mC RIOT vs. damaged1
 

10-15 lines
no cheating
no crew/hate votes
due in 1 hr

check...spit dat shit man

quick keystyle, i switched my style up a bit, lets see how it works ...

I’m Conjesting This Vortex! Bitch, Im Fukkin This Whore Next Im Known To Surpass Your Level Like Fukkin Drugs-Blessed …
He Claim Gangsta So This Thug’s Next, Riot Claim To Be Sick… After Infected Needles With “Blood-Tests …
This Hoe’s Spared He Spoke Impared I Neglect Bitches[Appearance N Leave Him “Proned-N-Scared. …
I’m Dope Here! And In-TiMe Will Propel Bitch To His [Hometown] To Prove That He’s Going “No-Where. …
I’m Infected G! We Got Separate Dreams!! Riot States That He Legend To Rap Battles But Only When He “Wreck-The-Keys
I’ll Cut Ya Flesh For Free! But Riot’s ‘Shit’ Is Blessed Only When He Forced On Molesting-Priests. … (ouch)
I Bomb Ya Fags Your Drama Lacks! Bitch Isn’t [Gifted]! N Just That Proves He Don’t Belong-In-(W)Rap. …
I’m Stronger Man!! Plus The Only Time This [Bitch] ‘Flows Wit Fury’ Is When (S)He On-The-Rag. …

Im done , your turn ...

damage wins bcause of his flow punches and structure. good shit.

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aiyo
 

Da whole time u were rhymin, I came to a conclusion/
Your "new style" is so wack, it causes da whole world confusion/
Your lines are fucked up, like Oprah doin sex up da butt/
I got a question about your verse and that is.....whut?/
If I were to give u a tip about spittin your shit in lines of ten/
It would be simply, read a fuckin dictionary, and make some sense/
It's easy to see that your shit isnt even close to bein worthy/
In this TRIAL of styles, I'll let u pick da witnesses, judge, and jury/
So here's your SENTENCE, u get your whole life in PRISON/
For bein a whack lyricist, like a nerd, your "punches" are missin/
I could bring a doped up clown in this battle and say that it was me/
Wit my pen and paper, I'll kick this nigga and punch out his buck teeth/
So finally, end of discussion, period, I'ma make sure this dude's dead/
Riot's makin sure he's DAMAGED and he's only got negative ONE lives left/
:nono:

how can that vote count if dat nigga voted before i spit? dumbass...

[size=3][font=arial narrow]Fuck that pussy ass vote that was givin to damage...it should be 0-0 now...but anyway mC RIOT got this one...his punches was just harder than damages..he basically had everything...tha punches,tha flow,tha structure & tha vocab...mC got this one...so my vote goes to mC RIOT....peace

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yeah i got Strobe on that already and he should take that vote away....uppin for more REAL votes

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Shit they both came hard wit it props on tryin somethin new damaged one but on this immaa go wit Riot he brought one wit dis verse good punches,flow,and style....props to both ya'll ...........check my battles out wit ohnest vote oh yeah Cythis aint showin but check n e ways hollaaaaaa potnas

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Damage
in normal size-
I’m Conjesting This Vortex! Bitch, Im Fukkin This Whore Next Im Known To Surpass Your Level Like Fukkin Drugs-Blessed …
He Claim Gangsta So This Thug’s Next, Riot Claim To Be Sick… After Infected Needles With “Blood-Tests …
stretched. blood/sik line played. 1st line is out of context. 3/10
This Hoe’s Spared He Spoke Impared I Neglect Bitches[Appearance N Leave Him “Proned-N-Scared. …
I’m Dope Here! And In-TiMe Will Propel Bitch To His [Hometown] To Prove That He’s Going “No-Where. …
stretched. ok wordplay. still doesnt make much sense. any of it. 5/10
I’m Infected G! We Got Separate Dreams!! Riot States That He Legend To Rap Battles But Only When He “Wreck-The-Keys
I’ll Cut Ya Flesh For Free! But Riot’s ‘Shit’ Is Blessed Only When He Forced On Molesting-Priests. … (ouch)
stretched. ok personal, second time u used summin blessed. priests are played. 4/10
I Bomb Ya Fags Your Drama Lacks! Bitch Isn’t [Gifted]! N Just That Proves He Don’t Belong-In-(W)Rap. …
I’m Stronger Man!! Plus The Only Time This [Bitch] ‘Flows Wit Fury’ Is When (S)He On-The-Rag. …
the present/gift wrap/rap deal is played. stretched. bein on the rag, played 4/10

Change your structure and post in normal size. You'll realize that it doesn't flow. Your one line is like a bar. Alot of this didn't make sense either. Most was out of context as in bad use of worthless an meaningless vocabulary. Basicly what Im sayin is you just used words to make multi's and you really didn't make much sense. I felt like Ive seen all these lines before. No hate. Just come more creative.
16/40

Riot
Da whole time u were rhymin, I came to a conclusion/
Your "new style" is so wack, it causes da whole world confusion/
Feed. No no. 1/10
Your lines are fucked up, like Oprah doin sex up da butt/
I got a question about your verse and that is.....whut?/
fed metiphore. 1/10
If I were to give u a tip about spittin your shit in lines of ten/
It would be simply, read a fuckin dictionary, and make some sense/
tru again. but all it is is feeding. 1/10
It's easy to see that your shit isnt even close to bein worthy/
In this TRIAL of styles, I'll let u pick da witnesses, judge, and jury/
another feed. 1/10
So here's your SENTENCE, u get your whole life in PRISON/
For bein a whack lyricist, like a nerd, your "punches" are missin/
played.not feelin this. 2/10
I could bring a doped up clown in this battle and say that it was me/
Wit my pen and paper, I'll kick this nigga and punch out his buck teeth/
kinda funny if he has them. personal. simple. 4/10
So finally, end of discussion, period, I'ma make sure this dude's dead/
Riot's makin sure he's DAMAGED and he's only got negative ONE lives left/
personal. so-so. 3/10
suprised. thought you would jump all over the chance to win this one. I think you should have. And I would have loved to vote for you. But the fact you fed in 75% of your verse forced me to score you so low. You definitly should have oen this. Don't feed any more and you will.
13/70

Vote/Damaged

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uppin.....this is an old ass battle wit a lot of views and only 3 votes....get y'alls votes on....we will return da favor!

aiight, close... damaged had a decent verse, the infected needles bit was prolly yo best line, it was pretty complex, but riot still took this battle, i think damaged was workin on complexity of the rhyme instead of straght up punches.

riot yo verse was not bad, opened and got straght 2 it wit a personal, yo end was pretty weak, but u still came wit an alrite verse anyway.. thats why u got this son.

vote-mc riot


ay, one of u should return tha favor and vote on the battle in my sig 2 finish it off. aiight

this was a tite battle u both came hard n u both were creative and had good metaz, in my opinion damaged hit harder and his punches connected better

v - damaged

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damaged1:

i was really feeling your verse good wordplay and multies...you had some hott punches but the rest of your punches were just mediocre and i think you could elevate there... your structure suffered alot...some lines were stretched and/or forced...even with the bad structure your flow was pretty consistent decent verse from you could have been better use personals next time

overall : 6.5/10

mc riot:

overall i think your verse was pretty basic for the most part your first 3 bars were thoughtless there was a good consistent flow to them but they could have obviously been better...your opener is supposed to be one of the hottest bars so people will be intrigued to read and/or vote on the battle...so your first half of your verse was really weak...you picked up momentum on the second part and had some good punhes but not good enough to win elevate also use personals!!!

overall : 5.5/10

vote: damaged1

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