SUPERVILLAIN (C.S.) vs. DON (MAF.)
 

BIG BAD "CRHYME SINDICATE" versus "MAFIOSO"

the rules of engagement......

no crew votes
no d/r votes
no hate votes
all votes must be explained
10 lines max.
no biting
no recycles
you spit first

.....i asked you to spit tonight, you didnt. so i ask that you give me a little leniency as well. if i cant spit within the next 24 hours, i will after work. no matter what, we're doin' this. your verse is due by 6/21 at 6 p.m. (your request). i'll reply within 6-12 hours from then. good luck.......and follow the rules. one.

s.v. the kingpin......big bad c.s.

yo ur verse is due by midnight tonite it aint fair u get to look at my verse then write yours im not droppin till a new deadline is set and we both have a deadline to drop by so none of us can read each others and do better the verses are due by midnight tonite dont be a bitch villan i got nutin against u

super aint drop yet...hes gota make his prewrites have strucuture and flow...
this aint 8 mile son...sex is the only time you blow...
your a waste of time...an easy meal like lean quisine or stovers...
you dont battle cause your like old pasta...nobody wants the left-overs...
C.S...the biggest C.ock S.uckers on this website...
hes prolly some nerd at home...sittin sayin "wow rap on the net's tite"...
your a kingpin?...please ive seen bigger ones bowling...
and he knows...cause that ball isnt the only ones he likes holding...
your super?...premium is better look at gas prices its cheaper...
this battle is jus like all the cartoons...the villan is weaker...

ur verse id due by 3 tomoro in the mornin since u aint on yet and if its not in by 12 in the afternoon tomoro im getin u dq'd for prewritin no disrespect jus setin down the rule pc

yo wtf? u were online lookin at this for like a half hour then u left wasup with that u need to drop a quick verse like i did dont be afraid to lose damn

(my intro- a stolen black van with no plates pulls into the alley next to chuck e. cheese's pizza parlor. the engine remains running.........)

(my battle verse)
"up shits creek this weekend? im s.v., then welcome to the deep end
pull out my piece and squeeze it...bullet hole put the O 'tween his d.n. (dOn)
ah shit, dons a convict...an o.g....you could say a good ol' parolee
he's done time...'cuz the fugazzi library cards he sold looked phoney
yeah, i'll admit it kid...your recorded spits are important...(psych!)
through the wire of course, when your snitchin' to law enforcement
i wanted to inform you, warn you with some important news...
"exported then deported!!!" italian stallions become imported glue
in front of his weak crew, don got killed in broad daylight...
the mafioso witnessed, testified and relocated the same night"

(my outro- don exits the family fun center and stuffs his prize tickets into his pocket. he seaches his surroundings for any possible threat and notices nothing. once he's beside his beat-up converible caddy, he drops to his knees and looks for c-4. none. once don throws his shades on and fastens his seatbelt...he turns the ignition over. "c.s. propaganda" blars on his 8-track. "oh shit." he whimpers.

BBBOOOOOOMMM!!!!!!

...the black van honks then speeds off. bada-bing.)


supervillain........big bad crhyme sindicate

faggot, stop cryin', damn!!! my comps fuckin' up.

...and its a freetyle pussy.

s.v.......c.s.

hahaha that wasnt bad i liked the intro outro and all that was good but that all jus swayed the battle and made ur verse looked better but i loved it anyway

good lookin' out, i liked your verse too (but some of those lines have already been used against us, no problem though). lets get these votes in cutty. one.

s.v.........big bad c.s.

but yo this sposed to be a crew battle and ur verse wasnt a battle wasup wit that thats why theyre called crew battles o well u admitted it was a freestyle so good luck pc

it wasnt a battle? o-kay. lol. how is this not part of a crew battle?

IT WAS A CREW BATTLE- the disses focused on you and your crew (big laughs)......i had nuthin' writtin so i had to freestyle something up....get it? god i hope so.

(also......the lines i spoke of earlier were used by you. other cats have battled us with the same punchlines....oh well though, im not trippin'. lets get these votes in.)

s.v.

nobody battled u wit the same punchlines quit swayin bitch those punchlines werent used before cause they have nutin to do wit ur crew jus read those punches nobody has used them ur shit was a wack verse the only reason ud get votes is cause u put all that leftover shit wit ur verse so quit swayin the battle

Donsuper aint drop yet...hes gota make his prewrites have strucuture and flow...
this aint 8 mile son...sex is the only time you blow...
ha ha...but a little played now that i think about it
your a waste of time...an easy meal like lean quisine or stovers...
you dont battle cause your like old pasta...nobody wants the left-overs...
ha ha....nice
C.S...the biggest C.ock S.uckers on this website...
hes prolly some nerd at home...sittin sayin "wow rap on the net's tite"...
ha ha....ha
your a kingpin?...please ive seen bigger ones bowling...
and he knows...cause that ball isnt the only ones he likes holding...
ha ha.......aight
your super?...premium is better look at gas prices its cheaper...
this battle is jus like all the cartoons...the villan is weaker...
ok closer

overall you had some punches and personals they hit and made me laugh
overall a good flow ok wordplay not many multis good drop

overall-7./10

S.V

"up shits creek this weekend? im s.v., then welcome to the deep end
pull out my piece and squeeze it...bullet hole put the O 'tween his d.n. (dOn)
aight...
ah shit, dons a convict...an o.g....you could say a good ol' parolee
he's done time...'cuz the fugazzi library cards he sold looked phoney
ha ha this ones funny
yeah, i'll admit it kid...your recorded spits are important...(psych!)
through the wire of course, when your snitchin' to law enforcement
aight....
i wanted to inform you, warn you with some important news...
"exported then deported!!!" italian stallions become imported glue
ok...
in front of his weak crew, don got killed in broad daylight...
the mafioso witnessed, testified and relocated the same night"
aight closer

aight overall i wasnt feelin your verse...to be truthful i only liked the
intro and outro......funny shit i think you could of came harder in this battle

overall-6.5/10

vote-don

drop an honest one on this
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=130009

thanks for the feedback man uppin.................

uppin.............................................

iight lets break it down...

sv my fav verse.."up shits creek this weekend? im s.v., then welcome to the deep end
pull out my piece and squeeze it...bullet hole put the O 'tween his d.n. (dOn)
that was hott but fo real that was the only vs i laughed at ...you didnt have that much multis you had a few punches but it was a little weak man..keep elevatin though...

Don...your a kingpin?...please ive seen bigger ones bowling...
and he knows...cause that ball isnt the only ones he likes holding...
thats one of the best verses i heard..umm besides that you had harder punches...better multis too...

aight thanks for the feedback uppin again lets get some votes on here dont sleep

yo, this was a tight battle. But I think Don won by a little.

SV, you had a tight verse. You had some hot punches in their. Liked your opener "Creek" one. Nice shit. Yuor flow was pretty good too. It did however go ogg in a few places. I also, think your vocab usauge was pretty gfood, too. Overall tight verse.

Don, you had a nice verse. You had some real hard hittin' punches, like the Kingpin one. Yuor flow was awesome. I felt it throughout the whole verse. Good job. Your vocab was aiight, but it was basic in some areas. You came a little harder than SV. good job

v/Don

uppin dont let this sleep come on we need more votes uppin

uppin this shit fo my homey Villain...showin my support...that shit was hot i was feelin the intro outro shit....holla atcha boy..........1........CHRYME SINDICATE BITCHES....
GET AT US...YA'LL DONT WANT IT...

DON- that was a good drop...yo punches was good & they connected...the structure was aight...and tha flow went along wit the structure which was good also..

SUPERVILLIAIN-punches didnt hit hard.....nothing.... i just didnt feel your verse..yo punches was good...but not hard enuff to take this battle..

Vote- Don

uppin.............................................

uppin i guess i survived the car bomb huh villan haha that stuff is funny chukee cheese

aight lemme break it down

s.v u had a nice verse good flow nice structure nice personals and tha punches were good everything was good in yur verse
DON u had a great flow good structure..yur shit was jokes had humor good personals and punches were good
yall both dropped it like its hot so ye close battle
but ye this vote goes to.....
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V/DON