$pitilicou$ vs. Gods Son
 

iight heres the rules

10-15 lines
Crew/House Rules
its set up, you u spit first


checkin in, 10:30. spit due. 11:30

checkin and spittin by 11:30

you're up NEXT~g, wanna CONTEST~me?, you're insane cuz im 'THE GREAT ONE' like 'WAYNE GRETZ~KY'!//1
you best~bring ya DEFENSES like PROTEST~ING, meet my INTESTINE cuz its you that i'll be DIGEST~ING!//2
seems like your DISS was DIRECTED at me SOLE-LY, you BOLD-LY decided ta TOUGHEN UP an SCOLD-ME//3
you a SON OF A BITCH like KNOWLES-be, you dont KNOW-ME!, an 'STOP JUMPIN' on DICKS like 'COLD-FLEAS'//
.....Style swicth.......
*Pissed-As-Fuck* So I *Rip-Ya-Nuts* .. Now The *Balls In My Court* You A *Sitting Duck!*/
*This A Grudge* To Sit N’ *Strut My Stuff* Cuz You *Bang More Balls* Then A *Golfin-Slut*/
*Play With Ya Head* Like A *Juke-Box* Til My *Nuke-Drops* N’ *Corrupts Ya Genatils* Like *Fluke-Jocks*/
*Spook-Ya-Block* N’ *Shoot-Ya-Cock* So The *Next Time Ya Cum* You *Remember-My-Shot*/(cumshot)
Never Leave *Alone from home*, im not ITALIAN but my FLOW'll make *ya dome ROME!*//(roam)
this bitch is *UNKNOWN ta chrome*, im 'E'xtra 'T'errestrial so fa backup he decides ta '*PHONES HOME'!*//
Resentful Towards The Extent Of *Murder With Intent* To *Freeze Ya Thoughts* Like You *Thinkin-With-Cement*/
*Dominate The Percent* Of This *Kids That Been Spent* With *Dimes And Nickels* That *Don’t-Make-Cents*/(cents=sense)

-------------checkin in--------------------
and spittin my 11:30-----------------------------------

check it...

yo

this bitch is done im takin him to the gallows to get hung//
your rhymes are hopeless like a gangbang witout the tung//
if u thought u were winnin this battle u must be mistaken//
shoot, u bite likes from ruben studdard and clay aiken//
my rhymes and flow are famous, history in the makin//
every bar i write ur mom is most definelty breath taken//
im "con~testin" you, just like ur mom "mou~lestin" you//
my calender merkinings.. April, May, Gods Son, your due//
i flip you over like a pankcake bein cooked really easy//
ima be 1-0 after this battle ni**a u betta believe me//
Gods Son? after this battle jesus gunna be whoopin ur ass//
he's sendin u into hell after this, he so sorry he givin u a free bypass//
u better hope u got Francis Of Asscise or Moses on ur back//
cuz this battle is won by me bitch, hit the road jack// haha

that was garbage.. uppin 1

It was aight for your first battle...






y'all we need votes..

Uppin Plzz Vote... 2nd Uppin......... Uppppppinnnnnnnn Upppin

shoot, u bite likes from ruben studdard and clay aiken//


dont count this as a uppin plz but i meant to write this

shoot, u bite **lines** from ruben studdard and clay aiken//

$pit-Nice verse yo...you had the structure, the flow was aight
and the punches were hard...and they landed 'n' shit...

Gods-same wit you you had a nice verse...the structure was horrible...
git rid of the captions 'n' shit and the ( * ) shitz...its just annoyin'..but
anyway your punches were hard and they landed..

Overall- Imma have to go wit Gods Son on this one..Because his punches were way harder..& the vocab was aight...but not the structure..

vote = GoDs SoN

iight thanks.. uppin number 3................... ..

uppin.. plz votE!!!!!!!! cuz im new, and i think hes new,.. ? doesnt mean u cant vote.... uppin 4

Post up y'all

god damn............!!!!!! plz vote... i think this is the last time i can up this battle...................uppin 5.,.... plz votee

$ik pretty much said it all, except i think they'r punchlines was pretty equal. It was a pretty close battle, but i can only vote for one person, n my vote goes to Spit, caues i was gettn lost in gods sons flow.

v/spit

dayum mayn sorry but god son took this str8 sick verse

god son: nice shit but fix up your structure..fix it up so its only one line..not like 300 pages for one line..feel me..but you had good flow,personals,punches,and ok structure

spiticious..it was aiight but it could be better,....work on your punches..and personals..if u need help with that contact me....good flow though

vote: god son

thanks uppin.. 1-2......... uppin.................

uppin 4 votes...

Spit- nice verse....i think you need to come harder with your punches and
use some personas..overall not a bad verse....you had some good lines
in there and this is your first battle so just keep elevatin

overall:6.0/10

Gods son- nice spit....work on your opener...it was only strong cuz of your
multi...speakin of multis you had alot of them they were good...your punches hit hard and overall.....nice drop

7.0/10

vote: Gods son...

thanks uppin... 1-3 ....... uppin 1-3.... uppin 1-3

uppin.................uppin.................uppin. ...................

Spitilicous= your spit was ok but you lacked multiples that God Son had. Also ya punches didnt hit as hard as god sons. Good job though.

God Son= You took this becuz of multiples and some of ya punches hit hard. You did good with continuin wit ya multiples. Good job

Spit....Ya verse was decent...good job....But your punches were also decent but they seem to not hit hard really...Your structure was decent too...but you didnt really have any personals...but it was good for a newb...but elevate .....

God's Son....Ya verse was also decent but i thought it was a little better then Spit's...Your punches were good...and you had some nice multies...so overall you did good in dis battle ...and overall you get my vote for better punches and multies...

v/God's Son