damaged1 vs Gods Son
 

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no hatin/ dr
no crew votes

i'll spit first ...

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Damaged1's Too smalL HE can’t EVEN *SHOOT-HOOPS*/ HE tried GOING Out with-a-chick BUT SHE LEFT SAYIN “YA DICK IS SO SMALL IT CAN FIT IN to *FRUIT-LOOPS*
WE all WONDERING, WHO’S-THIS-GUY, IS It *A*MYSTERY?*/ HE MUST HAVE *BAD-HISTORY*, CUZ he ALL UP IN MA FACE whEn I SAY I -THINK-I-KNOW- AS if HE WAS *KISSING-ME*
CHiLDs TRynA *DEFEND-HIS-ERECTUM* CUZ I LYRCALY STICK MY FOOT UP HIS ASS AND *BEND-IT-LIKE-BECKHAM*/
I Leave ya *MIND-FRIED* & *RHYME-TIED* when ya *LINES-GRIND* like *SPASTICS*/ JuST LET MY *time-unwind* the Only *CRIME-DEFINED* used AGAINST YOU like *FAT-ASSES* in *GYMNASTICS*/
Are you kidding me with the name *Damaged1*?/ Son watch out,i shine like the *sun* no the numba 1 is gon' stick a fork in you cuz now ya *DONE*

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I spit plenty punches to pierce thru your brains with .speed. …
while dismantle your mantle with blazin rhymes until your neck drips with gasoline. …ok....could of been better
acceptin my callout? I got gats the size of you that can easily .snap you.. …
only way your catchin cases is when your fans throw yo demos back .at’chu. …ha ha....funny shit
I rip heavily thru fraud clowns when spittin too many bullets to .clap me. …
How are you god’s son ? when you only here cuase im your foster daddy. …
ha ha...again funny shit...nice personal
My raps style .drastic. leavin niggas buried and wrapped up in .plastic. …
Wit spit .taktikz. that’ll chop you up like .cabbage. and leave you turned over in .caskets. …ok...nice
Im rippin open your internal glands with quick punches and a .low kick. …
Your style is dead,dating a gurl wit no breasts is the only way you’ll get .no-tits. … (noticed)alright nice closer

you had some nice punches up in there.....overall nice drop just work
on using personals

7.0/10

Gods son
Damaged1's Too smalL HE can’t EVEN *SHOOT-HOOPS*/ HE tried GOING Out with-a-chick BUT SHE LEFT SAYIN “YA DICK IS SO SMALL IT CAN FIT IN to *FRUIT-LOOPS*..ha ha funny....but not really a punch
WE all WONDERING, WHO’S-THIS-GUY, IS It *A*MYSTERY?*/ HE MUST HAVE *BAD-HISTORY*, CUZ he ALL UP IN MA FACE whEn I SAY I -THINK-I-KNOW- AS if HE WAS *KISSING-ME*...ok....no punch
CHiLDs TRynA *DEFEND-HIS-ERECTUM* CUZ I LYRCALY STICK MY FOOT UP HIS ASS AND *BEND-IT-LIKE-BECKHAM*/
I Leave ya *MIND-FRIED* & *RHYME-TIED* when ya *LINES-GRIND* like *SPASTICS*/ JuST LET MY *time-unwind* the Only *CRIME-DEFINED* used AGAINST YOU like *FAT-ASSES* in *GYMNASTICS*/..ha ha...ok
Are you kidding me with the name *Damaged1*?/ Son watch out,i shine like the *sun* no the numba 1 is gon' stick a fork in you cuz now ya *DONE*
nice closer

you had some good punches in there...but some lines could of been better
again use personals.....personals are a straight diss to your opp. nice drop
but overall....6.5/10

vote-Damaged1

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http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=130467

lets go..uppn for votes..please

damaged1 - hey u had sum syik punchez, flowd well.. and i enjoyd it all tha way..

godz son - had fewer punchez, didnt feel much.. didnt flo al da wayy...

i tynk both ov u'z shud work on ur personalz.. coz dat will get u 2 win...
both wer gud buh i preferd damaged1'z coz it wuz betta...

my vote: DAMAGED1. peace

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aiyo, that was hot but imma have to give it up to damage1, cause his punches were better...his flow was also better,

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hey who u sayin thanx 2???????? me???? lolz
u betta b.......... yo am jokin... lolz

damage: you had some good punches in there...you had the structure *since ur shit is so small*..and the flow was good...6/10

gods: first of all get rid of the ( * ) shit is annoyin...u had some ok punches they could of been harder..and the structure wasn't all that good...kinda chop'd up 'n' shit...(elevate more)...5/10

v/ damage

aight neither had flows i think they both came weak and damage i know u can do better than that but ima give it to damage he came weak but managed to win
v/damage

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still uppin for votes dont sleep on this we need voters..please...

i think gods son had this.damages verse was played out rhymes bout him bein his daddy.i kno u can up wit good punches so jus think more int he future battles.damage u need work on strucutre so ur lines arent stretched out.and work on personals and flow. gods son not bad better punches. most werent that great but its aight u had a good strucutre and good flow but some of ur lines were stretched.close battle but im gona go wit gods son cause he had harder punches

v/gods son
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http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=130756

opener: gods son
punches: damage
flow: gods son
multies: gods son
closer: damage

overall: gods son (close battler but weak..feel me)

yo, i was feelin gods son a little more

damaged1-good all a round battle, i little more on da punches and u woulda got ma vote

god son-appelead a little more
v/gods son

yea but the votes were messed up they didnt explain them well enough..i dunno i was surprised it was open too

Nice
 

Nicely done by both of you. I could read both verses and didnt get lost. Good job. But in a battle only one person can win. I wish I could vote for both but I cant. My vote goes to Damaged1 he came harder and had more punches. God Son keep it up man you got talent! PEACE
|~WuN~|

Shit
 

SHit I fucked up... I read Damaged1's verse thinkin it was God Sons... so lemme fix it I meant I voted God Son but Damaged1 had talent and did a nice job. I do not know how I got confused prolly cuz I am tried but anyways my vote goes to God SOn. Nice Job
|~WuN~|

Im gonna have to go with Damaged on this one. His structure was better, flows and rhymez too. Overall, he did a better job that Gods.

God, work on your structure. Make sure that your lines have the same amount of syllables or at least make them close, otherwise the rhymes will be off. Rap outloud.

vote- damage

damaged got this.. even though he made his font smaller so his lines didnt look stretched.. still he merked the other guy.. better punches and flow go to damaged.. and so does my vote

Damaged1
dont put the periods around the words that rhyme...it gets really annoying...structure wasnt good...most of ur lines were stretched...flow fell off due to the wackness ur structure had...u had some metas...a few of ur lines had wordplay...but where the hell r ur punches...i dont wanna read about u killin people wit gats and puttin them into caskets...those arent punches...only 2 of ur lines had punches...u had 1 personal as well...

Gods son
dont put the ** and the - - around ur words...thats newbish...so drop that shit...structure wasnt good...all of ur lines were stretched...flow fell off due to the stretchness....u had tight metas...wordplay was also pretty tight...u had a few punches...and i saw 1 personal...

Overall
both had a wack structure...and a wack flow...both also had 2 punches, and one personals...Gods son had way more metas...and way better wordplay...so basing off of that...Gods son gets my vote in this close battle...

VOTE - GODS SON

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