Premanition vs. da pimp
 

10-15 lines
no recycling
no biting

you spit first

this kids a pimp?...ha...stop bitch...look around and think...
we all know u a newb wiv an attitude, addicted to makin links....(called out every1)
thick as fuck, you got NO brain span...battlin using ma name man...
this kid must av been hittin the can...callin me out?...ur ma biggest fan....(check link)
came here with his head held high....but get hung wiv ya best tie...
from 'below' I watch u die...so u n ya 'high' altitude can forever comply....
only duck wen u suck...pussy likes songs wiv a pitched hook....
yo y'all this guy 'da pimp' but its the ladies sayin 'slap ya bitch up'....
should know beta than to mess...wiv a vet that will leave u in distress...
now to warm down...like reversed exercises...get the knife 'UP-n-PRESS'...

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=130992 - used my name

uppin

i'ma leave dis dude lyricaly bruis'd n ripp'd//
i'ma real "G", lookin fa a fag ta toss off da cliff//
u aint good enuff ta bang wit a boss,u wanna b on but i'm leavin u off,i don't know da word for it but u more den soft//
and i aint racist but i'm puttin dudes n gas chambers like da haulicaust//
yea das rite i'm General hang wit crookz n criminalz dat'll leave six shotz n ya genitalz//
it's more den a rap jus say it'z da end of u//
i'll leave u in da hospital sippin on chemicalz//

uppin for votes

ima have to go wit prem wit this one.. cause his verse was more complex.. da pimp, urs ok to, but you had a real simple word usage, and rhyme scheme..and gangster themes are played, and annoying.. to me, all i see when i see gunplay, is filler =/...

my vote goes to prem like i said...

v/premonition

uppin............................................. ............

yea, i agree with hoops. Gansta rap don't belong on the internet, we don't even know you.
you could be crippled for all we know. but prem took it because of his flow and personals. i give him my vote too

2-0....

uppin.....................................

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I'll vote on your if you vote on mines below

Vote goes to preminition. Da pimp probly aint no gangsta like Hoops and Horus said and overall Preminition had dis one. Flow was tight, punches was cool and overall just finished da pimp.
To da pimp all i got to say is dont spit no gangsta shit cuz it just aint right on da net dog, on da streetz let dat shit just go. I gotta give it to you though yo shit was tight. Like they said, You cant be makin threatz when u dont even know da youngin but keep doin wat you do playa.

Vote= Preminition.
( Vote on Plustwo vs. Me when you get da chance) 0-0

^^^^thanx for the vote but his shit was tight? it was the most simple pile of shit i think i've ever read!!!!

uppin................

Hah hah, well it wasnt all dat bad. He gets a fuckin A for effort. Im out. Dont 4get 2 vote on ma battle dog.
( think i heard da pimps shit somewhere before)

Awww, you should vote for the other guy, im some shit.

IIIIIIIIIMmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm Reeeeeeeeeeeeaaaaaaaaaaaaaallllllllllllllllllllly GGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA AAAAAAAAAAYyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy

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uppin

Da P. had some ok flow at the end, but it was just running its mouth. I love a good gangster theme, as long as its not just "ABOUT" guns. I aint a gangsta but I'll speak on guns and knives, half of the shit U and I say aint even real shit that we either did, or could do. Its part of the fictional side of Hip Hop. Now Back to the voteing shit.
Da pimp could have tried a lil harder. It should've used actual punches and shit. Its metas wer basic. the end was the best part but it also breaks its chances of winning after U read the whole verse cuz it aint about shit. Oh yeah, we dont care that Ur gay, if U spit ok thats fine, but Like Clinton said, "Dont ask, Dont tell" we dont wanna know becouse were not interested. dis is a rap site, not a gayclub or place to pick up guys or bitches, nah mean. chill wit that. its getting old.
Premanition over all whooped Ur ass. He started to fall of at the end but still ended up being better than U in all aspect conserning: flow, Punchlines, and metaphores. He also took the time to research his opponent which showed that he was actually aiming at U. not at anybody that he battle were ever. That was good shit.
V/Premanition

uppin one vote...........................................

one vote to kill this off finally...................................

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this kids a pimp?...ha...stop bitch...look around and think...
we all know u a newb wiv an attitude, addicted to makin links....(called out every1)
^Nice Clean Cutt Opener..!! lol.. 8/10

should know beta than to mess...wiv a vet that will leave u in distress...
now to warm down...like reversed exercises...get the knife 'UP-n-PRESS'...
^And Nice Use Of Multie.. !!!! Straight Closer' ..!!!!! 9/10 ....

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i'ma leave dis dude lyricaly bruis'd n ripp'd//
i'ma real "G", lookin fa a fag ta toss off da cliff//
^Sad Opener...!!!! Fucked Up Structure' .. !!! 2/10

yea das rite i'm General hang wit crookz n criminalz dat'll leave six shotz n ya genitalz//
it's more den a rap jus say it'z da end of u//
i'll leave u in da hospital sippin on chemicalz//
^Got To Give 'Em Credit For Trying Though.. lol..... 4/10 Safe Closer

prem won hands down