ILL Tempa vs. The One
 

Rulez:
10 line minimum
No Crew, hate, or dr.
Verse Due 30 min. after check in.
No show = dq.

yo, hate to break it to ya, but thatz not ma name, not The One, thatz a dfferent cat, minez TheOne, set it up again, i'd battle u on thiz one but if i wun it'd go to him not me, or do u want me to set it up?

My bad dawg. Go ahead and set it up but you still spittin first.

aight neva mind man, it worked, that wuz ma bad it didn't show up til' now, sorry man, i'll spit in a sek

aight

the first part of yo name sayz ill
i think u'd betta shut up an chill
i'll grill sum advice an smoke it up fo u
i'm betta then u....no doubt, kan't say itz not true
kuz i'm TheOne, the one wid tha gun
the one that makez u run, popz u then later ur son
then ur wife, but thiz time wid a knife
don't needa gat to pop her, i nop kuz thiz iz ma life
an i no everythin i needa to run thiz show
to let u no, how thiz mutha fukaz gonna go
tell u straight up no lies
that i'm gonna beat u, handz down, no matta how hard u tries
u needa elevate sun, but we all do don't we?
i don't as much as u, an i'll make u see
why that iz, an in one mo line ur gonna be hopeless an down the drain
i'm gonna shoot in the arm, to increase pain, then pop ur ass in the brain

aight yo ur turn, 30 minz

aight yo lookin fo sum votez an feedbak on thiz battle we put together, Tempa good job, u might win it an if u do congratz, votez an feedbak ppl!!!!

When it comes to tha mic im like nike, i just do it//
You can say my flow is liquid cuz i spit it so fluid//
I've been doin this fa years it's obvious you're an amateur//
Yo verse was a joke right? Nigga i'm good enough to be yo manager//
No physical needed i'll use my brain to handle ya//
Nigga you've been beat so many times that ya need to be bandaged up//
You see my flowz iz nice, like a lonely old lady//
Straigh gangsta wit my shit, not even Jesus could save me//
My lyrics hit hard like a fuckin rollin' boulder//
Nigga get some weaponry before you decide to fuck wit a Soldier.

ill tempa gotz this vote, cause he stayed real in his lines, didnt fantasize about guns and shit. He stayed wit better punchlines too, ill vote on the poll once ya vote on one of these battles...
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=130427
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=130545

yo scrappy, u still neva voted on ma battle vs. nervez, u just posted

Yo lets get some votes in here. People hit up this battle and take a second to vote.

Ayo tempa got this one no doubt his lyrics were more potent than theones keep elevatin

vote- ILL Tempa
not enough posts to actually vote

waz up y'all i just peep diz battle & ill just murdered da1 lyrically wit out breaking into a sweat he had mo punchlines & came at it at a different den most people would ight

Yo i appreciate tha feedback devil. I'll try to hit up one of yo battles sometime and return tha favor.

uppin for votes...........

ill tempo took this easy. the one sounded like he was in gr. 2 with his grade school rhymes, and ill tempa had lines that woulda KO'd a vet. One sided

vote: Ill Tempa

All we need is a couple more votes and this battle is closed. If you view this take a minute and vote. Preciate.

yo if i could vote (dont have 20 posts yet) I would go with ill. His lines were way dope hands down, his comeback flattened the opposition. Word up! Any advise on how to add links to your battle with your posts? Iv'e got one with mjust23 in fronlines yo i need people to check it and vote, and im sure to return the favours as soon as i reach 20 posts.

uppin for votes...........

uppin for votes.........

ill tempa won this better punches...better strucure he gets my vote
the one yo lines were to long and predictable but u got a lil heat