battle and told U that he bit too. so how em I D/r? it aint like that at all kid. I was just feelin gottas verse more this time. sorry.

uppin 4 more fukkin votes.....................................

props to both battlers that came out today, nice entertainment, i like it. but here's the judgement.


marvolous-you definately came out hard on this one. i felt an energy, that you were loud and rippin this one(i know it's text, but i'm a battler, a real one, and i feel energy)
it was nice, and a good flow to it.
dogg u need da quit tryin be tuff when u pussy i suggest u stop hero-
how many wins u got? u like da "online service" cuzz on da "net" u got "zero"-
that's hot. The energy of it all was the biggest thing going for this verse.

gottaasswhoopin4u-this verse was alright, i saw anus mouth tones about it, which i like. but it was virtually devoid of any punches, which are too key in a battle. so key that, you lost this one.

vote-marvolous

help me out by voting honestly on this little battle so i can close it.http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=131252

JEa!!..look dickhead u aint fukkin with da punches & words dat i bring-
dont 4get "solo" killed u so dis gon be second time u got merk by a "king"-

LOL,NICE LINE

sombody get dis trash put in a crew,its only men dat dis fag's lookin da crew-
dogg u was about da get jump & left ya lil bro & he took da "asswhoopin4u"-
LOL,THIS WAS KINDA FUNNY TOO

u need a roll with ya fagget bar's,u think ya flow would embarrass marv??-
dis nigga ass is trash he's "on top of punches" cuzz he's "ova his avatar"-
(look)
? I GUESS HE REMOVED IT,CUZ I DONT SEE NO AVI....SO I CANT JUDGE THIS

dogg u need da quit tryin be tuff when u pussy i suggest u stop hero-
how many wins u got? u like da "online service" cuzz on da "net" u got "zero"-
(netzero..get it)
I GUESS ITS DECENT WORDPLAY,BUT I WASNT REALLY FEELIN IT,CUZ HE HAS SOME WINS........

after i drop dez few bar's just post up ya lame text and leave-
u fukkin borin while u sendin "threats" dogg "jay" is catchin "z('s)-
(jay-z...threats his song and da z meanin his bar's is puttin me da sleep..u'll get da punch)
WASNT FEELIN THIS WORDPLAY

aight since i took a minute cuzz i was gettin knocked off and on u gota hour da drop




nice drop, punches was hot, some hit hard at home/
but dogg i can kill u by talkin bout ur stupid sig alone/
OK,SO WHY DIDNT U DO THAT?SAYING U COULD IS NOT REALLY A PUNCH...WHAT U SHOULD HAVE DONE,IS HAD THE 2ND LINE AS UR 1ST LINE,THAN MADE A PUNCH ABOUT HIS SIG IN THE 2ND LINE OF THE BAR...


i can talk however i want, cuz arrogance is bliss/
u made mad crew references, but damn royal sickness dont evn exist/
OK PERSONAL BUT NOT THAT HARD OF A PUNCH


dog u shouldve ducked this battle, a loss is somethin u cant afford/
u call yaself the sickes on the site, but give shoutouts to niggas that dont even kno u on the board/(he made a reference to restricted in that rhyme in his sig)
THAT 2ND LINE WAS WAYYYYYYYYYYYY TOO LONG,N HOW DO U KNOW RESTRICTED DOESNT KNOW WHO HE IS? THIS ISNT REALLY SUPPORTED......
WELL,I GUESS HE MUSTA CHANGED THE RHYME CUZ I DONT SEE RESTRICTED IN IT NOW...SO I CANT JUDGE THAT PART


there alot of irony in his rhyme, cant u see/
how the fuck he gonna be king, when hes a bitch in queens/
LOL...THIS WAS GOOD

hes already sad i can feel the net tears/
its a shame that hes prolly gonna have that same battle in his sig for years/
HMMM...IF HE HAS THIS BATTLE IN HIS SIG,ITS EITHER CUZ HE WON IT,OR CUZ HE WANTS IT TO GET VOTED ON..........SO I DONT SEE A PUNCH...IF ANYTHING,THATS SAYIN HE GONNA WIN THIS.....OR THAT PPL ARE SLEEPIN ON THE BATTLE,WHICH DOESNT LOOK GOOD ON U EITHER

this nigga took so long he had to figure what he was talkin bout wit his own punchlines/
ill go over the limit to get this crackhead extra high, fuck 10 lines
HOW IS THIS A PUNCH? U SHOULD NOT HAVE GONE OVER 10 INTENTIONALLY........

OK,THIS WASNT THAT GREAT...............MARV...I LIKED UR FIRST 2 PUNCHES...THEY WERENT REALLY HARD,BUT THOSE WERE UR BEST LINES...THE NET ZERO N JAY Z LINES I DIDNT LIKE,THE NET ZERO WAS CONTRADICTING,CUZ HE HAS SOME WINS,BUT GOTTA ALSO HAD CONTRADICTING LINES,ABOUT THE BATTLE IN UR SIG,N RESTRICTED NOT KNOWIN WHO U ARE...CUZ HE CANT REALLY KNOW THAT FOR SURE..........GOTTA,U MADE THE MISTAKE OF JUST SAYIN THINGS THAT U COULD HAVE MADE PUNCHES WITH..(ABOUT HIS SIG)..ETC...SO UR BEST LINE WAS THE BITCH IN QUEENS......I'D SAY THIS WAS VERY CLOSE........BUT IF I COMPARE BOTH UR BEST LINES......MARV HAD 2 GOTTA HAD 1............THE REST OF THE VERSES WERENT THAT GREAT...N GOTTA GOT TO DROP 2ND SO U KNEW WHAT U WERE UP AGAINST,U MADE THE RULES OF 10 LINES N STILL WENT OVER...N U MADE THE THREAD N MADE HIM DROP FIRST....IF HE WANTED TO BE AN ASS,HE COULD'VE DQ'D U FOR THE 10 LINES SHIT,CUZ IT WAS UR OWN RULE...FEEL ME? ANYWAY,MARV WINS.....................