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-NERVEZ- 06-20-04 10:07 PM

-NERVEZ- vs BigChase
 
:shoot: here it really is

-NERVEZ- 06-20-04 10:20 PM

Big Chase gambled wit his life and now his time is up]
I got this bitch runnin from these raps like his name is Forrest Gump]

I explode on these versus just to make you sicc to your stomach]
I will have you beggin for your death like a dope-feind for money]

Im so quick with this heat to knock your head clean off your shoulders]
I perk up soldiers like folgers, barrel be spittin bullets like boulders]

Your game is like a White muslim, its just straight confusin]
Im to BIG for this battle like Oprah in a jacuzzi]

Big chase swallowing big nuts and he be coo with da chaser]
Shot after shot, until hes filled up,then moves over for facials]


Ea$t_Oakland_Killacali 8900blk



holla back........

-NERVEZ- 06-20-04 10:21 PM

waitin on chaser now.............................................

-NERVEZ- 06-21-04 11:54 PM

is this coward gonna show up................................................ .....

-NERVEZ- 06-23-04 07:30 AM

how do i dq him?.............................................. ...

Decree Wun 06-23-04 07:46 AM

lol he didnt even drop jus get people to vote for u 5-0 and it'll be closed or contact the admins

can u drop an honest vote in this battle?
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=131085

-NERVEZ- 06-23-04 09:09 PM

can i get sum votes on dis hoe show........................

Keith Moon 06-25-04 12:41 PM

dumb fuck i said i was away at a funeral in north cali dumbass..... ill drop later on coz im busy as hell. a person i knew waz robbed an anotha commited suicide so i ghave alot to deal wit

Keith Moon 06-25-04 01:19 PM

This raider must have nervez of steel to battle bigchase*
Hes the facial master thats why hes the mexican with the white face..**
Most of his rhymes dont even rhymes with each other***
Hes supposed to be dope?how many times was this retard dropped by his mother..
Talks about nuts cuz hes insecure about his dick****
Who wouldnt be if yours was less than 2 inches..
Next time you see this kid run yell "Run Nervez Run"*****
Cuz this time he cant hide behind his monitor or toy gun..
You always try to ride dicks but you fall off
Leaving you, 2 inches, and your mom to jack off..

really quick freestyle.
*his names nerves and hes from oakland(raiderz)
**flip of facial line
***some of his words dont rhyme look 4 urself
****flip on his nut line
*****flip on forrest gump line



Sorry bout the wait my grandpa died he was 87 or sumtin and had to go to hiz funeral up in north cali i left the day the battle started and drove there.

Keith Moon 06-25-04 04:44 PM

votes plz uppin 4 votes.....................................

BostonLyricist 06-25-04 05:00 PM

this was crazy close cause nervez came wit it and his flow was on point
big chase had a dominant flow it carried more meaning in his punches

very close battle yall good shit but i vote big chase

Keith Moon 06-25-04 05:29 PM

thnx man ur tight man thnx for the criticsm i need it

God 06-25-04 07:16 PM

this battle was crazy big chase just barely got this...he had some nice flow......nice punchlines and you had some nice personals they were really making some nice sense...multies were str8 but i thought they could have been better....overall you took this battle easily...
punchlines:Bc
multies:tie
personals:Bc
structure:tie

overall vote goes to :Bc

Keith Moon 06-25-04 07:29 PM

thnx man it means alot 2-0 one more for k.o. 1st one ot 3 votes

Wicked One 06-25-04 07:43 PM

Damn....BigChase droped late...but still had a nice verse and plus he had better hard hitin punches.....Plus you had some nice multies and had some personals too...But Nervez you came good too dont get me wrong you had a nice verse and punches but overall big chase got this battle with bettter punches......

v/Big Chase (oh yeah 3 votes does not give you win 5 does it doesnt matter what rules say ...just lookin out fo ya)
Ayo i will poll my vote as soon as you drop an Honest vote in my Sig against DaCroz

Wordz AhGod 06-26-04 02:47 AM

If Nervez would have stopped trying to fill space wit his first lines in every bar, he wouldv gotten my vote. He said shit just cuz they sounded dangerouse and didn go too far. I dont look at structure but I guess his was Ok. his punches werent to good till he hit that Oprah shit. but It still did'nt hit his apponent, he just started a glorification thing. all in all, most of his verse was ok, just needs work.
BigChase gets my vote only becouse his opponent droped it. His flow was ok and so wer his punches. Too me it was anoyying that he put those lil stars at the end of his rymes just to explain his lyrics. If we have doubts about Ur verse, we'll usually ask. thats the greatness of metaphores and punchlines. Ur line punchess wer kinda basic, so we dont realy need the explanations but ok.
all in all, I like Ur verse, U stook to the point and aimed at Ur apponent for real. Keep it thug, and practice kid.

V/BigChase

-NERVEZ- 06-26-04 06:35 AM

Re: battle

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sure but i cant post tomorrow im leavin for the north to go to the funneral
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you saidd u was goin to pos wut happend i did a quik verse n u took days to post u should b dq ......you had time to work on it wasup with these votes......
my evidence is above you said u were goin 2 post n was a hoe show.............

Keith Moon 06-26-04 01:10 PM

no i did it freestyle u complainin bitch......lol ur mad cuz i merked u man.......i was gone from monday to friday and got back the day I posted soooo dont hate cuz im better u had time to do yours As soon as I got bck i saw how dumb you are startin shit when i said ill back back on thrusday to friday!!!!! ask lil scrappy even god! plus LOOK AT THE OTHER NERVEZ BATTLE WHERE UR NAME'S WRONG I SAID ILL BE GONE TIL THURSDAY OR LATA SO CHILL........

-NERVEZ- 06-26-04 04:48 PM

20-04, 04:53 PM
BigChase
Light Weight



Posts: 236
From: Pomona, California
Status: Online
Rapperz: Big Chase

Money: 210
Health: 100
Record: 1-0
Happy: 59%
Level: 1
Re: battle

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sure but i cant post tomorrow im leavin for the north to go to the funneral
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u should hve posted it that day n e wayz i wanna a rematch.my grandfather died 2 weeks ago and i aint askin fo no sympathy votes.........................dis battle has laggd 4 a min............................................... .........

Tempa 06-26-04 04:57 PM

Nervez - Had a good opener and some decent punches. Structurew was good to but some of ya rhymes was strugglin to rhyme.

Big Chase - You were lyrically better than Nervez but your structure was as good.

Vote - Big Chase


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