Poison v. -nervez-
 

10 lines aka 5 bars
no hate votes or d/r votes
no crew votes
verse due 30 min, after check n.

lets go.

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lol, it mite be a while homie, im still wait'n for him to finish his spit vs. me, i aint like'n my shit, but i ran outta time, i wasnt sure who tha fuk was goin first. but alrite peace.

lets go
 

ayo this dude mo "nervous" than a crackhead at church
you wan it wit me? ya mom musta cracked ya head at birth//
cuz i make niggas commit suicide
i crush they pride, leave em ashamed, so they jus giv up an wanna die//
i battle weak dudes like you for practice
an my "nerves" is made up of more steel than wut you got up unda ya matress//
its ya moms fault you insane to tha brain
jus quit, an lock ya rhymes up like they did saddam hussein//
listen, come back when you increase ya confidence
not battlein me should be unda ya common sense//

holla

ayo, ill vote if u return the favor over at me vs. -nervez-.......
peace.

yo poison i'll vote on dis when i get 20 post's could u go vote on ma battle wit flagrantfoul i forgot to get tha link peace

Common sense, that shit u spitten b lackin sense] u whistle when u fart even da fags suggest]that u stop takin it up da asss and put it in yo mouth instead]
Of tryin to take it up da booty like u were in Church]gettin fukd by da preacher screamin"AWW IT HURTS"] I bet u wanna visit a prison just 2 c how da system work]
Poysen was a failure in the game, U see his flaw was at birth]
This bitch is an ant and like an ant he gets smashd] his powers so weak it be like pokemon when we clash]
So da next time u rap remember yo flows 2 bootsy] and test yo skillz everyday against me, u still a rookie]

dat hen got me loaded imma go 2 sleep

Lmao
 

:laugh2:
wow, ur 21 an you jus got murked by a 16 yr. old :laugh:
if ima rookie wut does that make you :laugh:
anyways good battle.............. :laugh2:

:roll:

vote on this shit

ay NERVES< i gots to ask. Do u just freestyle your shit? if u do, u should just be slow'n down, and work on better punchlines, they aint hittn hard at all.
Well Poison gotz this battle, his punchlines hit harder, and his flow was al around better, NERVES No hate tho, just elivate. Peace.

freestyle wut do yall do spend hours on yall shit

please vote yall................................. damn it aint that hard

What the FUCK.

I'm shocked. :shocked: SHOCKED

Poison... THIS is what I'm talking about. Hitting hard AND being funny with it.

Poison-
ayo this dude mo "nervous" than a crackhead at church
you wan it wit me? ya mom musta cracked ya head at birth//
***Funny first line; nice opening

listen, come back when you increase ya confidence
not battlein me should be unda ya common sense//
***Okay closing


Nervz-
Common sense, that shit u spitten b lackin sense] u whistle when u fart even da fags suggest]that u stop takin it up da asss and put it in yo mouth instead]
*** No offense, but what da FUCK does that mean? o_O

This bitch is an ant and like an ant he gets smashd] his powers so weak it be like pokemon when we clash]
So da next time u rap remember yo flows 2 bootsy] and test yo skillz everyday against me, u still a rookie]
***I'm really fealing the ]]]] -.-;

vote- poison

Keep Votin .......................................

v=poison

your on fire dawg nice you killed this kid with good punches better structure and wordplay. WTF did you type nrvez couldnt understand shit

i think poinons flow, structure, and everything was better. BUT, you need your punchlines to be more directed. I felt tha boi that nerves punch's was more personal maybe, and directed it to ya a lil better. So my vote goes to -NERVEZ-

vote please............................................ ..........

vote.............................................. .......

damn poisen when this one over i wanna rematch.............

you wanna lose again, cuz next time ima come hard.

my vote goes to poison cause i felt his punches hit harder i dont feel like breakin this shit down at 5 30 in tha fuckin mourning well i voted here go drop a vote on me vs the one and me vs rapmaster i didnt feel like gettin tha link

vote ill return tha favor................................

vote ill return tha favor............................................

vote on this.....................................one more

intell i give u this one cuase you had better punchlines verses was good to

[QUOTE=the metaphor]ipoison i give u this one cuase you had better punchlines verses was good to overall flow was good some body
hit me up wit a battle