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-NERVEZ v C.M.F.S
da battle :laugh:
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IP: A88B F94E
here's mine... nerves couldn't spit shit even if he deserved it got the urge to throw verses but his nerves wont give the surges perves on girls coz when he get real one he hurls regurges herbs from the guy he just gave head to on the curb he slurs a turd on the ground and says dinners served rewords a verb to sound a way it's never been heard rehearses the words from the hospital bed with his nurse to hurt to reverse what's been lyrically said in his last curse mutha fuckers be callin ya clinically dead when ya pass words way ya talkin like ya instantly bread a wack nerd __________________ CURRENT BATTLES C.M.F.S vs NERVEZ ILLunitic vs C.M.F.S C.M.F.S vs VALOR ________________________ [IMG][/IMG] C.M.F.S music |
Flyweight
From: EastOaklandCalifornia Status: Online IP: 12CA C5E8 whoa i didnt see this battle till now...............here i go though................ Now here is a new bitch thats tryin to test my NERVEZ] His name says it all C.ant M.ake F.emales S.quirt] Hes a failure,a coward, and his flows have no style] So i beat this bitch down like a red headed step child] He claims to be a killa, but in his soul is a HOMO] Battle me you comin up short like asians in black PORNOs] So as this bitch spits a line nuthin but utter dissapointment] It just wasnt meant to be like MIKE fukin wit Macullay Culkin] This hoe buckles under pressure like a one leggd weight lifter] C.M.F.S. is a wasted product like rollin Bammer up in a swisher] C.ant M.ake da F.inal S.trech.... |
i fixd da battle now we just need sum votes...........
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uppin 4 sum votes............................................. ..
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votez.................. please vote,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,
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Nevez won this piece...hardly saw any punches from CMFS..tha structure
goes to nervez since his was out side 'n' shit...*close yo shit nxt time*... the vocab was a draw since i could read both verses good..but nervez got this one since he had harder punches than CMFS....peace.... |
can we geta vote on dis plse...................................
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vote please............................................ .......................we need sum votes
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more votes plse.............................................. ...
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can we get sum votes plse.................................
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c.m.f.s:
nerves couldn't spit shit even if he deserved it got the urge to throw verses but his nerves wont give the surges ^^2nd line stretched decent opener 5/10 perves on girls coz when he get real one he hurls regurges herbs from the guy he just gave head to on the curb ^^stretched and forced weak punch 3/10 he slurs a turd on the ground and says dinners served rewords a verb to sound a way it's never been heard ^^filler and weak 4/10 rehearses the words from the hospital bed with his nurse to hurt to reverse what's been lyrically said in his last curse ^^good w/p bad punch 6/10 mutha fuckers be callin ya clinically dead when ya pass words way ya talkin like ya instantly bread a wack nerd ^^weak closer good w/p 5/10 overall : 23/50 (46%) nervez: Now here is a new bitch thats tryin to test my NERVEZ] His name says it all C.ant M.ake F.emales S.quirt] ^^good personal and punch 7/10 Hes a failure,a coward, and his flows have no style] So i beat this bitch down like a red headed step child] ^^lol good shyt nice punch 7/10 He claims to be a killa, but in his soul is a HOMO] Battle me you comin up short like asians in black PORNOs] ^^decent meta good punch 6/10 So as this bitch spits a line nuthin but utter dissapointment] It just wasnt meant to be like MIKE fukin wit Macullay Culkin] ^^kinda weak 4/10 This hoe buckles under pressure like a one leggd weight lifter] C.M.F.S. is a wasted product like rollin Bammer up in a swisher] ^^weak also 4/10 overall : 28/50 (56%) vote: nervez ~!1!~ |
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c.m.f.s:
nerves couldn't spit shit even if he deserved it got the urge to throw verses but his nerves wont give the surges ^^2nd line stretched decent opener 5/10 perves on girls coz when he get real one he hurls regurges herbs from the guy he just gave head to on the curb ^^stretched and forced weak punch 3/10 he slurs a turd on the ground and says dinners served rewords a verb to sound a way it's never been heard ^^filler and weak 4/10 rehearses the words from the hospital bed with his nurse to hurt to reverse what's been lyrically said in his last curse ^^good w/p bad punch 6/10 mutha fuckers be callin ya clinically dead when ya pass words way ya talkin like ya instantly bread a wack nerd ^^weak closer good w/p 5/10 overall : 23/50 (46%) nervez: Now here is a new bitch thats tryin to test my NERVEZ] His name says it all C.ant M.ake F.emales S.quirt] ^^good personal and punch 7/10 Hes a failure,a coward, and his flows have no style] So i beat this bitch down like a red headed step child] ^^lol good shyt nice punch 7/10 He claims to be a killa, but in his soul is a HOMO] Battle me you comin up short like asians in black PORNOs] ^^decent meta good punch 6/10 So as this bitch spits a line nuthin but utter dissapointment] It just wasnt meant to be like MIKE fukin wit Macullay Culkin] ^^kinda weak 4/10 This hoe buckles under pressure like a one leggd weight lifter] C.M.F.S. is a wasted product like rollin Bammer up in a swisher] ^^weak also 4/10 overall : 28/50 (56%) vote: nervez was a pretty clos battle but nervez won that fair Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. WRITE YOUR OWN FEEDBACK INSTEAD OF COPYING IT!! |
yo mayn, u both did aight, both had structure, vocab, i like how C.M.F.S's rymez all had the er sound, nom sizlaxin? u both did good, but ima have to go with C.M.F.S on this one. werd
vote= C.M.F.S |
-NERVES- .:va:. C.M.F.S
werd that's what i was goin for....
uppin fpr votes...please |
what happend to my vote?..........................................
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NERVEZ v C.M.F.S
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will check all battle by you and i vote fair... even if i'm not that good i still know what good is i've been listenin to the shit long enough... |
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Nerves - okay shit i like ur past battles more then this one coulda done beter...
C.M.F.S - nice nice good punches! nice structure.. vote// C.M.F.S |
get rid of envee vote not explaind.......................................
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-NERVEZ- .:vs:. C.M.F.S
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uppin please vote............................................
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take envees vte off.................votes please..
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i would have to give this 2 nervous because all of his lines were attckes and he used plenty of punchlines.
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NRVZ undisputed...he was clownin on cmfs......better punches andpersonalls
cmfs nice job to man but u should of had a better stucture with some punches that hit so when sumone like me reads it they b amazd |
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C.M.F.S - Weak punches & flow, but good wordplay 5/10
Nervez - Better spit, better punches, overall better verse 6.5/10 VOTE....Nervez please vote on the battles in my sig...peace... |
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