-NERVEZ v damaged1
 

10 line anything goes due by tonite

All hatin gonna stop this instant]
Damaged got hit from a distance cuz my dawgs r persistent]

Dont get caught up in the moment, or shot up down in Oakland]
Damaged1 da product of a smoker, and killin dis bitch is my motive]

One been damaged gettin ravishd by faggots]
liquid courage is the only reason that this bitch act like a savage]

Damaged1 think he the shit but he no competition]
so i put a whole up in his spine like fuk sendin shivers]

This hoes flows are garbage so that makes me da thrashman]
He be that fag up in the club pussy poppin on a handstand]


tour turn.......spit

oops i spelld hole wrong[whole]oh well yall get da pic ........

wher in da town u from damage1.
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NERVEZ: You need to elevate on your vocabulary, you need a dictionary bro.
5/10 I have seen better from you, practice!

Damage1: Your flow wasn't as good, but since your punches were way better than Nervez, you take the win.

Vote: Damage1

PLease return the favors. THANK YOU!
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=130763

this battle was extremely weak....

Nerves you text like you're freestyling, focused on mutli's and palyed disses, with no original material at all.... try using a punch here and there, works good for battles... you really should seek elevation help to get up to par. You have some skillz, but text is different and you need to approach it different. Use witty wordplay and puns to create a punch and an "oooh" effect. Your shit was basic.

damage - not much better, but i see a hint of wit in your verse... all that 'nine' and 'bless ya spine' shit needs to go, it's garbage, but this line:

"Why waste good bars on this clown? it’s obvious this kat’s rhymes is .shook. …
Don’t tell kats you’re from Oakland,how da fuck u think that’ll make me .look. … ?"

shows you know how to use sarcasm to hurt your opponent. Weak battle guys, but damage gets my vote. For one punch. I can help both of you reach potential, just hit me up. pz

Vote: -NERVEZ-

Reasons:

1. Hella More Vocab, Not As Simple As damaged1
2. Had Slightly Iller Punches (No Eye Openers)
3. -NERVEZ- bars flowed better, easier flow..feel me

Overall This Wasn't A Good Battle, Nothin Great.

ya thx u toop but u still aint said where u from in oakland blood......i did freestyle i spent no time on it

listen from what i ~seen~ your both doing your {thing.}
Punch lines comming from both sides..making me {bleed.}
Testing my wings, God give me the judgment to {proceed}
I loved the battle both opponents had words to show {me}
but since this is a rap site i'll do it through my {flowing}

First of all nerve I cant take nothing from you,...
You spit /nice/
This is 5mic and im gone tell you shit /right/
I like how you started out in the begining using (persistent)
kind of reminds me of how i do when im on a (mission)
Your flowing tactic still got room to grow ,so you can /build up/
Im not trying to diss you with time son you will be /iller/
But I understood what you wrote so keep your/ shield up/
and never drop your [guard]...Its haters out there waiting for the [star] <meaning you>
These are words from my ~heart~

And Damaged1, I cant take nothing from you /niether./
I read your flow and had to step back an take a /breather./
~Wondering~,
Your punch lines where hoter then the sun combined with a {comet.}
Your flowing wasn't as strong,but you know it's always {something.}
The words you used in this battle could have been spit different, or /rearanged/
Dont get mad at the mic son you got more to /gain/.
knowledge is what you get when you drop your pride and {sweat}
To your chest to let the whole world know you gone be the {best}
Im not here to diss any one ,Both your flows were weak
But the best punch lines came from damaged1

{verdict}
damaged1

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.....Nervez is my vote becuz he had a slightly harder punches than damage...
the flow was betta than damages...and the structure was betta than his...
no simple shit tho...so Nervez gets my vote since his punches were a little
bit harder than damages...peace....

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nervez:

All hatin gonna stop this instant]
Damaged got hit from a distance cuz my dawgs r persistent]
^^good bar hard punch and W/P but its stretched like fuck 6/10
Dont get caught up in the moment, or shot up down in Oakland]
Damaged1 da product of a smoker, and killin dis bitch is my motive]
^^good meta and hard punch 7/10
One been damaged gettin ravishd by faggots]
liquid courage is the only reason that this bitch act like a savage]
^^good punch stretched again 5/10
Damaged1 think he the shit but he no competition]
so i put a whole up in his spine like fuk sendin shivers]
^^decent punch bars dont really rhyme tho 4/10
This hoes flows are garbage so that makes me da thrashman]
He be that fag up in the club pussy poppin on a handstand]
^^LMFAO!! hottest bar in this verse 10/10

overall : 32/50 (64%)

damaged1:

Why waste good bars on this clown? it’s obvious this kat’s rhymes is .shook. …
Don’t tell kats you’re from Oakland,how da fuck u think that’ll make me .look. … ?
^^good w/p but bad punch 5/10
Im the .illest lyricst. Rippin niggas like 4 stabs with a .switch blade. …
Cuasin an urban distrurbance so the people .lurkin. can realize that yo .shits played. …
^^stretched and kinda weak 4/10
-hmmmm,lets switch style-
Yes Verse Lased Wit Linez,Like Throwin Toxic Clockz In Thrash Dis Battle Jus A Waste Of Tyme. …
Lyrical Explosion Of lines Is Tha Face Of Mine,My Inclind Mind, Rewindz Time, To Reverse Ya Hexed Nine,Den Bless Ya Spine. …
^^hott multies and w/p but stretched like fuck no punches that are nice 3/10
I’ll Drop Yo Rhymes From Heavy .Weights. Like Anorizic Kids Liftin Hundred Platez. …
Forget The .Rates.,When Your Life’s At .Stake. I got Plenty .Traits. To Make The Endin on this battle no .Debate. …
^^all filler 0/10

overall : 12/40

vote: nervez

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Aaah

Nerves - No man your structure sucked which fucked up ur flow and fucked up ur punches... Not good it was weak...

Nerves 1 bar -

All hatin gonna stop this instant]
Damaged got hit from a distance cuz my dawgs r persistent]

//\\
WTF?? No dawg...

Damged1 - Nice word play some shit was ok some shit was eeh? but i liked ur flow and structure i think u won this in my eyes

Damged1 1st Bar - Why waste good bars on this clown? it’s obvious this kat’s rhymes is .shook. …
Don’t tell kats you’re from Oakland,how da fuck u think that’ll make me .look.

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Nice u flipped it...


V/ Dameged1

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good battle u guys . two competors from Oakland interestin/damaged1 u had nice flows and a good structure but yo only decent line was your first bar man u need to throw some punches out there u threww way to few/yo lyrics had a good flow tyo...
nervez nice shit to i think u won it on consitency of punches..good stucture easy to read and better voicab

ay yo is that u xtasy (nervez) how u doin u kicked this guyz ass so iam a vite for u

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aiyo peeps can you vote on these for me.......
Me vs RV
Me vs Illiance
Me vs BostonLyricist

I think NERVEZ's spit was better, Damaged1 had good punches but i think NERVEZ took it with better wordplay...

VOTE - NERVEZ

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