ILL Tempa vs. mjust23
 

RULEZ:

10 line minimum 20 line max.
No crew, hate, d/r, or recycling.
Check in some time today.
Verses due 1 hour after checkin.
You spit first.

Yo, Dogg U Think U Nice//
But U Catch More Balls Den Jerry Rice//
I Kill Cats Like U On Da Daily//
Bite Ya Head Off Come Out Wit Rabies//
U Cant Stop Ma Flow//
I Rap And Go//
Cock Come Out U Blow//
Ma Rhymes R So Silly//
Saw U In Da Mall Last Nite Wit A Cat Named Billy//
Every Rapper Here Could Stop U//
Think U Hard But Try 2 Hard We Gonna Pop U//
Now Spit Ya Verse//
Keep Fuckin Wit Me, U Gonna Be Spiten In A Hearst.

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Like a dried up river, this nigga's got no flow//
It's me against a fag cuz "m's just" a homo//
You say ya flow is "deep" like a castles moat//
But tha only thing deep bout you is ya deep ass throat//
In a quick 5 bars i'll leave ya thoughts in a mess//
Cuz i'm iller than sadaam wit a bomb strapped to his chest//
I'll line you up with bullets from ya feet to ya neck//
Then put a bomb in yo mouth to blow up tha rest//
The only way you'll get votes is if you bargin and deal//
Staight warrior i murder jits if they enter my battlefield.

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Tempa got this one his punches hit harder and made a little more sence to me it was a good battle though upps to mjust. i cant actually vote yet not enough posts but

vote-ILL Tempa

Ill Tempa: I simply loved the flow. Nice vocab and everything. Structure was aight. Punches did damage! Keep it up!

MJust: I'm sorry, but you need to elevate on your vocab and flow. Focus more on punches, they WILL win you some battles.

Vote: ILL TEMPA

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ILL Tempa got this one...practically merk'd tha kid...had the punches, structure, and the vocab in their...this is a ONE-sided vote people...

Vote= ILL Tempa

Ill tempa won this one..it flowed more and the punches were hard..he also hit with alot of mutlis..good battle though.

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Its gotta be Tempa cuz the other cats flow was hella off... how you gone have 3 word lines....just work on yo shit and do more than tell him you'll shoot him...

Tempa good flow punches were good enough to beat this guy.... Hot keep it up...1

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